how can i improve my site?

13 years ago

The font in the top left is hard to read and too small. I'd make that more pronounced. Also, I'd fill the white space next to the image of the women, or remove it and bring everything else up above the fold.

Lastly, you need a favicon rather than the default Joomla favicon.

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miked 13 years ago

Looking good!

But there is this empty white space in the header below the blue horizontal bar, and then you have the name of the website and tagline in a little window at the top left.

You need a real header graphic. Just go to fiverr.com or find a Warrior in this forum to get one done for you for $5 USD.

Another comment I have is, who is your target audience? I know it is women who are pregnant, or want to be pregnant.... and that is a problem there - which is it?

And if it is all pregnant women, then you are going to have a really tough time getting traffic.

You have to find subgroups within the niche, and speak to them in their language....

Mike
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coolspot

13 years ago

Originally Posted by Nathan Hangen

The font in the top left is hard to read and too small. I'd make that more pronounced. Also, I'd fill the white space next to the image of the women, or remove it and bring everything else up above the fold.

Lastly, you need a favicon rather than the default Joomla favicon.

thanks for the advice, i was going to put a 728x90 image banner in the large white space, what do you think? will it reduce the quality of the site? i dont want it to be full of static / logo images though..

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WilTGS

13 years ago

Is it wordpress? I could make it look better for you if you explain to me how you make money from it apart form the the gog ads.. In short you need a logo, remove the blue at the top(Although it works with what you got), make the headings a new color try red and make them bold, the color you got just blends with the site.. Nice clean site pay $50 for logo tho.

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shansross

13 years ago

Do following methods,

On page optimization

Creating and submitting sitemaps (XML, HTML, RSS) to various search engines
Implementing traffic tracking codes on all pages
Removing spamming from website pages if present
Checking and rectifying broken links on the website
Checking website load time, spellings etc.
Optimizing images to make them readable by search engine spiders
Removing junk codes form website pages to make them simpler to read by the spiders
Implementing robots files to ensure, spiders are reading only those pages which we actually want them to.

Off page optimization

Writing and publishing articles
Updating, pinging and submitting blogs
Writing and publishing press releases
Updating and submitting RSS feeds
Participating in forums and message boards
Social book marking, and most important
Link building – This includes search engine and directory submissions, one way as well as reciprocal link building.

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samuelarnold

13 years ago

Use another good fond for the text on the top. Using CMS, make your site home page content in order. this will give an appealing look to your site.

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cartoonist

13 years ago

Originally Posted by coolspot

i have been working on this site for a few weeks now, and i kinda like it, but i was wondering what your opinions might be?

its come to a point where i dont really know what else to do with it. please let me know. thanks

all feedback is much appeciated

I like the fresh cool appearance and the graphics are lovely and modern.
The font at the top is a little smaller or perhaps not as clear as it could be for ease of reading. Other than this it looks very nice

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Bob Phantom

13 years ago

I think your website looks really nice and wouldn't change a thing on it!

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Nathan Hangen

13 years ago

Also, what's up with the pictures of women smoking and drinking, like this: http://www.pregnantwoman.co.uk/image...1549852138.jpg

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jamesgillespe

13 years ago

Honestly, i think the cartoon characters did not correctly depict or show concern for pregnant ladies. Secondly, the headings have been used in lighter colors which need to be bold because i think they are less visible. And you can add some background image as well because it is too much white space or you can even color the divs or the cells and leave the other background white. It will also improve your site's visibility.

Though my own opinion

thanks.

James

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Mjoseph83

13 years ago

To much extent it is good, but if you change the some of the designs with new color combinations which will attract more, while working on it.

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deanameske 13 years ago

My opinion is that you should go with your target audience and see if your site matches to your actual requirements and that the graphics is perfect.
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WillR

13 years ago

The design is simple and clean yet a little too bland for me. Where exactly are you wanting people to go when they first hit this page? At the moment it is not very clear. A little confusing actually. If you don't make it easy for visitors to find what they are looking for they will just hit the back button and go on to the next site.

You need the content to stand out immediately. At the moment it does not. It all just blends in with the other areas of the site.

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mahesh2010

13 years ago

Hi,
I saw your site Top menu is missing you may,or may not have
left navigation but a website looks good when it have top menu
so please try adding top menu

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Lisa Jones

13 years ago

The website looks ultra clean. I'll agree with others - header part looks empty. If you do not have you header image ready yet, put something like "welcome" message on the right - this might help

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Tech Diva

13 years ago

Hi there,

When I review sites from a design or a marketing perspective, I ask 3 things:

Where am I?
What can I do here?
Why would I want to?

With your site, I immediate get a sense that this was put together by someone with not of a lot of experience building sites or an immature designer. The white space says, "I am not sure how to make the design fill the space the way I want it to" rather than giving me room to breathe.

I'm not sure where to go and whether this is a site to learn about pregnancy, talk about it, share or if it's for moms, grandmoms, future mothers, teenagers, dads, or what. I'm not sure what value I will get by being here.

You might want to consider the way the eye flows across the page and how to add some directional flow with your design. A nice logo or more dynamic images may also work to communicate who this is for and what's great about it.

Good luck!

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dellingter

13 years ago

your site is good and you done very good work,but your site header and adsense is not good as well as logo...your Logo background and header color is different and you adsense not in good place and may be you will not get maximum clicks.

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13 years ago

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crescendo

13 years ago

Your website design is very neat and clean. Do some more work on topbar in logo

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13 years ago

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another181

13 years ago

More pictures I would suggest. looks a little plain

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unlimitedmarketing

13 years ago

I would add more colors or a few more pictures. Too much text, and not enough graphics to keep the eye on the page.

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dotlinkmedia

13 years ago

...after that don't forget make seo proccess..

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Banned 13 years ago

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Richard Van 13 years ago

Originally Posted by alexasmith123

The site looks very nice.Better you improve your quality backlinks.

It'll be better when a mod comes along and stops you using Alexas good name to your advantage.

Just saying.
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webgain

13 years ago

i felt it very odd when i look it first.
your logo doesn't match with your background. (use another logo)

use another theme
use upper navigation
and add few quality images on your site

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