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Squeeze Page Design Critique

by dem0x7
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Hey guys,

Would like to get your opinion on my Squeeze Page design, any helpful comments would be appreciated. What do you think? Do you like it?

7 Secrets To Marketing Success - By Leon Rawitz

Thanks in advance.
#critique #design #page #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author thedog
    Looks ok to me, they only thing I'd have a look at is the footer.

    I'd increase the leading and the point size of the "7 Secrets ....." and decrease the point size of the copyright text, or try a light grayish blue.
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  • Profile picture of the author mt33
    your design and template is nice.

    good luck
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  • Profile picture of the author hockeyroom28
    Yeah, nice template - can't say its too original, but should get the job done! Nice work!
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  • Profile picture of the author Ookie
    To be honest, it looks cheesy... sorry dude. It is well organized, but the graphics just look cheesy. I see these same effects on every squeeze page ever. Apart from that, it looks good and informational and not spammy.
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    • Profile picture of the author jasonman
      Originally Posted by Ookie View Post

      To be honest, it looks cheesy... sorry dude. It is well organized, but the graphics just look cheesy. I see these same effects on every squeeze page ever. Apart from that, it looks good and informational and not spammy.
      Couldn't have said it better...so...I didn't... o_O
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  • Profile picture of the author Flareman
    The book cover at the bottom right corner looks squished. It should be given more space at the top. Right now it looks like you are running out of space and just need to fit the book cover in there. Other than that, it looks pretty decent.
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  • Profile picture of the author dem0x7
    Thanks for your comments! I'm just not sure how the graphics look "cheesy". Is it the arrow pointing to the opt-in box? There's not too many graphics on there except the logo, the money, and the arrow.

    I guess it is seen on every page because it increases conversions. That's the goal of the Squeeze Page. Design is a plus, but it's all about what works.

    @Flareman, I agree. It is kind of there because I ran out of space. I do realize now though it needs to be given more room, it's too close to the Private Policy text. Thank you!
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    • Profile picture of the author mosiekk
      i always go by my first impressions when I visit a site... so here are mine.

      I like the shield you have at the top. I think it is a great attention grabber. The problem I could see you might have is that it is pushing your headline down further on the page. You may want to test later to see if removing the report title increases your optin rates.

      Secondly, i agree with everyone else about the report... not only does it seem like it is thrown in for good measure but it is also facing the wrong way. I would suggest moving it the other side of the footer text. It looks like it would have more room to breath over there.

      Honestly, in my experience, what works for everyone else won't always work for you. It is always necessary to test and find what works for your particular niche. I test a multitude of different layouts. i.e. text graphics vs. no graphics except signup box.

      Hope this helps!
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      • Profile picture of the author Tracy Shaffer
        A few things:

        I'm distracted by the gold arrows. I don't mind arrows on salespages in general, but these look like I should be clicking on them to start audio. Red checks or arrows might get the idea across better.

        Second, I agree with the previous commenters that it looks a bit cheesy. I think for me, this is because of the money and shield at the top, and how some details look like they are made out of metal. Most of the big time IM sites I've seen (of people who really are making a ton) are actually pretty plain. Also, the shield is for the report correct? It looks like you're trying to do branding with it, yet it is front and center and draws the eye. If you're trying to do branding, are you branding 1. your report or 2. you?

        Now, I'm not sure what is actually inside the report, but can you identify some more punchy bullets so I actually know what I'm going to be able to use from the report as soon as I open it? I like your first bullet, but lets go with 2 and 3. Get the action words out front. Use the word "marketing" less. This is a bit repetitive. Show me the money with your bullets so I feel like I'm going to make more if I read it.

        Like " Failproof process to DOUBLE (or whatever) your sales using these basic tips"

        Instead of "A 5-step, fail-proof process for keeping your marketing on-track, all year long"

        If you get the action words out front, it creates a little more excitement and gives the prospect an idea of what they're getting without feeling like they are going through the fine print.

        Hope that helps.
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        • Profile picture of the author Neil12
          Hi,

          i don't think it looks overly cheesy, though I guess it may look a bit bling with the piles of money along the top of the header.

          Nevertheless, it has a nice finish to my eyes, and has attractive colours. I'd make the page longer if you can, most of the squeeze pages i've come across, mine included, give alot of detail and i want to know more about what the report is doing.

          there's nothing better than being sold something well, it's important to over deliver from the word go,l whilst at the same time creating a need.

          t looks like you have gone to a certain amount of effort and this is admirable, but in my personal opinion you should add more content, maybe try a video of yourself introducing the topic in more detail...

          Good luck
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  • Profile picture of the author bucksuper
    demo,
    I'll tell you how to make it perfect...
    The dollar bills look cheesy. Get rid of them. If you want something to convey wealth use the rear end of a lamborghini or an iced out Breitling.

    Most important... I'm not sure if you're familiar with the term "above the fold". It means the space that visible when a surfer hits your page. Right now you're wasting the top 150 pixels or so of the page.

    Tighten up the graphics at the top of the page. Get rid of the money. Put the logo to the left and the tag line to the right of the logo (this will save you 50 pixels and move your entire registration box up.

    Make the rounded background of the registration box a color that draws attention to it. Make the background of the page a lighter color. Get rid of the "ATTENTION..." text. I'd even move the book at the bottom right up and to the left of the Red sales text.

    Use my suggestions as a starting point then A/B test multiple layouts. I wouldn't even bother testing this one.

    Best of luck with the project!
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