What do you think of this Website Design & Layout?

Thanks for your feedback Ryan. Yes I was trying to change that problem you spotted last week but couldn't figure it out. I thought (hoped) maybe no-one would notice since it almost looks like it could have been done on purpose. I'll have to take another look or get some help with that.

Thanks, I appreciate the feedback. It's good to get lots of different points of view. That way I have more ideas for things I can change if something's not working.

Thanks Manny, I had missed that Meta title. I see the module 2 green is sticking out a bit, I think that's what you meant (?)

Oops I completely missed that Brian, thanks for pointing it out.

The whole thing in general looks decent, always room for improvement but I don't think there's anything tragic that desperately needs mending immediately.

Some notes:

-Impact is a font that gets uglier as it gets smaller, so those first subheadlines should be a bit larger and the first line of the second would could be better spread into 4 (if not 3, ideally) lines. They're also not absolute black, those subheads, not sure if that was intention.

-Since you only have 2 digital product images, it's very easy for them to look repetitive. think you'd actually be better off without the second one. You also have a little warning reminding people of the fact that it's a representation of the item under only the second one, but not the first.

-On the note of those 2 and the module dvd covers, they all have their fade's cut off. I make these, and I don't ever do that because (to me) it almost defeats the purpose of having a fading reflection if it's going to cut off at a solid line; wherever you got these from they cropped them too short or intentionally made them all have hard edges. While you may be massively credible to those who know you or don't pay too much attention to detail, it looks semi-amateurish (don't hate me, I mean no offense and I'm sure you're no fool) when fading reflections cut into absolute white. It takes away that whole 'seamless' look.

-Modules 2, 4 and 10 have some issues with the background boxes they're in. 2 of them have this 1pixel line extending to the left, and one has a bunch of extra space probably from the bullet list. Also, the dvd images to the left are all the same size but the boxes are not; in this situation (when I'm making my sales pages) I always center the text/textbox with respect to it's image. And lastly with the modules, 12 modules probably means plenty of content and value, but seeing those 12 dvd covers repeating almost makes me not want to read them because I feel like they may all just say the same thing (the way the dvd covers all look the same). If each box had it's own bold/italicized formatting within it, it would draw more attention away from the repeating image to it's left. An alternative could be to just place 1 dvd cover every other module, in the space between them.

-I think sacrificing the SEO element live text from your headlines would be well worth it if they were replaced with some really nice graphic headlines. They'll also create more of a separation between your basic text content areas. The large, red impact (or impact-style) font is the most common headline, so despite it being a massive jump up from plain black text of no variation, it still almost gives the whole page a bland-ish feeling.

-Your 60-day MBG could definitely be larger and more prominent, even if it's a matter of getting a generic certificate image to place on top (and removing the little windows folder icon looking one).

I could go into further detail, but I think I may have already written too much, haha. I hope you find my notes useful and not too critical, because it is a good looking page already. I feel the need to reiterate that, and that most of what I say stems from the fact that there simply always IS room for improvement. It may not exactly be necessary, and nothing to break your back over; but if you have the time or resources I'd tackle each area I mentioned.

Thanks for your honest comments Patrick. I just used the standard format for a sales page really. It's a concern if you think it might turn people off though in that format. Maybe I could try split testing a different style sales page; make one that's shorter and more matter-of-fact.