Feedback on Landing Page

by mattsteinman 23 replies
I just created my second landing page and was hoping to get some feedback on it. Does it create a sense of urgency to sign up? Would you even sign up? Although you might not be my target audience, I'm looking for an overall consistent message, triggers for the visitor to sign up and a valid offer.

Thanks in advance.

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  • Profile picture of the author Brent Stangel
    Does it create a sense of urgency to sign up?
    Not even a little bit.

    Would you even sign up?
    I'm unsure exactly what you are offering, so no.
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  • Profile picture of the author DWaters
    When I first see the page, above the fold, it is very bland - just some white space and text. Nothing of interest. I would not see the graph or the bullet points until I scroll down, which I probably would not due. The free offer ebook should be pictured to show that I will get something if I opt-in. I would suggest reworking the design of the page.
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  • Profile picture of the author mickyl
    Hi Matt.
    My impression:
    1.More color needed! especially when it comes to headlines. Red and orange are colors of urgency, not calming green and light blue:-). Also, more interesting design of the headline may help.
    2. the graphics and everything need to go up - so everyone can see it right away (maybe get smaller).
    3. Concentrate on what this product can do for the client (for ex - do you want to have a faster website? you are losing customers every day, and we can help you solve this, etc)
    Hope this helps!
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    • Profile picture of the author mattsteinman
      Appreciate it mickyl.
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    • Profile picture of the author timexer
      I agree. Also, the chat box when closed covers some text in the footer. I guess moving everything up (as mickyl suggested) would solve this issue.

      Good luck!
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  • Profile picture of the author The Author
    Originally Posted by mattsteinman View Post

    I just created my second landing page and was hoping to get some feedback on it. Does it create a sense of urgency to sign up? Would you even sign up? Although you might not be my target audience, I'm looking for an overall consistent message, triggers for the visitor to sign up and a valid offer.

    Thanks in advance.

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    Hi Matt,

    It did draw my attention, but I have to agree on adding a little more color. Perhaps add a little more about what your product can do, but more importantly why it is the solution. I agree with mickyl, a question with an obvious answer and solution is a great idea.

    This is what color alone can do - https://internetjobsonlineblogmoney....n-your-visitor
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  • Profile picture of the author ZanyZebra
    Originally Posted by mattsteinman View Post

    I just created my second landing page and was hoping to get some feedback on it. Does it create a sense of urgency to sign up? Would you even sign up? Although you might not be my target audience, I'm looking for an overall consistent message, triggers for the visitor to sign up and a valid offer.

    Thanks in advance.

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    Context is king.

    Unless I can see what the method is of driving traffic to the page then I can't really comment with any real sense as the landing page is only one element of the funnel you are building and is therefore out of context.

    However, that's never stopped me before so here are a couple of things I noticed right away:

    1. Heading is 'decent' as a benefit is identified - "Blazing Fast Hosting That Will Keep Your Visitors On Your Website Longer"... you could make it punchier (the shorter the better) "Blazing Fast Hosting That Will Keep Your Wordpress Visitors Longer" (I don't have time to evaluate further but is that the main benefit?)

    2. Graphic is too 'busy' and needs simplifying as you only have a couple seconds to grab them. Clarify and make it VERY obvious what is going on in it and why they should care.

    3. Get rid of the link at the bottom to you blog. A landing page should give them no other option but to sign up or get out.

    I'm sure there is more, if I had the time to evaluate properly. There are also other points which some have already made in comments above eg the page is bland.

    Good luck with your ventures.
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    • Profile picture of the author mattsteinman
      Appreciate the feedback, ZanyZebra. I'll go back to the drawing board. I'm new to this stuff.
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  • Profile picture of the author agmccall
    For a landing page the whole page should be visible once loaded. I should not have to scroll at all.

    It looks more like a mini sales page. Your asking people to sign up to receive a sales pitch. If you want it to be a sales page then make it so.

    The offer itself. and ebook "Why Speed Matters" will be basically useless for most as we all know the reason fast hosting is important. So the offer will not entice many people to opt in. As well the discount. 20% off hosting plans. If I get to the site and find that your prices start 30% more than the average then I might be turned off.

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  • Profile picture of the author mosbah77
    Hi:
    Your landing page need to appear in one page with out scrolling down and has less content to read and create no urgency to sighn up at all
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  • Profile picture of the author mattsteinman
    I appreciate everybody's feedback. I'm fairly new to this concept but I'll get there! Thanks again.
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