Please Review My Website

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I have been working on this site for a few days, and I think it's starting to take shape. I am not finished, and may never be. It seems like there's always another tweak or change I am wanting to make. Also, the content will be improved over time. But, I think it is starting to have a nice look and feel to it, so I thought I would see what you guys thought. I am open to construcitve critism, but try to be somewhat kind about it.

You're Gonna Be A Great House Sitter! - The Traveling House Sitter
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  • Profile picture of the author mark toughill
    It looks like a pretty clean web page, but it needs more. There is no navigation bar or an about me page etc. It needs a lot more content. Starting to look good though.
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    • Profile picture of the author savidge4
      would agree that you need an About Me page. You need to some how identify your navigation... people are simply used to having buttons on top. Its ok you don't, but you need to somehow make it clear where they are and what they are.
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  • Profile picture of the author ChrisNosal
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    First thing my eyes go to are the brief case, so I have no context for what your site is about, or why I'm here, and my brain has to struggle to search for meaning, next the eyes move to the right, because the text is black, everything else is gray into the background, so I see "home owner/sitter responsibilities", still only a vague context.

    My eyes are looking for the meaning of the page, the "why am I here?" so I jump from "home owner/sitter responsibilities" to "dog care" to "contact forms" because of all the strong colors on very light grey, which makes the articles difficult to read.

    "You're gonna be a great house sitter" leaves me with little context - I'm asking, "how is this site going to help me? The title is vague, and doesn't tell me what benefit I'll get from reading the page".

    I love your passion for the topic, and it's a very helpful and informative site, I just feel like all your attention is to the information quality, but design and an effective user experience is just as important, because without the good design your message gets lost and confused.

    Think, "what's the first thing my reader wants to know when they land on my site?", be specific, and make sure your that's the first thing their eye lands on when they see your page.

    It's a great site informationally, but it lacks hierarchy, organization, and a good user experience to get the person the information they want, and let them know they're where they want to be as easily and efficiently as possible.
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  • Profile picture of the author jester573
    Thanks for the advice, guys. I will try to work some of the things you mentioned out. I don't want the common Nav bar across the top, but I can see what you guys mean considering my sidebar Nav. is below the fold. My intentions were to have each topic on the home page be briefly covered, but also be a link to a page that goes more into detail on that specific topic. I got a long way to go before I am happy, but your advice helps me see it through others eyes. Thanks again.
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    • Profile picture of the author bobafett999
      I think it is a neat concept. I didn't know there was a need for such a service. The website is simple. As others have mentioned why is there a suite case? Also, why a suite case is there. I liked the rotating social icons. I would prefer it below the image. Also, you have too much space between paragraphs.
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  • Profile picture of the author jester573
    The suitcase is what a traveling house sitter would need to carry their personal belongings. It says "travel" and "traveling" directly above it, so I thought it would tie together. But, from the feedback I guess it didn't. LOL
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    • Profile picture of the author chrisnos
      Originally Posted by jester573 View Post

      The suitcase is what a traveling house sitter would need to carry their personal belongings. It says "travel" and "traveling" directly above it, so I thought it would tie together. But, from the feedback I guess it didn't. LOL
      I don't know your niche, but you do. Just imagine you're a stranger, and what your average customer knows, arriving on your website. If they make the connection, then leave it, but also don't overlook even if they do get the message, there's ALWAYS a way to make it better no matter how good it is!
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  • Profile picture of the author chrisnos
    Originally Posted by jester573 View Post

    I have been working on this site for a few days, and I think it's starting to take shape. I am not finished, and may never be. It seems like there's always another tweak or change I am wanting to make. Also, the content will be improved over time. But, I think it is starting to have a nice look and feel to it, so I thought I would see what you guys thought. I am open to construcitve critism, but try to be somewhat kind about it.

    You're Gonna Be A Great House Sitter! - The Traveling House Sitter
    Just keep working. My first stuff, actually a couple years of my first stuff, was a total mess.

    Keep going, keep reading and learning, and keep getting better. It will happen on its own if you just keep practicing!
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  • Profile picture of the author sameera
    Agree with Chris, the first things which is getting attention is the briefcase and it is showing no relevancy with this page. And yes, user will feel confused while landing on this page. Moreover, while scrolling down, that briefcase is appearing again and again which gives the feel of getting automatically scrolled up. Moreover, above the fold area is not at all impressive. You need to work on it.
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  • Profile picture of the author DWaters
    Yes I understand that the suitcase = travel but that first impression (the eyes go to the suitcase immediately) does not say enough about the site. You want to make sure your message and niche are very obvious as soon as the visitor lands on your site. How about a picture of a house maybe ?

    Overall I like the way it looks. I really like the background image.

    However I tend to prefer the content on the left and the sidebar on the right, opposite of your setup. Also the opt-in form is at the bottom, the hardest thing to see on the page.Thjat will decrease your opt-ins. If it were my site I would have the opt-in form at the top right and put it in the moving widget.
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  • Profile picture of the author federal06
    Hey man, is look good and simple!!

    Post more content (Video and pictures are good and create a about me page and contact page)
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