Why Does My Page Look So Bad?

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I would even be willing to pay someone to help me fix up my sales page.

I think I have the wording up to par but the formatting still needs a lot of work.

The lines are too close together and it looks muddled.

I tried to use a help forum but couldn't understand the jargon.

Would anyone be able to help?

Phil.

How to Make Ezine Marketing Work
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  • Profile picture of the author ryanstreet
    I could help you if you would like. I know CSS and could fix up your website without diving into it and changing all of your code around.

    I could give you a small css file, you add one line of code in your page, and presto! The job is done!

    PM me if you are interested or check out the link in my signature and we can go from there!

    I hope to hear from you soon!
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  • Profile picture of the author minisite911
    set the line height, or margin and padding width, I think that's what you have to do.. among other things

    To be honest man, the sales page CSS Style doesn looks too good

    A good advice: find a FREE MINI SITE TEMPLATES, and then copy their CSS Style or even modify it a bit. I don't think that's against the privacy policy

    good luck
    - oki
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  • Profile picture of the author onlinemarketer
    yes i think it looks good already, just a little padding and margin would do the trick
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  • Profile picture of the author tokyobabydoll
    You might want to play a little with the fonts and spacing. Also a little more graphics and color would make the page more vibrant and alive. Goodluck!
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  • Profile picture of the author petebolduc
    Its appears to be a simple CSS issue. Can easily be resolved.

    You can pay someone to do it, or if you have skype I could show you how for about the same amount of money. That way in the future you can handle it yourself. CSS is quite easy to learn but is essential for quality design.


    PM me if you would like to pursue this oprion

    pete
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    • Profile picture of the author Captain Dave
      The first thing I noticed was the color scheme. Perhaps you could work on the colors. I like the banner, but the colors just don't seem right to me. Maybe just adjust the top color (red) to match the shade under the word power! (kind of rust or orange) in your banner. Maybe even move your banner to the top of the page.
      Next would be the bullets for
      Forum Participation
      PPC Pay Per Click advertising
      etc... are way off to the left...maybe better to just leave them off.
      A few grammar problems that I am pretty sure you could find if you have somebody to proofread your site.
      And finally... a very small point, but does make the site look unprofessional IMHO is:
      Copyright 2008 Your Website... change to your website name.
      I hope this helps.
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