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Feedback for my eBook

by Vayas
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Hello guys.

Since a few weeks ago i created a thread about my free eBook "Webguidesetup".

Today i updated the eBook and sell it know via Clickbank for a few dollar.

I would ask you what you think about my website and primary about the headlines and the text, here the link to the Website.

Thanks!

Best regards, Manuel.
#ebook #feedback
  • Profile picture of the author allegandro
    IN YOUR FACE, that is my first impression of your website.

    A bit to much.

    Maybe a smaller font?
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  • Profile picture of the author Vayas
    Hello "allegandro" i just laught how i read your post.

    How big is your display and resolution?
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  • Profile picture of the author allegandro
    1600px and a 17inch screen

    Hopes it helps you.
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  • Profile picture of the author Ron Killian
    I agree the landing page area, the text is way to big. The page also should be proofread by a professional.

    Really need some work on the copy, not very exciting, exciting to get more people to buy.

    Looks nice though
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    • Profile picture of the author Vayas
      @t Ron Killian - Thanks for your feedback.

      Would you please tell me how much are your display resolution? On small display it looks way to much...

      Now i would make the font some smaller, i think thats to much! And a professional Copywriter - rewrite the content at the moment.

      It would some take some days and than i reply here if i refreshed the site!

      Thanks for all!
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  • Profile picture of the author Vayas
    Hello guys.

    We decrease the font size and hope now it looks better and rewrite the content. :-)

    Thanks for your feedback!
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  • Profile picture of the author allegandro
    Now a little better, but I advise you to keep trying to keep it less text.

    you can say the same in less words and it will be more pleasant to read.

    Less is more!
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