Owen Smith

Could I please have a little feedback on webworldwonders(dot)com

This is a clickbank product that I wish to get out soon. Also is it good enough to interest people into wanting to add it to their affiliating opt in lists and try and profit from this?

It would be split at a rate of 50/50, 50% to me and 50% to you. Please give me as much critisism as it deserves.

Regards

errorman

I don't really like the design of this affiliate type website

What happened to my Horse Classifieds and customer service

Owen Smith

any ideas how I could improve it.

sainteve21

I think it's OK as a landing/squeeze page, but it looks like so many others out there & when people looking for this sort of thing in this market I believe they tend to become 'blind' to the average looking squeeze page

How about adding a video review of the product?

The title doesn't seem very catchy or eyecatching, I would definitely try and spruce that up

Is this your own Clickbank product? If it is then the 50/50 split is a bit low for Clickbank these days. Take a look at the profit splits of the popular products in Clickbank to give you a better idea

Best of luck

Steve

sainteve21

Just noticed that your platform is WP with the Sales Letter Theme - point of note if you are using this theme, then so are a lot others (because it's easy to implement)

If you want to keep using this theme then I would get into the stylesheet and do some CSS changes so that it doesn't look like everybody elses

Steve

Owen Smith

Thanks, I have changed the title, but I am unsure if its still not catchy eniugh, what are your thooughts?

sainteve21

OK, I see you've changed the title, but I still don't think it's very catchy.

Why not call it what it is, something like 'Step-By-Step To Everything You Need To Be A Successful Internet Marketer', or something along those lines

Also, your sub-title now doesn't match up with the title

Lastly, I would change the font/title graphic to something with more 'punch', you could do something very quickly in Photoshop or Gimp

Steve

Owen Smith

I am rubbish with photoshop and gimp, why suggestions on fonts I could use?

sainteve21

OK, got a couple of other bits to do but will have a play in Photoshop for you & then send you a link to what I've done - PM me

Is this your own Clickbank product?

& can you put any video up on there?

Owen Smith

I cannot PM yet I do not have enough posts. Yes 100% my own product! can I email you or you pm me your email please?

Regards

sainteve21

send me an email via my website 'contact us' page at http://www.saintevemarketing.com

Owen Smith

I have sent you one

rickyponting6

lot of info on home page, i dont like it!

better make some more pages!

Owen Smith

Should I add a picture of myself to prove I am young as the whole aim of this product is to show any age can make good money online?

Take a look at my example

Also, I have not received an email back form yourself.

sainteve21

If it were me then I would add a picture

Just finishing up some other stuff then will play with your title graphic in photoshop, then send you an email

sainteve21

what have you called your product?

Owen Smith

Thanks thats brilliant

sainteve21

I think '$9500 every month, autopilot, zero setup cost' sounds a bit too good to be true & a lot like a lot of other 'pie-in-the-sky' promises that a lot of other people use & would probably turn most people off

Your original 'google, bing, yahoo etc love it' was a better sub-title

Owen Smith

Do you think? Well I know it is possible to make this much money monthly, obviously not over night. Do you think its not a believable promise then?

I am unsure how to approach this as this ebook is aimed at teaching you all aspects of the web, its not predominantly a method of making money?

Owen Smith

I will be away from my desk for the next 3 hours. please catch me on my email.

Regards

sainteve21

email sent with link to title graphic

Steve Wells

Its nice and clean, the header is a problem, it looks stretched and non professional, the payment buttons have writing on them, which needs to be taken off....other than that it looks nice.

Owen Smith

I am back at my desk, thought I would be gone much longer, thank you for the logo I will apply it in the next 30 min. What do you think about the rest of my page now? Up to the 'do you want subscriber statics like this'

sainteve21

Yeah, the 'Add to Cart' button has writing on it, especially visible in the lighter orange shaded part

Apart from that it looks pretty good

I think if this is an ebook, then people should be made aware of this fact somewhere on the page, also if it is an ebook I don't think many people will want to part with $77 for an ebook no matter how good it is

Can it not be made into a partworks course, which would equate better to the $77 charge?

