Is this landing page mockup any good?

I like it, but the currently accepted rule for opt-in forms is to put them above the fold. You've got a link to yours, which I expect would be an in-page anchor that drops the visitor down to the bottom of the page. Might work just as well. Might not. It would be something to split test.

maybe add another order/call to action at the bottom of the page, and as the above poster said, optin forms should be above the fold, or even have it 'float' in using css/javascript.

Hi Jeff,
The only good answer to a lot of these kinds of questions is, "It depends. Test it." You wouldn't be the first person to run a website with both options. Whether you're cutting yourself short by doing so, can only be determined by testing.

A lot of knowledgeable people will tell you that it's an either/or situation. Either you're trying to sell something, or you're trying to build a list to sell to later. Those people would tell you to decide which way you want to go, and then eliminate either the opt-in or the sales option. The argument would be that if you give somebody an option to opt in for something free, they might do that rather than make a purchase.

I tend to agree with that logic. If you have a sales page that will convert, you will, by default, be collecting contact info from actual buyers, not just window shoppers. And, that's the ultimate goal, isn't it? To create a list that consists of nothing but buyers... <slap!> OK. Back to the real world.

Unless you are really good at driving really targeted traffic, you'll do best with 2 pages; one to build a list to market to, and one sales page. The more of an impulse purchase your product is, the more you can focus on the sales page. But, if it's a higher-priced item, or the traffic isn't showing up with cash in hand, looking for the Buy Now! button, put more emphasis on the opt-in. That way, you can use a longer-term strategy for winning them over.

HTH,
Tim

It seems busy and offers the viewer a lot of options, which usually slows down the decision making process. If you want sales, maybe offer fewer options on the landing page.

Looks a little busy for my taste.....little more clear on what it is.....fewer choices......as always test test test

I agree with Jim to some degree, in areas it seems a bit busy, however as a designer myself i have to look at the other side of the coin as well , that being that most of the content in the mockup is there to give scope.

To really get a good idea on weather it is going to be clean, crisp, and eye catching is to have the designer work up a sample layout out of it.

Would be interesting to see that.

Thanks for the feedback, everyone. It's definitely helping to get this feedback so early on in the design.

Todd, I hadn't considered that additional options would slow things down; definitely makes sense. I'll circle back with the designer and come up with another revision.

Tim, great advice. I'll build out two versions, each with a specific focus in mind. I do have a higher-priced service, so the opt-in route definitely stands to be a priority.

Looks good to me. Make sure to have some colours (Keep that very decent though) Nothing like green and red together. That has a shockeffeckt. Keep the page clean - not too much scrolling. Maybe you can make a menu instead?
Best regards

I think it is good, just a bit of color and some Icon etc.
I like the layout in the way it is done 'uninspired' . Many people take ideas from various places and end up making some confused output. I liked the experiment here. Good and bold.