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My List Building Website

by addice
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  • WEB DESIGN
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Ok, I have this website DotComPreneur.com > Landing Page Template and I thought I should ask for a review, since I've given some of my honest reviews.

Any feedback is ok!

*I realized that my <title> tag has not changed, though*

What else can be seen as a problem here?

Thanks in advance!
#building #list #website
  • Profile picture of the author clark.angus
    good site buddy
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  • Profile picture of the author DaveJohnson
    Banned
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    • Profile picture of the author I4Visual
      Originally Posted by DaveJohnson View Post

      I agree Rod and I think you also need to add more information how it can help to others. You could also include videos and screenshots how you works or how easy to use your product. You should really need to persuade your viewers that your product is really beneficial to them.

      Exactly what dave has said, you really need to reassure any visitors of the quality and functionality of your product.

      As said before, the design and background need some work, having it plain like that does it no favours, a nice modern design would work best.
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  • Profile picture of the author Arrowsharp
    Crisp, clean. The slow content makes it appealing, needs a little something to give it some spark. Other than that all good.
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  • Profile picture of the author addice
    Thanks guys, will work on the design part tonight!

    Ok, for those who are already in the list, can I ask another favor from you?

    I need to have feedback about what I've given is sufficient for you, and also if there's anything for me to improve on... Negative feedback are welcomed!

    PS: For those who have yet signed up, check the link on top of the page, or the signature. ^_^

    Thanks!
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  • Profile picture of the author dwave
    Clean I like it.
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  • Profile picture of the author iamsuneel
    Its simple and neat. Just states its purpose very clearly.

    I observed a spelling mistake in this text:

    Yes Jia Bin! I wan the free bonus from you now!
    I want.... You missed the t.
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    • Profile picture of the author addice
      Originally Posted by iamsuneel View Post

      Its simple and neat. Just states its purpose very clearly.

      I observed a spelling mistake in this text:



      I want.... You missed the t.
      lol! Thanks for catching the spelling mistake! ^_^
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  • Profile picture of the author jpibanez
    Work on the spacing and the typography. But overall, its good.
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  • Profile picture of the author miked
    Ok.

    Clean website. Nice looking. Good job!

    Now for negative comments

    1. Even "free" stuff that you are giving away to build a list should have a hook. You have to have an irresistible offer in the header.

    Your headline is BS (sorry). It is unbelievable. You have got to make your headline believable, and irresistible. Make me an offer that I cannot refuse. Make me an offer that I would be willing to pay you $7 for... but that you are giving away for free!

    2. I don't know who your audience is. You are trying to solve the following problems:

    1. I don't know how to build a website or a list. The job is too tedious for me.

    2. I always have problems writing email to become a sales convert.

    3. I can't bring in as much traffic as I always wanted.

    4. I have no idea how to come out with an ebook.

    5. I don't know how I can start marketing using auto-responder (what on earth is that?)
    Focus on ONE problem and build a squeeze page around that. Then build another squeeze page about solving a different problem. You are trying to solve everything with this squeeze page... And what does "I have no idea how to come out with an ebook" have to do with email marketing? You need to focus on single problem and solution - email marketing.

    3. What the heck are bonuses doing in the copy? I saw bonuses and I was looking for the main product and I didn't see it...

    4. So I opt in and get an ebook? I don't have time to read an ebook. I just want to solve a single problem. If this is a PLR product, strip out of the content the solution to ONE problem and create a simple short report that I can read in 15 minutes and solve my problem. And promote that. Get rid of the other "bonuses" that aren't bonuses...

    5. Your opt in form is wayyyyy below the fold. Put a copy of the opt in form above the fold so people in a hurry will not have to scroll down to see and fill out your opt in form.

    Some ideas.

    Good luck!

    Mike
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  • Profile picture of the author ryanhall789
    If you really want your product to succeed in market you will have to provide more information the products and pros and cons of products.
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