Constructive criticism required for my Seo website?

I don't think it looks bad, looks good, just a little blah. Think it's because all the text is the same, no formatting or much white space. Just so "bunched" together.

Mostly in the side bar, your info, needs to formatting, little white space. Of course your most important information. Same for the opt-in. Does the Aksimet do anything for your site? Does it help in any way? If it doesn't help, should it be there?

Might want to re-read your bottom paragraphs, lot of the same words repeated.

Might want to changed "Home" at the top to a exciting headline, to get them hooked to read more.

Might want to take out the powered by, your a pro right?

I think your off to a great start, but a little blah.

Of course, just my opinions.

I though it was nice and particularly liked the video. However, it seems to tail off a bit at the end with lots of "What if?" questions. "What if I was affordable?". I don't know. Are you affordable?

One thing you certainly need to do is stop all the ads for your competitors appearing at the end of you video. Append ?rel=0 at the end of the video url to suppress related videos. Otherwise you're providing free advertising for your competitors on your site.

This is a nice website in my opinion especially considering that it is your first wordpress site. I would say that you did an amazing job.

The design is simple and easy on the eyes. If you leave the website as is i think it would be ok but thats not why you are here you want to improve it so here are my suggestions.
(Ps i dont have much time to write this and i wont be proofreading the post )

1)As mentioned above me stop the youtube from showing recommended videos.

2)Home Page has too much information in my opinion. You listed every service you provide and the description of the service on the homepage. Home Page should say what your site is about and grab the visitors attention and point them in the right direction.. Your video alone does a good job of that, i think you should just edit the video to say to find out more about each of the services i offer click on the services tab (something something along those lines).

3) You should have a page for each service you offer, it will help your SEO and give your visitors a much better understanding of the service you are offering which will increase your close rate! You should assume that your client is completely clueless about the services you offer. So If you had a full page dedicated to SEO content writing you can explain what SEO contant writing is, how it will benefit their keyword rankings, How this will benefit their business, and then explain how long you have been doing this and yoru pricing.

4)Bottom of the website where it says Proudly Powered by Word Press...get rid of that and add copyright message. You can easily edit it by going to Appearance-> Editor-> Footer , ....hit ctrl+f and search powered by ...delete that and add your copyright message.

Looks pretty good, but you MUST get rid of the "Home" title on the home page. Create a catchy headline or just take it out all together.

Hey Warrior..

Initial Look of your website is ok..BUT

You should consider following things to make it more professional like:

- Make Header More Eye Catching
- Try to make your website content more attractive
- Use Colorful Graphics in Text grids

Hope this would help !!