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New to blogging and looking for feedback

by 24days2transform
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I got my webpage set up almost a year ago and about 6 weeks ago I started to blog a little. I am looking for feedback/suggestions on my website since I am new to this. My website is 24days2transform.com. I appreciate any and all feedback.

Thanks in advance!
#blogging #feedback #weight loss
  • Profile picture of the author CityCowboy
    I think your domain name looks good, but other than that, almost everything else is a mess.

    First, you're trying to target everyone, it's better to stick to health goals, and drop the finance thing.

    Second, your sidebar is full of products, it looks desperate.

    Last, but not least, you're not writing helpful informational content and you're not building your list.

    P.S. It'd also be a good idea if you can change the theme, the header image looks too big.

    Good luck
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    • Profile picture of the author megamind22
      Well said @Citycowboy I couldn't have said it better cause the mixture is tragic.

      One wouldn't know what the blog or website is all about even Google will find it difficult to rank the blog or understand it.

      So like my fellow warrior rightfully said you need to stick to one niche market to make your blog understandable.

      And find a good theme that would go well with that niche.

      All the best
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  • Profile picture of the author Lara Si
    I can see a lot of things I'd write differently, and I'd love to be able to use that to help you!

    I'm an experienced freelance content writer with a Graduate Diploma in Strategic Communications, and I'm pretty well-read in copywriting theory and looking to break into the field with my first copy client. I've written content for SME blogs - you can see some of my work here:

    Want me to have a go rewriting the content on your page (blogs, front page, etc.), in exchange for USD100 and a testimonial on LinkedIn if you're happy with my work?

    I'll make changes, explain why I've made them, and give you constructive feedback as I go, so it should be really educational for you. The practical analysis of what you've got on the page so far and what I'd do differently will mean that next time you go to write a blog, you'll know how to write a winner!

    Get in touch if you're interested!
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  • Profile picture of the author Aayushg416
    Ok Hello everyone I'm totally new to internet and technologies just now I have started Blogging invested some bucks in buying hosting and domain so domain name is madoffers.net As I m able to use google pretty well so it is easy for me to hunt for offers price drops and even lowest price of a product easily {Indian Sites like snapdeal flipkart amazon.in etc} so i have joined few affiliate programs so that i can get some bucks for the site and some for my self its only 10 weeks i have learned a lot currently I'm perusing engineering from electronics and communication branch so after 5 pm i use to work for site is there any thing u suggest to get more output from my site and traffic also as only 10 to 12 views are there on my post please suggest something to grow fast ! thankyou
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  • Profile picture of the author ElizabethArling
    The website looks definitely useful and fun, however according to the modern usability requirements, it is not clear from the first screen what the website is about. I would make it more concise and clear. When switching the page in the navigation bar, it's not clear whether the page has changed because it is lower than the first screen. Also, there is no favicon.
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