Can Someone Rate This Landing Page.

Marty S

13 years ago

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Daniel Evans 13 years ago

I agree with the above.

Headlines are only headlines if the other type has less impact in contrast.

If everything is headlined, you essentially have no headlines and the regular text becomes smallprint.

The video is presented nicely and looks alien in comparison to the site it's embedded within.

I'd overhaul with some quality graphics, picking out which factors are most important to you and single them out into only a handful of headlines.
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Manoj V

13 years ago

Originally Posted by Marty S

If puke could be displayed in text, your landing page is what it would look like. It is very, very SPAMMY looking. Way too many headlines competing with one another. My hunch is the visual NOISE will seriously compromise your conversions here.

In short: simplify this page by removing 90% of the clutter and give your visitors ONE clear option only.

Check out a classic landing page from Eben Pagan here:

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That's being polite... lol!

The whole page is very cluttered and looks bad - people will leave immediately. Have less content, space it out and make it more meaningful.

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Kysaan

13 years ago

Yuk.. I would bounce straight out!

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Tomos Wyn

13 years ago

It doesn't actually fill anybody with confidecne when you look at the page.

Keep the video. Keep the optin. Keep the headline. Get rid of everything else.

Re-think some of the colours your using. I'd definitely remove the yellow and the blue.

If your determined to keep all the information, then move it to a separate page, and link users to that once their on the list.

But overall, I think there's a lot of work to do there.

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nicholasb

13 years ago

I think I actually went blind for a second, I have created and split test hundreds of led gen pages, a nice simple design always converts higher. Seriously my eyes literally hurt.

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Jeff Henshaw 13 years ago

It's all been said.

I'm assuming that you are trying to presell before sending the visitor to the affiliate page, if so then:-

Get a good eye catching headline. If you want to keep the video, then keep it. Include three or four bullet points giving the main benefits and of course, the sign up form (if this is the only way for your visitor to get to the affiliate page). Personally, if I were you, I'd include my own sign up form, so they join your list before they get to the page.

That's it.

As for a rating, 1 out of 10 is generous - your page has too much distraction and little focus.

You may feel that the comments here are harsh - but they need to be. You asked for constructive criticism and now you have it. The next stage is for you to re-design that page taking into account the advice posted.

On the positive side, you were sensible and dare I say 'brave' enough to ask for comments on this Forum before you launched your page. That indicates to me that you are serious about going down the affiliate marketing route; you have much to learn though.

Just my thoughts,
Jeff.
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PLRExpress

13 years ago

I can't say that I'm an expert on landing pages but, from a consumer point of view, it's very busy and confusing to be hit with in one go.

I would make it a much simpler design that's a little more modern and have more of the details in the backend. Just have something simple but intriguing to get people to sign up and then give more details in the backend.

I'm not saying that your landing page is bad - I've seen worse and I've seen this style quite a lot so someone must be making money from it. However, it's best to make it nice and simple with less of a bombarding of info, flashing text and garish images.

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Samrath Gupta

13 years ago

From a subscribers point of view your page looks like News Headlines portal where we are watching news headlines not your product page....

Keep things very clear and try to use just one headline + some texts/videos,etc

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Keen creations

13 years ago

Wow..dont know what to say...so spammy. My eyes didnt know where to go and a landing page should direct the visitor to a certain place or opt-in w/e.

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Samrath Gupta

13 years ago

From a subscribers point of view your page looks like News Headlines portal where we are watching news headlines not your product page....
I agree with nicolasb that it really hurt'ed mine eyes too...

Keep things very clear and try to use just one headline + some texts/videos,your product cover(if any) and optin box thats it.

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MatthewNeer

13 years ago

Very overwhelming.

Has potential but needs to be more straight to the point.

Just use a nice catchy headline and a few of your best bullets and keep the video. That should be much better.

Excited to see the finished version.

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Bruce NewMedia

13 years ago

Originally Posted by timchuks87

Can you guys rate this Landing page on the scale of 1-10.

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It is a redirect for an Affiliate portal. Do not Fill in any of your detail just View and rate it relative to Lead Conversion

Yes Sir! OK, I am rating it "Poor" for lead conversion, but that's just an educated guess, since I have no stats to confirm how well it has converted.

It's just the affiliate site that the product maker is giving you, right?

I would probably just embed the video on a whole new simpler page, like others have already mentioned....if I wanted to sell an MLM phone deal (which I don't)...
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kooldesigning

13 years ago

Me too rate it poor for good conversion rate

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ameliewarner

13 years ago

My rating would be 3/10

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13 years ago

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pixeldreamer

13 years ago

I would have to agree with most of the comments I'm afraid. The instant it popped up on my screen I thought it was spam. There's way too much information and clutter. It would make me not trust what you offer and click away from the page instantly.
For me, less speaks more volume so I would look into cutting out a lot of information and displaying it much clearer.

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Stack Bundles

13 years ago

Lately I have been nothing but a contrarian on this board and I hate that. However,
you are asking the wrong people for their opinion. We are all hyper sensitive to any type of marketing page and the above posts giving you a crappy rating are a testiment to that.

You ask me and I will tell you just like everyone esle. That it sucks, it's too loud, bla, bla bla, but the people you should be asking are your potential customers.

Dude, I go on Clickbank and there are products and products of landing pages that absolutely SUCK! But look at the conversions, they are selling.

I will do you one better. I ran a PPC campaign for a product with a gravity over 100. It had the ****tiest landing page. It was super busy, super complicated, I couldn't even find the Call to Action button.

After finding 3 keywords that converted like gangbusters I got my own page designed for $460. It was sweet, it still is sweet. But it doesn't freakin' convert!! With my own page I was able to stop using adcenter and use G00gle Adwords and link the buy button to the clickbank product. When it didn't convert I blamed it on the google traffic as opposed to Adcenter.

Then I got the page ranked on Page 1 and no sales. Then I redirected it to the CRAPPY CLICK BANK PAGE. Guess what? 4 sales the next day. That CRAPPY CLICK BANK PAGE converted better. Something that I could have done in 5 minutes.

LESSON - Let your audience be the judge if a page will convert or not. Split test and split test and split test. Those crappy pages on Clickbank have been split tested hundreds of times. Truth about Abs...split tested TO DEATH!!

I would do the same.

Make some of the suggested changes and let it run. Compare against what you have. I'm not saying the suggestions here are wrong, but non one knows until you actually split test with your target audience.

Good Luck & congrats for actually getting your plan into action!!
-Stack Bundles

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HasClicks

13 years ago

i think it looks way too busy

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loka1282

13 years ago

I would rate it as 6

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autumnsmith

13 years ago

too much images and little valuable information. People may perceive it in negative way (like a spam page) so instead of scrolling down, they would tend to immediately close it. What are you trying to achieve here? How about thinking being on the shoes of your visitors. Would you love to see this kind of page especially when you are looking for more information about the offered product/service?

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FreeZeo

13 years ago

needs a makeover Lol

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Azarna 13 years ago

Eek! To be honest.

Firstly - I HATE people suddenly talking on websites. This has been voted one of the most annoying things advertisers can do on a number of surveys. I wear headphones and listen to music whilst working on the computer- so getting this in my ears is startling and an instant 'click close'.

You actually have flashing yellow stuff. Flashing. Blimey

Sorry, but this just looks like the very worst sort of spam. I would just leave straight away. Its just FAR too busy.
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