How's My Site Looking So Far.........?

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This is the site that I will be using in the near future to bring in more freelance work for myself, its not finished yet, but its getting there, what do you think so far......?

Here it is........
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  • Profile picture of the author sharkfla
    Looking great so far! My small 2 cents suggestion; I would put some thumbnail examples of each type of service you provide next to the descriptions (Landing Page with Video, etc)
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  • Profile picture of the author Brian Bustamante
    Site Looks good to me. Best of Luck
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  • Profile picture of the author tonyaphx
    It looks good so far to me the only thing I would change is the prices are the same for the basic squeeze page and the full I would charge either a little less for the basic or a little more for the full.
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    • Profile picture of the author Steve Wells
      Originally Posted by tonyaphx View Post

      It looks good so far to me the only thing I would change is the prices are the same for the basic squeeze page and the full I would charge either a little less for the basic or a little more for the full.
      Thanks, I was changing the graphics out in photoshop and forgot to adjust the prices..........

      Its still a work in progress though, I can't wait to get it up and going.......

      So much to do and so little time to do it..........
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      • Profile picture of the author thefreelancesquad
        It looks great so far...I like that it is clean, simple, and clutter free. This is a great start

        Good Luck!
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  • Profile picture of the author dilawer
    sites looking good
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    • Profile picture of the author stoica
      Great Man! I really like the design!
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  • Profile picture of the author angel1987
    The design is really good and appealing.
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    • Profile picture of the author DJL
      Attractive site, but I note a few spelling errors:

      I personally gaurantee all of my work
      •Stand behind my word (work?)
      •Compatable with all 5 major browsers (occurs twice)
      •Links for privacy policy, ect... (occurs twice)

      Also, graphic under Service #2 has wrong price,
      and I dislike the grey text... black would be more readable.
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      • Profile picture of the author Steve Wells
        Originally Posted by DJL View Post

        Attractive site, but I note a few spelling errors:

        I personally gaurantee all of my work
        •Stand behind my word (work?)
        •Compatable with all 5 major browsers (occurs twice)
        •Links for privacy policy, ect... (occurs twice)

        Also, graphic under Service #2 has wrong price,
        and I dislike the grey text... black would be more readable.
        Thanks, I know, its a work in progress, not ready to go yet.....

        A lot of the text was just thrown in as filler thats why its got mistakes......
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  • Profile picture of the author Arthur Mc Culloch
    Very nice, clean site. Doesnt deserve any critique. On being pushed to offer some... maybe you dont need to repeat adding "honesty" and "Integrity" to the services sections.
    Assume you've researched your pricing - but they seem a bit low. you'll be bz! good luck with your launch
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    • Profile picture of the author Steve Wells
      Originally Posted by Arthur Mc Culloch View Post

      Very nice, clean site. Doesnt deserve any critique. On being pushed to offer some... maybe you dont need to repeat adding "honesty" and "Integrity" to the services sections.
      Assume you've researched your pricing - but they seem a bit low. you'll be bz! good luck with your launch
      LOL! Thats just filler text until I get the real text added.......

      Thanks though..........

      I know the pricing is low, but in order to compete on this forum I need to be lower..........although this type of work really deserves to earn more, but when you have to compete with countries that think 10 dollars is good pay for a day, well, you get the picture..........
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  • Profile picture of the author troykrause
    I like, it. Nice and clean. Easy to navigate. Keep up the great work
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  • Profile picture of the author robmena
    As a web designer, it looks great but does look like a template, but they still work good. Market your site and youll be fine.
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    • Profile picture of the author Steve Wells
      Originally Posted by robmena View Post

      As a web designer, it looks great but does look like a template, but they still work good. Market your site and youll be fine.
      It is...........but I am redoing as much as possible of it, new graphics, color scheme, possibly layout, ect..............

      I don't need to spend my time designing a great site when I can find a free one and adapt it as I wish. Thats the great thing about being a graphics designer. Most people wouldn't know where to start doing this, maybe that is something I can offer as a service.........?
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  • Profile picture of the author kittyd
    it ain`t your design, you bought it!
    And iven if you say you customised it, there is pretty little that you have already customise so that another web designer could actually evaluate YOUR job on it.
    are you doing this review thing just to get clients? Good job!
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    • Profile picture of the author Steve Wells
      Originally Posted by kittyd View Post

      it ain`t your design, you bought it!
      And iven if you say you customised it, there is pretty little that you have already customise so that another web designer could actually evaluate YOUR job on it.
      are you doing this review thing just to get clients? Good job!
      Hunh?:confused:

      No, the layout is a free template, I have customized it ALOT.....thats what I am asking about, how it looks, why does it matter if its free or not, its been customized by me?

      Are you accusing me of doing this review thing to get clients to purchase from a website that has no links to purchase a job yet? C'mon, give me break please.......

      If you have something that can help with the design for me, please say so, but I am not an open target for negative accusations about my motivations on asking for a review. You do not know me at all, so please do not imply that I am doing something wrong or shady......

      Lets continue to stay friendly here okay..........

