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My New Site and Recommendations

by livinlife00
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I finally got my site up and working...

I would appreciate any recommendations that any of you may have in making my site any better in order to increase more sales...

This is my first site...

Thanks
B.

h**p://www.freethingsonline.info
#recommendations #site
  • Profile picture of the author talewins
    The header looks great, makes me wish you could continue the pattern down the page.
    Dark brown in the left hand column demands a different color text, white, yellow.

    The right hand column should be almost twice as wide.

    Kissing the monitor is a shock after the beautiful header. This is totally unexpected, as is the great (I'm sure) offers for free products. I think you need to make a choice between products or header.
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    • Profile picture of the author MikeHayes
      Hi,

      To start with, get your forum signature organised so that we can click the link.

      I agree with the comments about the dark brown. Black on brown's not easy to read.
      I'm not to keen on all those black background tables, all very dark.
      Left column too narrow?
      The 2 bonus links (top left) do not attract attention.
      Pity about the seam in the header

      The text should be manipulated a bit more to give more regular paragraphs. eg this one, the first line (18 words) is spread edge to edge while the second line is only 3 words. Why not 2 lines 11 & 10 for example.

      Once your credit card is approved, you will be taken to a special download page where you will download your guide.


      Good luck with the business.

      Mike
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  • Profile picture of the author onlinemarketer
    maybe you could add some graphics on the sidebar and the body to make it more intresting
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  • Profile picture of the author askloz
    Personally, I think it's back to the drawing board for you, go and learn how to do graphics and HTML properly. Sidebar text is hard to read, the banner is being repeated more than once, brown is not a friendly color, your footer needs work.

    Personally I would not buy from this page.
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