My First Site: Please Review

by workingtofreedom

Posted: 13 years ago 11 replies

WEB DESIGN

I just finished creating my first site--i'm pretty psyched, but I want to make sure it's good.

I'm planning on using it to build my list.

Right now it's basically just a squeeze page with a free report you can download after opt-in.

Please take a look at it and give me any suggestions for improvement you might have.

Also, if anyone wants to be *VERY* kind--take a look at my free report as well (it's 39 pages).

If you pm me I'll send you the link to the download page so you don't have to opt-in.

Thanks!

www. undergroundperformancetactics .com (without the spaces, of course)

#review #site

Best shared hosting 13 years ago

In your site there is nothing to comment. Its a simple one page site. Truly, asking review for this type of site sounds not so good.
anyway thanks for your work and wish you best of luck
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autumnsmith 13 years ago

The squeeze page is pretty simple which is a good start already. However, on my point of view, the headline is not that attractive since I have already seen a lot of websites/squeeze pages using those kind of lines so may want to consider improving. The first time I visited your page, I was looking at the benefit list which is already good. You can definitely improve it further by adding audio/video to encourage people to sign up and get your report.
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SerpSmasher 13 years ago

sites pretty clean, I like it, If I were you Id add a nice video also , to further engage your visitors and explain a little more about your service, hell you can even buy a review video from fiverr for only $5 lol
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Jac0b 13 years ago

In my opinion your theme is very very simple.
You need to change it.
Also think about adding much more content...
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smithpaul 13 years ago

I have a review your website, it will require little bit changes in title, description and most important for a website is content. You can insert more content. The title is most important that require looks attractive.

Thanks and regards,
Smithpaul
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mikedex 13 years ago

SIte is simple. Looking good. Only one page.
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villyyard 13 years ago

Hi workingtofreedom,

Your website looks fine, simple and professional. Good work, make sure that your website is search engine and user friendly as well

Cheers
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- Azarna 13 years ago
  
  It is totally anonymous. Why would I be giving my email address to someone who hasn't given me any details of who they are?
  
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workingtofreedom 13 years ago

Thanks for the tips and comments everyone!

It looks like I'm gonna have to do some split testing regardless--but you all gave me a great place to start.

Thanks!
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CSS Architect 13 years ago

It feels like everything is all over the place. Try to divide the sections using different shades of colors as the background.
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reverseengineering 13 years ago

It kinda looks like an html page without any css styling
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