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Need to Clean Up My Sales Page

by bradjackson
1 replies
  • WEB DESIGN
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Hi,
I'm very new to creating sales pages and minisies and have created an ok sales page but I know it could be cleaned up a bit.

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I don't even need much on the site changed except for a few things like making sure the graphics load nicely and narrowing the general column width (which for the life of me I can't figure out in Dreamwever and it's driving me nuts.)

I put a little camtasia video of what I'm looking for here.
http://www.pumaskills.com/public/psl...ideoreview.avi

Interested in your thoughts or bids, etc.
#clean #page #sales
  • Profile picture of the author jonhel
    Hi Brad,

    I've taken a quick look at the page and have made several observations on a first glance.

    * some of the image file sizes are too large hence the initial slow loading - it would be quicker on subsequent viewings once cached by the visitor's browsers but of course you want them the first time don't you!

    * the styling would be better in an external CSS file. At the moment it's all on the one page.

    I could assist you with this, but am more a developer than designer, so would just look to reproduce this in a more efficient way if that makes sense. Please PM me if you want to discuss further.


    Jonathan
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