Would love Your review of our Landing Page

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Hello everyone,


I am a Graphic Designer at a company called Ink Signs, based in Sydney Australia.
We are trying to improve our Landing Page and get the most out of it.

For that, we would love to hear any suggestions, advices or any ideas on how you think we could improve this page, or what you think we should implement in order to achieve better conversions with it, by getting people to actually fill in their details and move onto the site.


Many thanks for your help in advance.

Regards,
Laszlo
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  • Profile picture of the author MeAlaister
    Your design is simple , but i feel it take more time to load page, may be due to server problem,
    and you wasted a lot of space in header section
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  • Profile picture of the author Rodgers15
    Originally Posted by Laszlo04 View Post

    Hello everyone,


    I am a Graphic Designer at a company called Ink Signs, based in Sydney Australia.
    We are trying to improve our ...
    Laszlo
    • The landing page is mobile friendly.
    • Make most of the significant buttons large enough to allow for easy tapping.
    • Mobile load speed is low-(leverage browser caching,minify CSS,optimize images)
    • Improve slightly on responsiveness-footer section

    All in all, the design is superb!
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  • Profile picture of the author sarataylor2013
    Too simple.
    * You have quite good logo. use logo instead of using a background image.
    * Give some more padding to contact form and style the input fields.
    * Create the footer with HTML instead of using the images.
    * use any latest font family.
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  • Profile picture of the author WPThemeGuru
    Here is my view:
    1- It is not perfectly mobile responsive. Use media queries to make it responsive.
    2- Header space looks awful and it is completely ruining your design.
    3- Fonts can be better. Looking for Corflute Signs? Change the font here.
    4- Images on footer should light up on hover.
    5- If you say, you are a designer then it should be better than this.
    6- Style form fields properly
    7- Instead showing validation message in alert box, i think tooltip is a better option. There are lots of tooltip validation javascripts plugin out there.

    I am not discouraging you but you have to make some changes in order to make it more attractive and professional. Have a nice day!
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  • Profile picture of the author Adrian John
    - Put all the content above the fold.
    Move the picture in the background with your brand so we can fit the actual content(text and form); bring it up and than you'll figue out the position of the logo/brand image.
    - Replace "Enter Your Details" with a better phrase, in order to encourage them to fill it in Now
    - Replace "Get a Fast Quote Now!" with a more powerful phrase like "Get your quote in 12h or less" or something like that, i'm not a copywriter but i can't figure out what fast means

    Hope my ideas will help
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  • Profile picture of the author Mooredesigns
    To increase sales, place a call-to-action on the most important pages.
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  • Profile picture of the author koboe
    It's cool though... I agree with WPthemeguru that it is not totally mobile responsive.. fix that and you will be fine.. Of course you have to work on several variations especially with the Headline.. Success with your landing page
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  • Profile picture of the author Sean DeSilva
    Rearrange the benefits so that the sharpest, most powerful ones appear at the top.

    UV stable ink for easy, fade free colors outdoors
    Photorealistic full color printing
    Turn around and delivery to anywhere in Australia in as little as 36 hours

    If any one of your competitors could write the same benefit, I would exclude that one in order to de-clutter the UVP
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  • Profile picture of the author Slade556
    My first impression: your header is too large, make it smaller, so the visitors can see your opt-in form in full.
    In terms of loading speed, it loads just fine for me (maybe you already did something about it).
    Do replace the phrases "enter your details" and the other one, like Adrian John said, they're not very friendly and inviting, you need something more catchy that will make people want to fill in the form.
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  • Profile picture of the author Samfakroon
    On desktops it looks Perfect I love it.
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  • Profile picture of the author Jake Howard
    Hi Guys, thanks for all the feedback (I work with Laszlo).

    Just a quick question, what is the best dimension to make the landing page? So that all the content appears above the fold?

    Cheers

    Jake
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