Critique my sales page

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More work needs to be done, I know but I would really appreciate if you take a moment and glance at it for what I have currently. Please post your views on improving the main sales page. Thank you very much for your time.
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  • Profile picture of the author askmarcus
    I would suggest you to remove the ads at the bottom... because is not related...

    is this a one page website?
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    • Profile picture of the author tamalanwar
      Originally Posted by askmarcus View Post

      I would suggest you to remove the ads at the bottom... because is not related...

      is this a one page website?
      The ads are from postimage the place where I have hosted this image.
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      • Profile picture of the author tamalanwar
        Hi, no it's not a one page website. This page is a special sales page format so there is no nav menu.
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  • Profile picture of the author JamieAdiant
    I would remove the ad at the top, it takes away from your main call to action.
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    • Profile picture of the author tamalanwar
      Originally Posted by JamieAdiant View Post

      I would remove the ad at the top, it takes away from your main call to action.
      Hi, well the top and bottom ads are from the image hosting service where this image is hosted. They are not in the main squeeze page.
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  • Profile picture of the author rubenjim
    Looks good to me. I think the purposes of these kind of pages are to have the user scrolling in the page... I was thinking to include a "fixed" menu floating at the left side.
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  • Profile picture of the author askmarcus
    why dont you provide us your website link so that we can help you check it easily
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