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please advise my website

by jacksonWSA
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can you give me your opinion, do I edit my site more complete.
>>> engageplayerreviewz.com
Thanks !
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  • Profile picture of the author juvmator
    it's a nice website my friend, but I think you need better graphics.
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    • Profile picture of the author vietnamtourism
      U using wordpress, right? Eleven40 Pro Theme is simple but beautiful.
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  • Profile picture of the author miltonmahmud
    you should redesign your graphics . beside this everything is not bad.
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  • Profile picture of the author Sara20
    Originally Posted by jacksonWSA View Post

    can you give me your opinion, do I edit my site more complete.
    >>> engageplayerreviewz.com
    Thanks !
    Cool content, good site!
    Maybe you can try to use more interesting wed-design, with bright colors! Also, use keyword in link, it will be more understanding of your visitors!
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    • Profile picture of the author jacksonWSA
      Originally Posted by Sara20 View Post

      Cool content, good site!
      Maybe you can try to use more interesting wed-design, with bright colors! Also, use keyword in link, it will be more understanding of your visitors!

      thank you very much
      I said revised
      and put links on the keywords
      Thank you again
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  • Profile picture of the author Fox Pine
    Simple and in the same time classy informative site. Classic font reads verry nicely.
    If you would update your site someday my advice is to use Material design.
    Good luck.
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    • Profile picture of the author MRakkar
      Hello, I hope you are not offended by any of my comments. I am trying to give you constructive criticism so you can improve your site.

      First, what are you offering? Its hard to understand what you are selling. I didnt understand what you were selling until I was halfway down your homepage. 99 out of 100 customers will not even read that far down. Find a way to explain what you are selling within the landing section of the homepage.

      Second, the name "Engage Player Review" is very confusing. To me, that is a statement. Go back to the drawing board and find a better name.

      Third, you have some misspellings and grammatical issues. Hire someone and have them write your About page, Summary and almost every other section of your website.

      Like I said, I hope I didnt offend you or discourage you. You went so far as to create the software and website. Don't let any of the comments I or anyone else make throw you off. Keep your goals in mind and work towards them. Good luck with your website and software. I wish you luck on your venture.
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  • Profile picture of the author jacksonWSA
    MRakkar

    I sincerely thank you for your sincere comments
    Your words are very meaningful to me
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  • Profile picture of the author itsweb
    Hi, your website looks good. But what I found to better placed with changes will share with you and hope you will take it positive.
    first, in the About-page, the content is too much generic. So better provide some quality information and put content about your services and offerings.
    Seond, provide your actual target clearly so that the users can get you without any confusion.
    Lastly, you can use some graphic designs for making your presence look more appealing.

    Thank u...
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  • Profile picture of the author Securex
    Good design, but try to use better quality graphics
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  • Profile picture of the author sumit@247easysupport
    Hi There,

    Here are my opinions:

    1. After clicking on laptop image in "Why Should You Buy It?" section it is redirecting to another url on same tab. According to me it should be like clicking on "special bonus image" which is redirecting too but in another tab.
    2. Calendar is just an image.

    3. Screenshot image below "Robust Video Settings:" heading have hyperlink and it is redirecting on different url in same tab. Other screenshots do not have hyperlink.
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