      P.S. in psychology its been proven that a person who is dishonest and cheats and lies a lot, tends to always see things through their own skewed viewpoint, meaning they think everyone else has the same morals as them..... I noticed in your signature you had this quote:
      "If at first you don`t succeed, cheat ! Repeat until caught. Then, lie... " =))
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      • Profile picture of the author kittyd
        haha.... and those that are guilty tend to become defensive

        my signature is a joke, as you might have noticed the smiley and that it is in quotes....
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        • Profile picture of the author Steve Wells
          Originally Posted by kittyd View Post

          haha.... and those that are guilty tend to become defensive

          my signature is a joke, as you might have noticed the smiley and that it is in quotes....
          I'm gonna let the accusation ride this time, but if you continue to accuse me of something or you keep taking shots at my reputation of being honest, I will have no other choice but to report your posts to the mods...

          I am not sure if you realize what forum you are on, this is not like other forums, in that people here are normally helpful and not attacky.

          Please just find someone else to attack......
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  • Profile picture of the author ViperKorp
    Site looks great man! Templates are available for a reason right.
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  • Profile picture of the author kittyd
    do as you wish and report it
    what i`m saying and you seem to mess the point is that you made way to little adjustment to a template to be worth a review as per "your work" in the site, therefore my acusation. you might as well ask us to review that free template.

    so, please report it if you wish, my opinion is still my opinion and it ain`t chaging.
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    • Profile picture of the author fabby
      The site looks ok to me. Clear and easy on the eye.
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  • Profile picture of the author fatima39
    This site looks awesome and i also like the design
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  • Profile picture of the author TrafficMystic
    Looks cool... The template looks 'fresh' if you know what i mean.. it's good..
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  • Profile picture of the author james Kigotho
    pretty cool... clear and uncluttered... though I would remove the frames on the pics, but that is just a style suggestion.
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  • Profile picture of the author webinsiders
    Looks pretty good so far, nice and clean. Only thing I would suggest right now that stood out was how confusing the services section seemed. You have 14 services all listed there and it seems cluttered and confusing. I would make a separate SERVICES page and split it up so your services are into categories (4-5) and then each category has different levels of services or packages
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  • Profile picture of the author GMatthers
    site looks good to me.. Good Luck Mate!
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    • Profile picture of the author casius
      Site looks good, but there is one think which I think you coudl fix is the rounded corners of that blue square. Probably if you will keep and the gray stroke rounded would be much better. It is just a simple details, but in general looks good
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  • Profile picture of the author cloteria
    Neat! I like how you place the basic packages info your client would be needing in the home page. Did you do that?
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    • Profile picture of the author Steve Wells
      Originally Posted by cloteria View Post

      Neat! I like how you place the basic packages info your client would be needing in the home page. Did you do that?
      Yes, I wanted to put the most ordered services on the home page, so its easy to find and very easy to navigate. There is still lots of textual work that needs to be done and links to other pages that are behind the scenes.

      I wanted to only have like three page options as tabs, instead of the normal like 5 page otions, makes it less cluttered and more streamlined.

      I like choices but sometimes less is best, I hate going to Walmart and buying bread with all the bread choices, its nuts, although I am thankful for the abundance and choices I would love for things to be less complicated when shopping for bread......lol!
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  • Profile picture of the author Steve Wells
    Originally Posted by Tooschee View Post

    the site is decent for now, but with a little work it can be good

    but, one thing I always check when someone offer any designing is W3C vaildations, and for your site i have this:


    If You want to offer anything close to professional I would at least get my homepage to validate with W3C standards , for some clients it's very important to know, that You can design and code at the same level of professionalism
    Will work on that thankfully its a template that I did not originally design, I have mainly only customized most of the graphics and played with the html code and css to make it look like I want..........

    If you would like to take a crack at showing me the quick fixes be my guest, you can send me via P.M. the code..........

    Thats also why I do not offer full webdesign service yet.......I think its hard to compete with the low priced webdesigners from other countries where $5 to $8 dollars an hour is great pay............
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  • Profile picture of the author EquestrianGal
    Excellent site! It is very easy to navigate and looks really good. The only thing I noticed is that it seems a big long but you're offering a lot of services too. Great job and good luck with it!
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    • Profile picture of the author Steve Wells
      Originally Posted by EquestrianGal View Post

      Excellent site! It is very easy to navigate and looks really good. The only thing I noticed is that it seems a big long but you're offering a lot of services too. Great job and good luck with it!
      Yes, its a little long, mainly as you can see, because of the different services. I doubt I will go much longer than what it is now. I just didn't want people to have to click through so many pages to see what they need to know upfront, which is "whats available" and the "pricing".

      Its still a work in progress, and I plan on having it all finished and ready to go within a month. Just a little work here and there is all I can do on it right now.

      Thanks for your input...every little bit helps.....

      Steve
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      • Profile picture of the author kpmedia
        It looks like just another template to me, but that's because I see a lot of templates. Your customers may not know. I sometimes think sites take a hit in respect, if it looks to "templatey".

