Hello All, this is my first website, advice and suggestion please^.^

Hey Iris,

Your website is really nice. According to me a business/service website must be professional along with attractive design and your website has all that. Great! Just I wonder as a personal suggestion if you could have used that two blank areas in the right and left (Just a suggestion).
All The Best!

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irisliauw

13 years ago

Hello There,

thanks^.^ and thank you for your suggestion,
btw, i dont know how to edit the HTML, because the slide show,
i think that is need using CSS,

and now i try to find tutorial how to "create CSS"

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irisliauw

13 years ago

Hello Agendapal, glad you like it^.^

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13 years ago

Hmmm slideshow looking cool. But i will suggest to work with the menus. the menu list should be more catchy..
thanks

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rajprince

13 years ago

Great Work!!

Looks Good!! Both professional and funky!!

can improve a bit on the menus..(just a suggestion) but good work for first time

Cheers

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irisliauw

13 years ago

That is great suggestion

i will try to modification the menu

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nuojide

13 years ago

lol~ so beautiful

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irisliauw

13 years ago

Hi nuojide,

thanks^.^ glad you like it

and just try to improve the menu button

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anestbaik

13 years ago

looks profesional and cool ..
graphic are perfect ..

the best is pil image on link-button ..

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irisliauw

13 years ago

Thanks Anestbaik^.^ may you have any suggestion?

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OliverRealize

13 years ago

I really like the graphic. I've been having trouble extending the div to get the overhang like you have with the hand. Good Job!

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irisliauw

13 years ago

Hello Oliver,

thanks^.^ glad you like it

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maxmalini

13 years ago

Very cool design! Nice color contrast as well! I love the slideshow on the home page. It works very smooth. The portfolio is awesome as well.

Great job!

- Max

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SarahZT

13 years ago

I like the overall design! I would suggest increasing the size of the menu buttons (home, portfolio, order, etc) as compared to the rest of the page they look really small right now; so it's the navigation for your site is not so obvious.

I would also suggest you expand a little bit about what you actually do to 'cure' sites? I presume you're talking about web design and re design; so add a couple of bullet points to the main page that explain how you will cure a site... like for example...
- we'll revamp your logo to make it bold
- give you website a new winning look
- etc...

Just to make it clear to people about that you can do for them =) But otherwise looking good!

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gigantic

13 years ago

Hello Irish,

your website is amazing, and your portfolio too,
will order your package soon

regards
bonscik

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irisliauw

13 years ago

Hello Max,

thanks^.^ glad you like it

hi Sarah, that is great suggestion,
i will try to improve in the next time^.^

hello gigantic,

glad you like it

and thanks for ordering, will send the file asap

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Rocky07

13 years ago

very nice work

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irisliauw

13 years ago

Hello Rocky07, thanks^.^

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logowarriors

13 years ago

Your site is looking very neat and clean. Very professional and good color combination. Good work go ahead.

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irisliauw

13 years ago

Hello Logowarrior,

glad you like my site^.^

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deelow

13 years ago

Irisliauw,

Nicely done - only thing i would maybe say is make the main menu and buttons have some hover stats will give it a little bit more life

But yeah great job

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irisliauw

13 years ago

Hello Deelow,

thanks for the suggestion

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deelow 13 years ago

Originally Posted by irisliauw

Hello Deelow,

thanks for the suggestion

your very welcome - keep up the good work
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wulaishiwo

13 years ago

funny website

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Aare

13 years ago

cool, but need more time in loading the images...

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Mr Bill

13 years ago

To be honest I wasn't expecting much from a first site asking for reviews but was pleasantly surprised. I really enjoyed visiting!

You need to fix this sentence as it doesn't make sense...

We will “Cure” your minisite designs possible for your satisfaction
Spare yourself the aggravation of having to pay extra to get revisions you may need.

Is this all your own work or do you outsource? It's very good but you mentioned above that you don't know html, are a bit unsure about CSS (aren't we all) but your business is fixing minisites. How does that work?

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irisliauw

13 years ago

Hello There,

yes, i'm newbie and learn for CSS coding

btw i'm using HTML format, this is not using CSS,
I have experience working with great minisite designer for more than 1 year

and doctorminsiite, and portfolio is my design

btw, thanks and enjoy it

-iris liauw

Originally Posted by WSOHelp

To be honest I wasn't expecting much from a first site asking for reviews but was pleasantly surprised. I really enjoyed visiting!

You need to fix this sentence as it doesn't make sense...

Is this all your own work or do you outsource? It's very good but you mentioned above that you don't know html, are a bit unsure about CSS (aren't we all) but your business is fixing minisites. How does that work?

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webcontent

13 years ago

Hi,
Congrats for the first website. It is good. But still to be honest you can make it more professional. You need to work on the menus and the content can be more informative.

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thetermy

13 years ago

Looks nice, why not make it take up more screen space though, the site is kind of small

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irisliauw

13 years ago

Hello Thetermy,

thanks for your suggestion

i wil ltry to make it more bigger

regards,
-irisliauw

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goldmineberry

Banned 13 years ago

That's a very simple yet cool website.

