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My first squeeze page - Opinions please!

by garyb1966
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Please take a look at my first squeeze page, and provide any constructive criticism you may have. Thanks in advance!

P.S. Because I am relatively new to this forum, I cannot post links yet. The URL is below, but with spaces. Simply cram it all together to get to my squeeze page. I apologize in advance for any breach of forum etiquette. I am not attempting to spam the forum. Honestly just trying to get opinions.

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  • Profile picture of the author BenFromSoMo
    You may want to make one of those graphically produced book covers. I think having one makes a visitor maybe a bit more understanding of what they are actually getting for their money. It seems of more value if the can judge the book by its cover. That is just something I think. Obviously not something you NEED.
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    • Profile picture of the author Simon Phillips
      Ok, the video is in keeping with the theme I guess! However, the rest of the site does have a very amateur feel about it.

      I would change the background colour to something a little less glaring

      I would also have a header graphic designed (and a footer) and change the site width so it is narrower.

      It might also be better to naturally "flow" the content from top to bottom and lead your visitor throught the benefits and then to the opt-in for the freebie.

      Also, as has been mentioned, an ecover would really help!
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      • Profile picture of the author BubbaJay
        Definately a new background color

        New Headline weight

        You need a new headline. Have your headline make a statement.

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        The video is almost too sensual for an optin page - gives the wrong impression (I think - perhaps this is the impression you want to give).
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  • Profile picture of the author SDStudio
    I have to say the Asian chick is not bad LoL!! the Yellow background is blinding me... Maybe you want to make the background more softer on the eyes.. add a header like everyone else is saying.. You also want to add a ebook cover that would set the page off...

    Good luck!!
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  • Profile picture of the author highper
    Wow.. that yellow is a killer on the eyes. Not a bad squeeze page, actually.. but the colors could use some help.
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