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How do you feel about this page.

by Jasonctm
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Hey guys I recently created this landing page to help bring in leads for my work. I was hoping I could get some feedback from you guys. I made this through Wordpress.

www.cashwithfb.com

Thanks in advanced.
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  • Profile picture of the author markhimeb
    Page is down. Looks like it's loading slowly.
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  • Profile picture of the author DWaters
    IMO I think there are several issues. It loaded rather slowly for me. The font colors for cash and facebook are too dark since the background is dark. I did not recognize it as a landing page to just capture my email address as the form for that is way below the fold. Is this a squeeze page or a content page ???
    Also way too many fields in the capture form - zip code, time zone and paypal address ??? NO. You should not ask for any of those. Just collect email address. That is all you need and it will increase your response rate.
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    • Profile picture of the author Jasonctm
      Thank you for the reply. I believe it is loading slowly because of the size of the image I will try and lower the image size to see if that helps.

      I thought I was being clever with the colors green cash, blue for facebook. I am using a darken filter I will turn it to a brighten. I will fix the form right away I need the information I am asking for so I put it there for convenience. I will take it all out though I can see how it would be overwhelming.

      This is a squeeze page. If i get an email from this I can schedule them to get started with the process. I am trying to figure out the best way to let them know this is a process they can trust and to assure them they will get paid. I konw on the face of it it looks scammy.

      For others as I am getting helpful tips I am making immediate changes.
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  • Profile picture of the author Jasonctm
    So i made a rookie mistake the image I originally had on there was over 6000 px wide and was 2mb in size. I learned images shouldn't go bigger than 2000px but I guess it depends. I brought down the size to 1800px in width which brought the size of the image down to 350kb.
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  • Profile picture of the author PhilHardaker
    Personally I don't think it 'looks' professional enough. Don't like the darkness, dead space, old wood desk and the pink 'cash' color.
    However, it looks better on my iphone though, lots better than desktop.

    If you have to have a desk, Flat Tech - Flat Landing Page Template - Live Preview - WrapBootstrap or Lamap - Multi-Purpose Landing Page - Live Preview - WrapBootstrap are desks where they put the space to use.

    Technically, why so many files? Why jquery? You just need html and css, shouldn't need any JS for a landing page. Test your page at https://tools.pingdom.com/
    Ok hope that helps!
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    • Profile picture of the author DWaters
      Originally Posted by PhilHardaker View Post

      Personally I don't think it 'looks' professional enough. Don't like the darkness, dead space, old wood desk and the pink 'cash' color.
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      I agree. I still do not like the way it looks. The image completely covers my entire screen. There is nothing else to see until I scroll down.


      As for the location of the opt in box I have often read that research says the top right works very well and having it against the bottom should help as well.


      As for opting in - Is there an incentive to give you my email? is there any incentive? For me the ability to "get scheduled" does not sound appealing at all. In fact it sounds like just the opposite - something I do not want. Consider providing something useful
      and attractive so people will want to opt in.
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  • Profile picture of the author Rick Guzman
    It needs more work. Too basic. It doesn't scream trust. Give something for free so they can take bait. It loaded fine on my mobile cell. Keep at it.Goodluck
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    • Profile picture of the author Jasonctm
      Originally Posted by Rick Guzman View Post

      It needs more work. Too basic. It doesn't scream trust. Give something for free so they can take bait. It loaded fine on my mobile cell. Keep at it.Goodluck
      I was going for a simplistic page that would work for mobile but if its too basic i am going to try and step it up a notch thanks for the input. I really appreciate it.
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  • Profile picture of the author Logoguts
    Its good, but i recommend you to make some important changes in footer area where you placed contact us form.. seems like out..
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    • Profile picture of the author Jasonctm
      Originally Posted by Logoguts View Post

      Its good, but i recommend you to make some important changes in footer area where you placed contact us form.. seems like out..
      Can you elaborate a little for me?
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  • Profile picture of the author Jasonctm
    Hey guys thanks for all the great input. I am thinking of a complete redesign at the moment. I was looking at android's website and liked the simplicity but so far my conversion rate by talking to people through email is better than the website so obviously I need to do some tinkering. I will be uploading a before and after in the next day or two and hopefully you guys can continue with the awesome feedback.

    Thanks so much I am glad I am apart of this community.
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  • Profile picture of the author Mark Singletary
    I've got a question about your offer: why do you need to use other people's FB accounts to run ads?

    Mark
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    • Profile picture of the author Jasonctm
      I want to preface my answer with I am here to perfect my marketing skills not so much to promote my offer. If I can't get an opportunity that actually pays people to do well I'm in trouble.

      I work for a company and the simplest way to put it is, we do a form of guerilla marketing and the most effective way to get as many ads as possible out, without directly violating Facebooks terms of use, we need to piggy back off of other people's Facebook accounts.

      An issue I have to deal with is my more malicious black hat competitors. My company is using a red hat marketing technique for sure, though one where everyone wins. My target market is people who need quick cash and don't plan on using Facebook's ad platform ever. That's a different discussion for a different thread though.
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  • Profile picture of the author georgeweb13
    Nice and clean website.
    But, better remove the hostgator's favicon and put something about your site!
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  • Profile picture of the author Jasonctm
    Hey Guys,

    I've had a small redesign of the website. If you guys could tell me how you feel about it now I would greatly appreciate it. I feel like for those who thought it was clean, I kept those elements and for those who thought it didn't look professional enough I added some elements I think will help. I am still trying to add some finishing touches to the website and making some color decisions. ( I am red green color blind so colors aren't my strong suit)
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