I'm getting ready to go live but I'm not sure about my sales page

I actually think the content is really cool - Facebook auctions seem to be something new and I'm only recently seeing the tab for stuff being sold on my Facebook.

However the design of your landing page leads a lot to be desired. Seriously why not use some kind of landing page software that will make your stuff look presentable. What are you using at the moment?

Honestly I think it's great you've launched an app but first impressions count - even if you use a template for your app you can make it look much more awesome then it does now.

Hi there! Your first webpage looks great! I particularly love your CTA right off the bat in bright green. However, my critique is that while your CTA is bright and inviting, your eyes are then drawn to your toads and what they are saying, and the CTA is forgotten and lost as you scroll down the page to find out what exactly it is they are talking about and what the purpose of the page is. I would suggest rethinking that design, perhaps putting the frogs in the upper left so the eyes hit them first, and then are drawn to your bright green CTA towards the middle of right of the page.

Furthermore, I love all of the benefits you have listed out as you scroll. This is obviously a very beneficial solution. My critique is that on this initial landing page (the first page), I think you could do a better job of identifying the Problem. You have a couple times that it saves you time "Spend minutes, not hours" , but this doesn't drive it home hard enough, ya know? Are you tired of tediously sorting through your fb auction? Find out how others are streamlining their process and making triple the money in the process! ( you see where I'm headed here). Set the problem up more for them. then kill them with the solution.

Now that I scroll through your second page, i see more solutions. I would suggest keeping that as is, and changing your first page around to really drive home what the consumers problem is, and then you can nail them with all your awesome solutions on that 2nd page.

Just my two cents. You've obviously put a lot of work into those pages and they look awesome.

Wesley

It's quite good. Only few notes design wise. Use consistent fonts, don't use multiple fonts on one page. And please change that PINK background color to something else. Its really bright, distracting and overall not a nice color.