newbie, my site sucks, I know, but want you to tell me

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im trying to post something, says there is a link? this is a test. hopefully it went through????

Hello all, im brand new to this forum. Overall im new to the internet marketing game, but not new to the net. I LOVE the internet and technology and I am pretty net/tech savvy, most importantly fast learner and have a "knack" for this stuff. So, after many years of real estate investing in short sales, we wrote an ebook, I HATE that word e-book! reminds me of treasure island in digital form or something, this is a short sales survival kit! so anyway..I KNOW this site sucks, and probably violates about 150 different "do not do" things that a veteran would easily spot and call me out for. BUT, I did this just to get all my thoughts out on "paper" so to speak.

I want to get your feedback, I plan on usin the ole kajabi when its released and doing a pre-launch campaign.


Like I said, this sucks, i KNOW, but wanted to get all my thoughts out about short sales and the flow. now I just need me a few of those fancy squeeze pages and landing pages, content management, aweber autoresponder, etc. and Im good to go, oh yea, then I have to actually get people to the site. Its on clickbank but of course, nothings happening.

okay all, you'll be seeing me ALOT on here, im a night owl with my laptop always seeking info and learning.


wont allow me to post my url, so just add dot com to the end of my user name, thats my site.


thanks
#newbie #site #sucks
  • Profile picture of the author Topgunb
    Your sales letter is LONG

    It has the seeds of success, but will need serious work.

    Too much info, to much unecessary info. It just kills the sale.

    I can help you drop me an email.

    Brian
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    • Profile picture of the author HotDamnShortSales
      thanks brian. I am thinking about using one of these "guru" squeeze pages, like quick squeeze pages dot com, also going to use one of those killersalesvideos as the intro. Where I need the assistance and input is actually marketing the site, traffic, etc. thats what everyone wants right? i did get suckered into affiliate x products and also automasstraffic. but Im canceling, didn't realize it was monthly, of course I cant get hold of anyone to cancel. guess ill have to just get a new card then when they try to bill it wont work.

      I sincerely appreciate your feedback, I'm a savvy, fast learner, looking forward to taking in as much as I can.

      chris
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  • Profile picture of the author g0ld3n.tig3r
    Very nice design though i think the banner takes a bit of extra space.
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  • Profile picture of the author fbhc
    Your site is better than you think. Maybe make the top banner smaller, maybe half, takes up a lot of screen on a 21.5 mac. Other than that, when I click the tabs, there is a blue square that appears off to the left. Good luck to you. You've got a good PR and alexa ranking.
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