I like it! Keep it up!

Warmest Regards,
Anson

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irisliauw

13 years ago

Hello Anson,

thanks

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joyotto

13 years ago

Good and simple elegant look .very impressive design...Nice work

But if you provide link in logo part then it batter for user for navigation purpose and second is plz increasing the size of the menu buttons so user can easily find it ...it my opinion

Thanks..

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iqbal

13 years ago

simply wonderful

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jeffyork

13 years ago

it cant be your first! well done dude

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helfgott

13 years ago

Originally Posted by irisliauw

Hello All,

My Name is Iris,
and this is my first website <thanks for buddy, for supporting me>
and i will launch the website on 12 september ^.^
....

Hi, the site is cool, but it seems to me a little bit "spammy", i mean there's a bunch of webs with same format that are spam.

The first that i've seen of your site are that orange words "unbelieveable cheap price", and i feel uncomfortable because you are trying to sell something to me, i'd prefeer something more "discret" or show something really attractive before use the word "sell"

It's like sell burgers, i'd prefeer to see a draw of a tasty and delicious burger before the price, not an announce "cheap burgers".

Anyway is just my opinion as i said, good job the design is pretty well done and loaded correctly in my firefox/linux.

best regards.

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irisliauw

13 years ago

Hello Helfgott,

this is really really great advice

thanks bunch friend

regards,
-irisliauw

Originally Posted by helfgott

Hi, the site is cool, but it seems to me a little bit "spammy", i mean there's a bunch of webs with same format that are spam.

The first that i've seen of your site are that orange words "unbelieveable cheap price", and i feel uncomfortable because you are trying to sell something to me, i'd prefeer something more "discret" or show something really attractive before use the word "sell"

It's like sell burgers, i'd prefeer to see a draw of a tasty and delicious burger before the price, not an announce "cheap burgers".

Anyway is just my opinion as i said, good job the design is pretty well done and loaded correctly in my firefox/linux.

best regards.

Thanks
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helfgott 13 years ago

Originally Posted by irisliauw

Hello Helfgott,

this is really really great advice

thanks bunch friend

regards,
-irisliauw

No problem, also i see it again, and i think using a computer image for the "doctor" is too cold and impersonal.

You could change it for a real person picture, because as a visitor i'd like to have the most "human contact" as possible with vendor, that's part of the bussiness.

For example, isn't the same call to the Help Desk service and be served by a robot than be served by another human! is a huge difference and i think this applies in this case too!

(And as personal taste, i prefeer light pages, i mean "white sites" not so darky, because i get tired reading in black background.)

Hope it helps.
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joelydesign

13 years ago

really cool. where did you get the 3d character?

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webcontent

13 years ago

The 3D characters can be created through Photoshop or other text editing soft wares.

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Jac0b

13 years ago

Really good for first time.
I like your design!

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Banned 13 years ago

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Azarna 13 years ago

It is a very attractive looking site, but it could do with an editor looking over it, there are a few odd sentences.

"I will fix it until you satisfied." = until you are satisfied
"The most of people request is .PNG" = Most people request .PNG
"I am use Paypal because it's the most commonly people use it" - because it is commonly used or because it is the most commonly used payment system.

In your small print you have " The testimonials and examples used are exceptional results, don’t apply to the average purchaser." As your testimonials are people saying things like they liked the colours or thank you for good service, I am not sure you want to be saying that this will not apply to the average purchaser!
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maxibrian

13 years ago

cool, I like that design

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Scott Skinner

13 years ago

Iris,

Congrats on your site. The graphics are top notch! I would however change a couple of things.

1st.... Make the headline and sub Headline larger
2nd... rephrase the sub headline to....

Is Your website unprofitable?
If so, then we can help....
At A Price That Is Unbelievable!

3rd.... When I click on the Sun Mobile link in the window as well as the EZ Cash Money Machine, the sites that come up are jibberesh. You need to replace that immediately.

4th... Remove everything at the bottom except for the payment link.

In my opinion, do the above, drive traffic, build backlinks and you have a winner here! Good luck!!

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goleza

13 years ago

Originally Posted by irisliauw

Hello All,

My Name is Iris,
and this is my first website <thanks for buddy, for supporting me>
and i will launch the website on 12 september ^.^

may if you have advice and suggestion
feel free to contact me

my first website

thank you and best regards,
-iris liauw -

Congratulations Iris! I have liked the design that is so cool and done perfectly. However, I have found it difficult to figure out what exactly is your product and niche. Is it possible to clarify on this?

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sanjon

13 years ago

work a little bit with menus + add another Blog section which can say more about your services and how these can improve the website of your prospective clients.

Get a couple of logo designing, greeting cards designing and Business cards designing softwares and add those services in extra services coloumn..!!
If you dont have plans to buy those softwares, let me know I will give a few softwares to you.
Well done!!

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Karen Barr

13 years ago

In general I like your layout and design.

Your English is not brilliant and I would suggest you get a professional to copy-edit your text.

The only suggestion I would make with the design is to space out the menu navigation items more widely.

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