Warriors: Please critique my Muse

I would try putting more content "above the fold". It looks a little plain, maybe add pictures of concert halls in the background for more feeling. Change the background at least, looks like I'm staring at my grandmother's wall.

Hey man you have a great voice.

But why lie? You probably read too many how-to-sell books from people that never sold anything (you were their only customer).

Change the video to the truth:

"Singing is fun! And I can teach you how to train your voice. There is a technology to it and I can show you all about it. You will stand out and your you can become famous..."

I think you get the point.

Nobody runs around with the idea that they might lose their voice, especially if they are not famous yet.

People buy out of want and not so much in order to avoid.

Beautiful singing. I would recommend ending the video a bit nicely with a "Thank you" or "Good bye". The video is ending very suddenly.

Hi,

I am assuming that is you?

Would you buy from yourself, looking at that site? The site is incongruent and disjointed. It also looks like you are trying to copy internet marketing principles, but kind of like a 'cut & paste'. (I.e., the aweber form in the middle of your page which really makes no sense there).

When people think of opera, they think of pavarotti. Someone 'old'. You look like a 'young' guy (relative to the perception of 'professional' opera singers), so my initial reaction was 'what qualifies you to teach opera?' You should take the content from your about us page - "http://www.singoperanow.com/about-vic/" - and let people know who you are.

Otherwise, it looks literally like you are just 'some kid' wearing a shirt that definitely does not match people's perception of opera singers (you should have a suit, not be dressed casual like that, because you literally look like what people looking to sing opera would consider a 'punk'.). You also need to consider your market -- who is your target market? Young people? Old people? People singing in choirs? The guy working at McDonalds?

Bottom line... your site is really disjointed, incongruent (some parts look professional, others don't), difficult to navigate (I had to 'hunt' to find your about us page), etc, etc. Plus -- the testimonial was a poor choice. I'm assuming he is your friend -- because of the way he looks. He also comes across very insincere in the video, looks like a 'punk' (i.e., has an earring, which is definitely not what people think of when they think of opera singers), and seems like he's reading from a script. (Or rather just making something up to try and make you sound good. He doesn't sound like he knows what he is talking about).

You need to take a step back -- figure out what teaches you to teach opera -- who your target market is/what would appeal to them, etc, etc.

Sure, I will go with that. But make sure you still follow mbmehmet suggestion of centering the video. After all you want people to watch your video.

Thanks guys!

Any thoughts on using the Sales page (the tab that says "Catalog") as the main page?

Sincerely
Vic