Please rate my layout + Header graphic...

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Hi guys,

I want to know your inputs and views >> index-sample



Best,

David
#graphic #header #layout #rate
  • Profile picture of the author Sleeq
    Hi David,

    It's not bad.

    Times new roman for a font later down in the page should be changed,

    I preferred your arial / verdana - it's more legible and easier to read.

    The Logo should grab at my attention, it's currently too small - Make it larger!

    Aside from that - it's a very good Job!

    Sleeq
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    • Profile picture of the author DavidSaaf
      Thanks Sleeq, Logo: Do you mean the watch background graphic?

      Originally Posted by Sleeq View Post

      Hi David,

      It's not bad.

      Times new roman for a font later down in the page should be changed,

      I preferred your arial / verdana - it's more legible and easier to read.

      The Logo should grab at my attention, it's currently too small - Make it larger!

      Aside from that - it's a very good Job!

      Sleeq
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      • Profile picture of the author vivekg
        Hello David, I saw the site, here are some points that I noticed.
        1) The header needs to be a bit more bigger and the colors should be a bit more subtle right now its a bit to dark (for me)
        As sleeq said the logo needs to stand out more as that would be your identity.
        I don't know if your the designer but if possible if you have done this layout in photoshop then you can add a drop shadow to the white page that will give it a nice effect and it might look better. Just try it and see if it help.
        This my friend is just a suggestion from me.
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  • Profile picture of the author thrilrich
    Hi, David.

    Your title shd be bigger by at least 3 px sizes. Font shd be changed to serif type, eg. Tahoma or Verdana. White outline for the title shd be decreased to just 1 to 2 px thickness. Header currently cannot attract much eyeballs. The image behind is too faint to be seen clearly. Is that the objv?

    I would have made the image beside the title and have it prominently displayed with no blending with bg color but contrasted colours on its own. Then, your header will stand up more as a whole.

    Hope u understand what I am talking about. : )
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  • Profile picture of the author Lloyd Buchinski
    I'm not much at design, so take it with a grain, but I was pretty impressed. I liked it. It gets a little plain toward the bottom but it looks like you have to add the order button to it and of course I expect you will be taking out the 10 inches of white space before the bottom links.

    Also thought it was a good photo and an interesting sales page, although I'm not much of an authority there either. But even if an amateur liked it that might mean a bit.
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  • Profile picture of the author azland55
    Hi
    I would like to see the body and background images on the header to stand out slightly more than they are (just a small tweak on the blending).

    The header words needs to be larger, better positioned and to flow better with the header graphics.

    Use a different font like Verdana.

    Change the colour of your Special gift tag, does not go with site.

    Make the boxes of your bonuses smaller they are to spaced out.

    Use a thinner banner of your header in the footer to bring the site together.

    Hope that helps
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    • Profile picture of the author CDDHosting
      It's not bad but it does get plain around the bottom and also there's two huge like white blank spaces all along the side which looks really bad.
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  • Profile picture of the author DavidSaaf
    Thank you, thank you my friends! I love your comments and here's my update and changes:
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    I'm still improving it
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  • Profile picture of the author traffichulk
    Hi David,

    I like your design. Great job you've done there!
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    I Look forward to interact with you,

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    Traffic Hulk | Membership Site Supplies

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  • Profile picture of the author amirkhan
    Looks good, graphics could be bigger though...just my opinion
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    • Profile picture of the author DavidSaaf
      Thanks my friends ) I'm about to upload my new touches! I'm making the add to cart button more attractive with the ecover on the top of it. I'm adding also the testimonial...
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  • Profile picture of the author DigiSumo
    Hi David,

    You did a good job, not over-done, clean layout, graphics are easy on the eyes...

    Cheers,

    Mark H
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