Please review my site

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its brand new still working on it.. but for some reason it still feels kinda boring to me.. is it ok, needs something, perhaps a different layout? all suggestions welcomed. Love and romance, online dating tips, dating tips, romantic ideas
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  • Profile picture of the author androidguy
    lighter colors
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  • Profile picture of the author dyanaangel
    good work on your designs
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  • Profile picture of the author Abhishek Kundu
    Originally Posted by lookingforanswers View Post

    its brand new still working on it.. but for some reason it still feels kinda boring to me.. is it ok, needs something, perhaps a different layout? all suggestions welcomed. Love and romance, online dating tips, dating tips, romantic ideas
    hi lookingforanswers,

    the website is looking good but i think you could have a white background. it will help with look sophisticated.
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  • Profile picture of the author ButterflyIS
    Too dark
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  • Profile picture of the author pronoun
    Just a list of personal preferences:
    * I personally don't like the little cartoon image at the top-left, but if that is what you are going for then stick with it.
    * Try to re-word your subheading so that it does not have the word "and" in it twice. This is not necessarily bad English, but for a sub heading that will appear on every page of the site, it is best to make it as well-written as you can.
    * The pink hyperlink 'WordPress Web Hosting' that is in your FOOTER hurts my eyes a little; you can use CSS to change the specific styling for the individual link in your footer so that you can keep the rest of your links pink.
    * I personally find large amounts of pure white text on a solid black background is a bit straining on the eyes. If you like the color scheme, try using off-whites and off-blacks..... greys?

    I have not actually yet made very many websites, which is why my suggestions might not be exactly what you were after. I find the general color scheme and layout fairly good; but if you are so inclined it never hurts to experiment. Fully fleshing out different ideas is a great way to teach yourself how you like to build and design websites!

    Good luck with the site mate!
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  • Profile picture of the author lookingforanswers
    Great thanks everyone!! Off to chance a few things want to look more sophisticated cheers!
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  • Profile picture of the author sometimes
    definitely could use a white background, get rid of the top left image (doesn't really go with the site).
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  • Profile picture of the author IceT
    Hello,

    It's looking very good the only thing which I would suggest you to change is logo. Because having a picture as a logo isn't too good.
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  • Profile picture of the author gstalin
    Originally Posted by lookingforanswers View Post

    its brand new still working on it.. but for some reason it still feels kinda boring to me.. is it ok, needs something, perhaps a different layout? all suggestions welcomed. Love and romance, online dating tips, dating tips, romantic ideas
    Your website is good. You have covered the subject well. I like your tips. The users of your website will like that.

    Some ideas:

    1. Offer some thing free for opt-in
    2. Promote some affiliate products.

    Just a suggestion.
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    • Profile picture of the author lookingforanswers
      Originally Posted by web2cart View Post

      Your website is good. You have covered the subject well. I like your tips. The users of your website will like that.

      Some ideas:

      1. Offer some thing free for opt-in
      2. Promote some affiliate products.

      Just a suggestion.
      Yes, was working on the opt-in part, i;m just filling in my site a little more tring to get 10 posts all together. as we'll I'm just waiting for some more affiliate's to approve me, this is my first site out of the regular stuff I do. thanks again!!
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      • Profile picture of the author gstalin
        Originally Posted by lookingforanswers View Post

        Yes, was working on the opt-in part, i;m just filling in my site a little more tring to get 10 posts all together. as we'll I'm just waiting for some more affiliate's to approve me, this is my first site out of the regular stuff I do. thanks again!!
        very good job! keep it up
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  • Profile picture of the author harchenko
    Images on black background - it's not so good, because most images have white background
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  • Profile picture of the author Tedel
    You need or a faster server or a lighter design. It looks well, but if I have to wait 53 seconds to see it fully loaded, you will lose a lot of your traffic.

    All in all it looks good, though.
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  • Profile picture of the author YasirYar
    Hi,

    Great site, although if you are looking to get traffic to it through SEO I would suggest putting a good amount of content on the landing page, which in your case would be the homepage.

    I do understand it messes up with the aesthetic elements of the site, but you need to do it if you want good traffic through SEO.

    Good colors though
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  • Profile picture of the author Peter Gehr
    I'll comment mostly on your content, but before getting into that, I'd offer the following suggestions:

    First of all, I always recommend to people to look at sites that are ranked well within your niche. Look at what they are doing, and learn from it.

    Keep things simple and tight. For example, take a look at this site:

    match.com - When you're serious about love.

    This offers simplicity. Customers within this niche know what they want, and a barrage of information on the Home page, in my opinion, is too much. Keep it simple.

    I'd get rid of that gray background and drop the old fashion title font to something more punchy and modern.

    Okay, the main thing that stands out to me is your content. I see typos everywhere, and if you're going to offer advice on these topics, it needs to sound a little more convincing. For example, I could be wrong, but your article on "Dating Tips for Women" sounds like it was written by a man, not a woman.

    Take some time to get your articles written well as the person looking for concrete advice on these topics will need to be convinced and "sold" on your expertise.

    Just a few thoughts : )
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  • Profile picture of the author addison.agnote
    The looks too dull and I advise you to add more content to your website. People will want to visit your website again if new and useful information is regularly added.
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  • Profile picture of the author YongC
    Nice design ^^
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  • Profile picture of the author iuditg
    Here are the few things that you can work on :

    1) Try to bold the text of the navigation.
    2) Change the font for the header ("My Love and romance")
    3) The overall color looks a lil boring and dull, since it's all about love and romance, try to use white or reddish color or some light color
    4) Footer needs to be worked on.
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  • Profile picture of the author ButterflyIS
    The truth, it can look much more serious..
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    • Profile picture of the author martyJames
      Looks good to me. I would try and break blocks of text up by adding small images etc. I personally find sites with big blocks of text a bit off putting. Other than that its great, professional and good content. Re the content did you write it yourself?
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  • Profile picture of the author PoignantPixels
    Everything Looks Great, but I would change the background color to something else. Otherwise it looks good!!
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  • Profile picture of the author Feyt
    Nice colour palette, looks clean and modern. I would suggest removing the glow behind "My Love And Romance" at the top and make it a nice black/grey colour.
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