Owen Smith

Its is a course, I sell hard copies of this for $800 a pop. With 5 books and 5 Full DVD's, I will obviously have to squeeze it down for bandwith and load purposes.

sainteve21

Have you already configured & packaged it ready for digital download & Clickbank?

Owen Smith

No I havent yet, I will have it done within the next 5 days, I still need to do the affiliate page and a few other pages. How do you think it will do in the current clickbank climate?

sainteve21

Who knows, it really depends on how well the product is received by the consumers & if you can get positive reviews for it

Also, it depends how well your landing page converts and the quality of affiliates promoting it

Owen Smith

But it should definatelly be in for a few sales, I am only bothered about covering the Clickbank fees, as if it doesnt do well. I can put it down to experience.

coolice

Once of the foundations of a good landing page that produces sales is the header. You should make it more attractive and colorful. You can also have an exit pop-up to get for maximum results.

Owen Smith

Thank you for the Ideas there, I am in the middle of creating an exit page, which will hopefully pull visitors back. How much should I milk the exit page, as I have noticed a lot of people will add it on the exit page, so you have to click it like 4 times before you can leave the website.

sainteve21

where do you sell your hard copies from?

Owen Smith

From Another website. Called NCC

lancasterjoeradio

On the graphics side, I could never master the Photoshop, even though it's considered THE BEST in the field! But I have used successfully PhotoImpact, now a part of the Corel Corp, and legal for a fraction of the price of Photoshop.

sainteve21

I like the re-done photos, nice touch & also your exit popup

Guess you didn't like the title graphic I sent though

The whole text of the page now seems easier to read through now & people are made aware of exactly what they are getting

Good luck

sainteve21

Have you thought about including pics of DVDs & books to give the whole package a bit of substance and more perceived value to the $77 investment?

sainteve21

You could also state that you sell hard copies if preferred for $800 & put a link in to the hard copy sales page - creating more urgency to purchase for $77

kittyd

i don`t know how much of the site it was in the begining still reflects the one i can see now, but there are some things that definitely need change, beyong the fact that i feel i have seen the same site over nad over and over again (which is quite bad, cuz if one feels it had been over it once, no matter how many clicks one has to make to leave the site fast, one will )

1. the header: the white to black gradient brings nothing cool, no extra value, no extra emphasis amd it looks stretched. maybe the logos & sentence could work as a over-title, but definitely not as title. And what is that line underneath it?

2. the heading: the grey text looks professional, but the red shaddowed amount is pretty painful. the sum in red and angled is not a bad idea, however, i believe it should be a little darker red. bigger and with a less proheminent shadow


3: the house & car pics: writing the "no mortgage" & "no loan" over them like that, give the impression that you are actually cutting them out (like in the "no smoke" sign). a horizontal text above might look better (invluding the descriptions that you put underneath, barely visible even if they`re so big)

also, the title.... is actually missing....

i don`t mean to dismiss your site, but my belief is that if you don`t show that you actually spent some time or money for good quality, a buyer won`t spend time nor money on the product, and these 3 things need some redoing.

best luck!

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Orlando Web Design

To me when I read this, I would have probably clicked away about 10 seconds as it looks spammy and scammy.

Just looks like so many other squeeze pages out there. Nothing original, nothing that would make me want to buy.

You need to come up with more original sales copy. Something to catch attention.

Good luck

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Khalid Abdullah

I think, the design is not enough delicious for my eyes...

you don't have header, and goog banner...

but, for elegant and simple minisite you have, I Like ^_^

Owen Smith

Is there anyone I could pay $$ for a good header and images and a but of a clean up if possible ?

Regards

rautella

Contact me, i'll design a nice looking header for your website.

Thanks

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Owen Smith

rautella, I do not have enough posts to pm you. please pm me your email.

kittyd

i can help you out too but i don`t have enaugh posts aither... uuuf

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Owen Smith

My email address is admin@blogblizard.com

rautella

email me here rautella.gaf"at"gmail.com

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Owen Smith

I have sent an email.

Owen Smith

I have changed the header and background, with a few other things also changed, take a look and tell me what you think.

kittyd

with the grey background it already looks more professional. still more work needed :P

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sainteve21

Any estimate on when you will have your product ready & released to Clickbank? Be interested to see that