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  • Profile picture of the author dadadada
    Man, you should check for spelling errors, seriously.
    And the other thing - center your div or table, whatever it is.
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  • Profile picture of the author Ed Brown
    yeah there's a few grammatical and spelling errors. Let's fix em' so you'll have more credibility with your site visitors:

    1 - in your tagline change "opportunitys" to "opportunities"
    2 - first sentence "Earning money online is harder then you think" ... it should read 'is harder thAn you think"
    3 - over whelmed is one word, not 2
    4 - The best way to do this is, find a program that will work for you (remove the coma)
    5 - I dont know how many people start a online business and want results NOW .... this sentence should read 'people start AN online business"
    6 - for google to even know your there <-----you'RE there
    7 - Here is a list for making money online programs .... i would change this to "Here's a list of online money making programs"
    8 - If its some thing that intrests you, go for it and stick with it. change to "If it's something that interests you go for it and stick with it:."

    if i were you i'd also go through and bold and/or italics and/or underline and/or a combo of all 3, a few of your main keywords.

    your meta description is only 55 characters long but could be up to 160 optimally. You could also use a 16x16 favicon. But the diagnosis (spelling aside) is actually better than 75% of the sites I look at. Congrats Adsassist. And good luck!
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  • Profile picture of the author Kyro
    To be perfectly honest, and i know this might sound a little harsh... but it kinda looks more like a word document with a few ads on the side...
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  • Profile picture of the author thester
    It needs a lot more colour and texture.
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  • Profile picture of the author benjigbird
    You must be making a lot of sites with the same template as I have seen this before. So I won't comment on the template itself. Simple enough, but yeah spelling mistakes need to be rectified.
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  • Profile picture of the author adsassist
    Thanks for the input. This is actually from the Constant Cash Machine. A website every day.
    I thought it would be a good idea to make one of the sites into a main site for all the others that will be made. I picked a very low competition and ok in searches for the keyword. Then I should rank in Google easier and boost up the other sites in there keyword. All very close targeted back links. If you noticed the links open up in there own domain. Does this make sense to any body?

    lol, man I suck at spelling.
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  • Profile picture of the author teguhyuliantos
    Your site is clear and fast loading. But for more interesting view, maybe you can modify background and customize some area. And most important is easy navigation.
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  • Profile picture of the author adsassist
    They don't give you very much to mess with. I can change the background color. Its more like its on a text document. I cant even change the right column. Every week a new article is made in each site and the article will go in the right column. I can upgrade to 10 sites a day for a life time. I hope this works as that's a lot of good back links
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  • Profile picture of the author antac
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    Very clean and professional looking. You did a really good job!
    But domain name is long. Personally I don't like your domain name. If you change your domain name, I hope you will get more good traffic.
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  • Profile picture of the author adsassist
    The domain name is the keyword. Better rankings for google. Every page has a different domain, there keyword.
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  • Profile picture of the author Nauman K
    Hey Mate,
    I have just check your site, and Its not well design, specially the header need to b more attractive, secondly your site seems to be minsite formate, so please check out the guidline on how to create minisite or one page website.
    Cheers
    Nauman K
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  • Profile picture of the author Chronic IM
    Hello! You should totally check out spelling errors cause there's numerous of them. Then you should optimize it more and add a little more features cause it looks kinda' boring. I hope that helped you in a way or so. Best of Luck!
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  • Profile picture of the author izoweb
    nice web site but long and spammy style of domain name :S
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  • Profile picture of the author rosiebrown0
    I am agree with most of them, a lot of spelling mistake,domain name and heading is too long,you need to work little on Header and footer to make it more attractive.otherwise good work.
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  • Profile picture of the author TotalDefenseGames
    I think that the overall design could use a bit of work. Though the site is not poorly designed, it does seem to use techniques and styles that are a bit outdated. Then again, if you are targeting traffic that has low internet speeds then this style may work well because the site loads fast and takes up minimal resources.
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