I need someone to review my site

by avisoriol

Posted: 12 years ago 29 replies

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I have a brand new website (supplementsforweight-loss.com) and it's on page 4 on Google for my keyword and now i want few persons to visit it and gave me they feedback on it, if the site will make it or not because i need know if i should stop working on it or keep at it

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bretski 12 years ago

I'm getting:

Critical database error: Connection was refused by server
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- avisoriol 12 years ago
  
  You have type www.supplementsforweight-loss.com
  
  Originally Posted by bretski
  
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  bretski 12 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by avisoriol
  
  You have type www.supplementsforweight-loss.com
  
  Critical database error: Connection was refused by server
  
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  bretski 12 years ago
  
  By the way... you might want to remove the affiliate link from your signature immediately... even before you fix your link to your site that is throwing a database error consistently to multiple people.
  
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David Keith 12 years ago

same here:

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dougb 12 years ago

Well so far your site has a critical database error, so for the moment it's a guarantee you need to move on
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avisoriol 12 years ago

okay now i see what is going on my site server is down
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avisoriol 12 years ago

You guys can try it now
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Invert Planet

12 years ago

it worked fine on my end, but the header was rather large. There is A LOT below the fold...

Also there seem to be no anchor texts in the body of the article.

Also double check the grammar

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avisoriol

12 years ago

I know am going back to add them later

Originally Posted by Invert Planet

it worked fine on my end, but the header was rather large. There is A LOT below the fold...

Also there seem to be no anchor texts in the body of the article.

Also double check the grammar

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birddog200 12 years ago

Looks nice. But if it is on page 4 for your keywords. I would keep working until it is on page 1.
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- bretski 12 years ago
  
  Your content is unreadable. Find someone to write for you if English is not your native language. Sorry but that is going to be a huge turn off to anyone actually looking for information on whatever keyword you are ranking for.
  
  As far as the layout; yes, your header is taking up too much of the real estate above the fold.
  
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rosetrees 12 years ago

It needs articles that make sense. I didn't get past the first paragraph of the first article. It's nonsense.
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steven Clayden 12 years ago

Firstly to many banners, the articles dont read read that well.
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Joseph Robinson Banned 12 years ago

What stood out to me were the 10+ ads, each for a different product. It just screams money grab in my opinion. Any traffic you get will recognize that the page is not meant to help them, only to bring the site owner some money.

I just read the content as well. Far from top notch.
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Invert Planet 12 years ago

If English is your second language, have someone edit it before you go live and promote it.

Even native English speakers go through a read - review - rewrite phase. I do this myself and I NEVER edit my own stuff. I always have someone else edit it.
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travlinguy 12 years ago

You have no headline, nothing to grab the reader's attention.

I read three lines of the top article and this appears to be some product of spinning software. I stopped reading because it's mainly jibberish. Good luck.
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Jamaican2011 12 years ago

too many banners and please check out the grammar

it's atrocious to an English reader
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avisoriol 12 years ago

Thank you guys now i will go back and fix it
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steve72b 12 years ago

check the sites for errors
I've got these in few places
Notice: Undefined offset: 2 in /home/callenb/public_html/customers/update_publish_func.php.inc on line 30

Notice: Undefined offset: 2 in /home/callenb/public_html/customers/update_publish_func.php.inc on line 30
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geneticcs 12 years ago

if you visit this site then you can understand what is this...
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- richard78 12 years ago
  
  How much sales have you made from this site?
  
  This site really needs a lot of time to fix.
  
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baileybliss 12 years ago

This site needs an incredible amount of work. Your header is very difficult to read and is over-saturated with keywords. Also, the content itself is nearly impossible to read. Not only is there nothing personal about it, I would strongly suggest having a writer who speaks native English to re-write your content.

Good luck with your site.
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Michael Tracey 12 years ago

Agreed you need to do something about your header.

Your grammar and content sucks big time. Sorry but as others have indicated if English isn't your home language get someone to write for you, or at least to edit it.

You have "402 people +1'd this" CR*P!!! Sites with massive traffic don't achieve this
additionally your visitor counter reads 166... Major credibility gap

You asked for a review, you got my honest impression, no doubt influenced by the +1 scam
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Dazzling Content 12 years ago

It looks very good. Is it an HTML template or a WordPress theme?
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rinkugarg 12 years ago

We can post reviews on Google..
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YasirYar 12 years ago

I don't think you are getting correct results from your search. Your keywords are "Supplements For Weight Loss,best weight loss program,weight loss programs,best weight loss diet programs,Weight Loss,weight loss tips,fast weight loss,diet plans for weight loss,quick weight loss" and you are nowhere near page 4 on Google. The reason is that Google keeps track of your search pattern and probably you have been logged in on Google most of the time that is why it appeared on page #4. I couldn't find your link (supplementsforweight-loss.com/) even on page 10. Your site in not even indexed yet. You need to work pretty hard on those keywords but this is doable.
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Ron Desi

12 years ago

I think this page needs a stronger call to action. I clicked on one link and Bit.ly gave me a warning about the link being some Phishing scam,...Not Good!!!

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ellequingco

12 years ago

Originally Posted by WebsiteVideoPresenter

I think this page needs a stronger call to action. I clicked on one link and Bit.ly gave me a warning about the link being some Phishing scam,...Not Good!!!

i agree, its not a very good first impression. when advertising, people are already expecting phishing, scams, adwares and all that stuff. even if your links are all legit and safe, the fact that it returns a bitly page with a warning doesn't make it look good.

hope you could fix it sooner. will still go through your site and you can expectg my honest and unbiased opinion

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