Steve Wells

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Daniel Rickfold

If you want people to read the text in the right then it's ok
if you want people to subscribe switch the optin to the right
people read from left to right

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TristanPerry

The graphics are pretty good, even if they do over-power the eye hence make the subscription area a little hard to see (the eye should automatically be drawn to the subscription area)

So yeah, the graphics are definitely good overall.

However.. the website is very inaccessible. Nearly all your text is in an image, meaning that *this* is what Google and people with screen readers 'see' (or will 'read') when they visit your site.

In other words, the search engines and people with disabilities won't be able to use your site.

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digital29

That "scrolling down" box looks kinda ugly...have you tried changing its design?

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Branding_bible

yeah id say the scrolling box is pointless on a squeeze page, you also quickly forget what you've just read so after flicking back and forth a few times I wasn't really sure what I was looking at as you then come to the actual copy on the right hand side of the page (which is a little long for a squeeze page in my opinion).

Also you mention the best way to buy them was as a bundle for $77 but I couldn't find any way to do that on the page or even in the scroll box.

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Alex Nash

Hmm, you should change the text on the header. It's just something about it that doesn't give me a serious impression.

The popup in the beginning is pretty annoying too. Like "the site" just want to sell you stuff, "the site" doesn't care about giving you good content, just get your email on a opt-inlist and then Good Bye.

But if you really want to use that popup-box, then choose the font. Same with the "Easy Banner Maker Pro"-textbox.

Good Luck :-).


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A.N

ps. Hope you didn't took this personal, since you asked for Our oppinion on your site. The "secret" to develop your *thing* is also to being able to take in critique.

Learn from your mistakes :-)

Steve Wells

The website is not designed mainly as a squeeze page. I will add another link on the page for the bundled pack, thanks.......

Steve Wells

I may keep the box, I may not, I am not sure.....I can change the font and see what that looks like....

By the way, I am trying to sell something and I want them to know I am trying to sell something......the opt-in is secondary.

I know this is a little unconvientional, so I guess I will see how it works for me?

Thanks for your input.......

ellbatad

I like the design but the font type of the 'Dear internet marketer....text' need to be change. It hard to read...

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Warrior Junior

The sign up box didn't align properly. Maybe you need to fix it!

Steve Wells

What browser and computer are you using? I have found that a MAC even if using firefox shows up strangly, but on a PC with firefox things look perfect....IE also......

Steve Wells

I am just learning and I only make simple webpages, more of a graphics designer than a webpage developer, athough I am learning quickly.........

I noticed that Joomla is what many of your sites use, is that easy to do?

ALSO do you supply the fill editable psd files along with all the code....?

I may not use one for this site, maybe another one?

How about some free designs with the PSD files included?

Steve

Steve Wells

What do you suggest, should I bold it?

kjcardona

Maybe try to use a Trebuchet font and choose a Crisp Kern instead of a smooth on your Graphic editor (Photoshop). After tha make the content HTML so that it can be a bit browser friendly.

If you can also, the Iframe and the Javascript Popup - Use fonts that are a little more consistent with the rest of the fonts, the fonts on your graphics and content are all Sans-Serif fonts but the iframe content and Popup are Serif types.

I am attaching some recent graphics I created for some Lead Gen Campaigns you can see. You'll see I try to keep the Typography Consistent.

Hope that helps buddy.

Thanks

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TheKeys

I think it's a neat design.. but it won't be search engine friendly.. nor when reading do I feel that what you're selling is legit.

Also... $77 is kind of expensive for those wanting to learn more.

Steve Wells

$77.00 is actually cheap for 15 products and instruction on how to save you money by doing your own banners, headers, footers, ect.....

Normally you will spend on average at least 15-20 for banner, aand a header is about the same........

Believe me, I don't sell anything thats not quality, I don't go that route, my stuff is always worth more than what I ask for.....

If I were to sell each product for only $10.00 dollars each that would be $150.00, individually they sell 19.97 up to $37.00 each.

Bundled your getting them for less than $6.00 a piece which is a steal of a deal............

Steve Wells

I'll work on that soon, I think your right, I need to use no more than 3 different fonts at the most........

Steve Wells

I have changed the font and reduced the amount of fonts. I didn't realize how many fonts I had incorporated in the design. I had like 6 different fonts in use, I definately know better than that

Thanks for the suggestions.......

Alex Nash

Ok, I am always following this little sentence: Learn from your misstakes. So yes, why not try it out and see how it goes. It is not hard to change later.

It is good that you are trying to sell something, and you should show it as you say, not hide it. But, to show that you sell something, there is no need to make the site look "spammy" (as I said, that is what the brain indicates when I am browsing your site). It look so hmm.. familiar? Non-Original? I do not know why, but it is something that immediately gives me the Thumbs down when I see a site that follow certain patterns.

Another example is when a product site got this GIANT salesletter. That looks so so spammy, ****ty etc. Like it is all bull**** and fake. No-one will probably read half of it.

So, nothing against you at all. Just wanted to clarify what I meant.

Hope it will work and give good results.


Regards,
A.N

Learn from your mistakes :-)