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Hello Friends Hi please check my site CLICK HERE so that i can make changes how is design,color,format. Thanks seo_submission |
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Looks nice. Your copy reads like it was not written by a native English speaker. Grammar problems. |
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1) Way too many colors. Google 'html complimentary colors' to learn more. You should have 2-4 colors max, and they need to be complimentary 2) The background green is too bright. It takes away from the site. Change it to a light grey or neutral color. Draw the visitors' eyes to the center of the site with a call to action. 3) Too many options up front. I know nothing about the company but see lots of services. Not sure where to start. Consider focusing on major service on home page and list other services with smaller icons. Right now, you're trying to define every service on the home page. 4) The testimonials are flashing so fast, they're useless 5) Why can't I click on the testimonials and read the entire text? 6) What is the box in the top left? An ad? It says SEO Services, 24/7 but why is it there? Seems out of place. Hope this helps. Sam |
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Who is your target market? If it is people within the internet marketing field, they will understand the options. If you are targeting companies that know nothing about internet marketing, they probably won't know what all that "link building", "article submission" kind of stuff is. |
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The header is very tiny you should enlarge it as it's the face of your website.
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You definitely need a Bigger title... something clear that says where I came to...
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Your site is good. Personally I felt bottom side have lots of colored tables. If u use all tables in the shades of green I think It would me more nice.
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The site looks overall pretty good. Expand the banner at the top to more of a leaderboard, so it can be noticed better. It looks really epic! |
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I would make a header banner across your content so it looks more flush. Also increase the size of your logo so it "pops" when a person loads your page.
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Many things have been mentioned and i think you need to add add something more in title as the site is related to SEO and there is not much mentioned in title also you can use heading in the body to promote SEO service,if its your keyword.I simply cant understand why u ignored this angle :P
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Your site looks ok but the header is much to small and looks unprofessional. I would really increase the header and add a human element to your site. Adding a human element is guaranteed to increase conversion. Also a number in the top right corner with a generic picture of someone in customer service would help you out quite a bit. I don't see an e-mail capture on the home page either. Definitely need that you get leads from your site. Have clients sign up for a free consultation or an SEO tip of the week e-mail. Then market and sell the people that sign up. Those could be really good leads for you. Don't miss out on them. I don't like the look of the boxes with all the different services. Instead I would do some sort of graphic there. Like for SEO you can have a graphic of a crowd of people walking to their website. Something that portrays the benefit they get from SEO. Anyway - you're doing a good job - keep it up. Adam |
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the logo is not professional, seems some cheap service provider
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Yes. My 1st comment (expression) is about the header too... Way too Small. I need to make make face closer to the screen to see it :P And 2 about the color (your Services 'Block'), I would like to recommend this website as your reference about finding the best and suitable color for your website. Color Scheme Designer 3 Thanks and all the best! |
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Logo is too much small and it must be professional.
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Design is good but color Blocks are too much you must use one or two color. Logo is also small. Must make changes in it. I must say its fine and looks good. Its not so much bad. Good luck!!!!! |
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Hmm .. All I found is that the site was slow to load for me and if I turn off the images, there is nothing viewable. Try making your website less image-based .. this way, the loading speed will raise too |
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Yes! Like other says logo is to small! but the over all of the site is good enough! |
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Too many colors still, and the javascript from all of the boxes makes my browser run slow...to be honest, I closed the website tab because of this issue.
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Loading problem in your site. Please check. Design is good but logo is small must be made in big format. I must say its good.
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I clicked on the site and my antivirus screamed at me about a trojan horse, so I just left without looking. You better look into that.
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My Anti-Virus (AVG) got alerted too by the common.js file. Check it out please. |
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Sorry! Could not review due to my Kaspersky Internet Secuirty 2010 is reporting that your website has a virus called Heur:Exploit.Script.Generic coming from a script located at malepad.ru:8080/jquery.jxx Did anyone else have this problem? |
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I just checked when i was going with reading some post so i found your Post so seen your website which is working fine and Design and theme you chosen is well good. Really Good and appreciated with your Hard work taken in it. Nice Work and good design.
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The site looks perfect... looks tempting and i believe can convert leads to sales...
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I do not like the header...sorry. Too plain.
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You need to redo your header and footer it doesnt looks clean
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Your site is good. If u use all tables in the shades of green I think It would me more nice. |
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Design is really looking amazing basically you use some cool color But there is a little problem , your site logo isn't matching with site banner. The logo isn't perfect for your site. I think you should change is. It'll be more beautiful and attractive to users and it'll help you to get good traffic. Telling everything honestly. |
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the site design is nice, clean and working. My only crit is your logo - it looks randomly shoved on their and not part of the design. Once the issue with the logo is sorted out, you'll have yourself a very fresh and professional website. Peace, One. |
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The site design very very simple. I think you should add something interesting for eyes. maybe more colors. |
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I'm your target market and I wouldn't buy from you. When I see the does not have the logo background color that matches the background of the page it is an instant turnoff. Save your logo with as a PNG with a transparent background. It will look a lot smoother. I would also upgrade the graphics.
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Your design is pretty good. Menu bar and background color perfect. But I don't like Header and Footer. You should change this in my opinion. |
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Spelling "destroy" correctly would be the first fix. Currently, I see "destory" 1. I know that theme and I believe it has a blue color scheme as well. I thought that looked much more professional. 2. Your description in your intro box: Seoservices24x7 is an internet marketing and web promotional firm. We offer services in search engine optimization (SEO), web development and design, link building, interactive public relations and so on. Our promotional services are designed in packages to suit different needs. And I would take out the words and so on. That makes it look and sound so unprofessional. Seriously. Either list all the services, or put , etc. 3. Your 4 images. If you're really picky about making the site perfect... use properly formatted images to fit. They look stretched out. |
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Its a decent site, some of the images at the bottom though are stretched and lost their quality. You might want to fix that as it looks unprofessional. Good job overall keep working |
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Bardzo ładna strona.
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Simple and clean ... I like this |
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