Unsatisfied with the layout

tuldok · 08-24-2009, 11:43 AM

hey, warriors, i need your comments and suggestions in our website..

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please tell me if i was paranoid thinking that the design is lack of creativity despite that the niche of the site is "Graphics"

thanks..

Aronya · 08-24-2009, 03:35 PM

Hi Nathaniel,
I don't know if it shows a lack of creativity so much as a lack of energy. The dark colors really don't say "graphics" or "design". Also, the dark graphics don't contrast enough with the black background. The whole thing is just kind of sleepy, IMHO.

Harrier · 08-24-2009, 09:42 PM

Too much dark unused space left and right.

tuldok · 08-24-2009, 10:04 PM

sorry fellow warriors im not nathaniel, that was my partner which in charge of graphics design.

and i am Jay in charge of the technical side of that web site..

thank you for your reactions..

jay

Joshua.E1 · 08-25-2009, 12:23 AM

It looks fine to me, not bad layout, nice colour combination. I must say not the best, still presentable to your client.

bemoonzangle · 08-25-2009, 03:35 AM

ya.its look pretty good. But still you have to make a some modification.

Jamie Cruz · 08-25-2009, 04:08 AM

Hey

Your layout is pretty cool, but feel like much gloomy. You can make brighter little...

Jamie

nontemplates · 08-25-2009, 07:53 AM

I don't think the blockiness works particularly the tape effect sections. I'd also like to see some examples of your work - like say two or three of your box covers on a table with reflections. You need somehing that immediately says - Wow I want this kind of work on my site. Its not bad but I get what you are seeing. You want more sizzle.

tuldok · 08-25-2009, 10:40 AM

thanks for the advices..

do you think we can convince clients to place an order with us using that website?

thanks..

Mmfh · 08-25-2009, 04:47 PM

Looks really great except I would lighten up the background.

Mm

Kevin AKA Hubcap · 08-28-2009, 03:47 PM

IMO the design is good. I don't particularly like "dark/gloomy" sites so my only suggestion would be to use some lighter colors.

Kevin

08-24-2009, 11:43 AM	#1
tuldok Front-End Developer Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Cavite Philippines Posts: 59 Thanks: 6 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Unsatisfied with the layout hey, warriors, i need your comments and suggestions in our website.. --> Check here.. <-- please tell me if i was paranoid thinking that the design is lack of creativity despite that the niche of the site is "Graphics" thanks..

08-24-2009, 03:35 PM	#2
Aronya Advanced Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Escondido, CA. Becase San Marcos just wasn't hot enough. Posts: 510 Thanks: 35 Thanked 56 Times in 55 Posts	Re: Unsatisfied with the layout Hi Nathaniel, I don't know if it shows a lack of creativity so much as a lack of energy. The dark colors really don't say "graphics" or "design". Also, the dark graphics don't contrast enough with the black background. The whole thing is just kind of sleepy, IMHO.

08-24-2009, 09:42 PM	#3
Harrier Old Fa*t Warrior Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Central Coast of California Posts: 48 Thanks: 5 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	Re: Unsatisfied with the layout Too much dark unused space left and right.
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08-24-2009, 10:04 PM	#4
tuldok Front-End Developer Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Cavite Philippines Posts: 59 Thanks: 6 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Unsatisfied with the layout sorry fellow warriors im not nathaniel, that was my partner which in charge of graphics design. and i am Jay in charge of the technical side of that web site.. thank you for your reactions.. jay

08-25-2009, 12:23 AM	#5
Joshua.E1 HyperActive Warrior Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 258 Thanks: 0 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts	Re: Unsatisfied with the layout It looks fine to me, not bad layout, nice colour combination. I must say not the best, still presentable to your client.
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08-25-2009, 03:35 AM	#6
bemoonzangle Follow the best Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: US Posts: 1 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Unsatisfied with the layout ya.its look pretty good. But still you have to make a some modification.

08-25-2009, 04:08 AM	#7
Jamie Cruz Warrior Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Unsatisfied with the layout Hey Your layout is pretty cool, but feel like much gloomy. You can make brighter little... Jamie

08-25-2009, 07:53 AM	#8
nontemplates HyperActive Warrior Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Sunny Florida Posts: 214 Thanks: 10 Thanked 22 Times in 19 Posts	Re: Unsatisfied with the layout I don't think the blockiness works particularly the tape effect sections. I'd also like to see some examples of your work - like say two or three of your box covers on a table with reflections. You need somehing that immediately says - Wow I want this kind of work on my site. Its not bad but I get what you are seeing. You want more sizzle.

08-25-2009, 10:40 AM	#9
tuldok Front-End Developer Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Cavite Philippines Posts: 59 Thanks: 6 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Unsatisfied with the layout thanks for the advices.. do you think we can convince clients to place an order with us using that website? thanks..

08-25-2009, 04:47 PM	#10
Mmfh HyperActive Warrior Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Oregon Posts: 174 Thanks: 56 Thanked 12 Times in 9 Posts	Re: Unsatisfied with the layout Looks really great except I would lighten up the background. Mm

08-28-2009, 03:47 PM	#11
Kevin AKA Hubcap Flyin' Low & Slow War Room Member Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 1,189 Thanks: 56 Thanked 177 Times in 132 Posts	Re: Unsatisfied with the layout IMO the design is good. I don't particularly like "dark/gloomy" sites so my only suggestion would be to use some lighter colors. Kevin
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