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Sales Page Help?

by the flying haggis
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Can anyone help me with my main sales page? I've been working with this web-site for several months ... I'm getting a little traffic now but very few sales. I've had over 4500 views for my sales web-page, this month alone, but just one sale (and only a few hops). I've reformatted and reworded it several times in recent months and no real change.
Any advice/help would be appreciated.

Can't include my sales page url ... I don't have enough postings? I can provide it though.
#page #sales
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    I'd need to see the site to offer any suggestions.
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    The page looks a bit dated, but its not terrible.

    Your bonuses really don't compliment the product. Your selling a Tinnitus package but your bonuses are for high blood pressure, stress management, nutrition, and sinus problems.

    Having completely unrelated bonuses makes you come off as more of a generalist than a specialist.

    Also, you mention the $60 savings a few times and make reference to the fact that the book sells for $75 offline. Where does it sell for $75. Name names and make solid references. Also, don't use the word offline. That doesn't mean anything. Is it $75 at Barnes & Noble? Is it $75 through Amazon or Demos Medical Publishing? It seems like a pretty lame claim if you cannot back it up.

    You should also put some testimonials on the page from users that have bought your product and will vouch for it. Don't be a dope and make up testimonials. You've gotten some from you users, right? If you havent then give away a couple dozen copies and get some. If you can't get testimonials than you're selling snake oil.

    Last, test a graphical order button, it may work better than the text link.
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