        It's not ugly, so that's a plus.
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        • Profile picture of the author Steve Wells
          Originally Posted by kpmedia View Post

          It looks like just another template to me, but that's because I see a lot of templates. Your customers may not know. I sometimes think sites take a hit in respect, if it looks to "templatey".

          It's not ugly, so that's a plus.
          Well, maybe thats because its a template...........he he, the difference is that I have customized it lots so far.

          I am not trying to hide the fact its a template, neither am I trying to say "hey my website was designed from a template".

          I do not think that a customer will care either way, all they care about is that they get quality service and a great product.

          So far, from all the people that have seen it online here and others I know say that they woud feel comfortable purchasing from it.........which is what I am after, to make the customer feel comfortable and confident about their purchase.
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  • Profile picture of the author wayfarer
    The text against the blue lined background on the right side of the slideshow is a little hard to read. Maybe it's just my monitor, but the dark text with CSS3 text-shadow against the lined background gives makes it seem to have a glare of green around it. If you're going to say something important with that text, maybe you can clean it up a bit so it's more readable.
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    • Profile picture of the author Steve Wells
      Originally Posted by wayfarer View Post

      The text against the blue lined background on the right side of the slideshow is a little hard to read. Maybe it's just my monitor, but the dark text with CSS3 text-shadow against the lined background gives makes it seem to have a glare of green around it. If you're going to say something important with that text, maybe you can clean it up a bit so it's more readable.
      Thanks, it looks ok in some browers, and some there is a green outline, I think its in the css, so I need to change it up a bit, I think I am going to take the grid opacity and turn it down a few notches to make the text stand out better when its done..........
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  • Profile picture of the author GMatthers
    It is looking awesome. keep it up. Good luck
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  • Profile picture of the author colinph970
    that's a really nice site, well organised and good layout. Best of luck!
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  • Profile picture of the author digital_girl
    Looking nice. The color combination is quite impressive. Keep it up
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    Nice site and color bag round is really good. It attractive one keep it up!!!
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  • Profile picture of the author tinywebdesigner
    Nice look & I think this is a one of Free CSS Templates! isn't it?
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  • Profile picture of the author CarloD.
    One thing I would recommend, looking at the arrow buttons in the rate box at the top, is to have both the main arrow image and the hover joined as 1 image in your css, and on hover change the background position for the rollover.

    That will prevent the flicker of having to load the image the first time you roll over.
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  • Profile picture of the author etechnc
    Looks like what i would call a very "clean" look. Nice. Good use of whitespace and colors. Exactly the feel i want for a couple of my site ideas. But i, ahem, seem to know so much about the mechanics of IM, that i just cant build one.
    Was this an engrossed photoshop project ? slicing and fading and all that jazz. or were you able to grab something close and work with it?
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    • Profile picture of the author Steve Wells
      Originally Posted by etechnc View Post

      Looks like what i would call a very "clean" look. Nice. Good use of whitespace and colors. Exactly the feel i want for a couple of my site ideas. But i, ahem, seem to know so much about the mechanics of IM, that i just cant build one.
      Was this an engrossed photoshop project ? slicing and fading and all that jazz. or were you able to grab something close and work with it?
      I basically created all the graphics but just a few. I did my best to design a color scheme that worked well. There was lots of Photoshop work that was done. I love it though!

      I basically found a template a redid the whole thing, except the base coding. I did manipulate the coding a bit to get the desired spacing and placing of things. Its actually a work in progress and hopefully will be finished within the next month or so.
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  • Profile picture of the author steveee
    Looks good. You've obviously put a lot of work into it.

    I especially liked your "My Business Foundations" and "Things I'll Do". That really sold it to me.

    Well done.
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    I like the color but its a long home page. need to long scroll down which not professional
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    • Profile picture of the author Steve Wells
      Originally Posted by Enetwork View Post

      I like the color but its a long home page. need to long scroll down which not professional
      Yep, its a longer home page, but that beats someone having to jump through thousands of links to find out what theey need and want to know asap about the services being offered.

      I understand your point of view but I think it will be just fine for what I am doing.

      All things change and you have to be willing to adapt and find ways of delivering to people in the simplist way possible. So in my opinion this is one of the simplist ways to do just that, they can scroll down and see whats available right from the very first page.

      Thats the great thing about designers, we can be individualist and still please people, thats the beauty of design.

      Personally I cant stand being redirected through 2 or 3 pages to find out that they are too expensive or do not offer what I need. I just cut to the chase and save them some time in my opinion or else I would have to have seperate links just to get to a page for all these services and then they still have to scroll down, so, I have done my best so far.

      I guess I will find out when I make it live.......?

      I still am thankful for your input, any and all input helps me make it better.
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      Originally Posted by Enetwork View Post

      I like the color but its a long home page. need to long scroll down which not professional
      I would say that's a preference thing.... how would it be unprofessional?

      It is getting lengthy, but he also has lots of services....

      You could easily cut the services out and make a Services Info box. that would cut the length of the homepage.
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