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Hi I have made a new website and was wondering what everyone thought about the design.

here is the website: Free iPads

I have only completed the homepage. do you think the homepage contains enough info? should I add more graphics?
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  • Profile picture of the author raw almond
    the design and graphics are terrific. they go well with the theme of your website. the design alone will most likely boost your profit if you do the advertising \ marketing correctly. and if it doesn't work out, i'm sure you could sell the design off, and make pretty decent. since it appears you're using a widely used blogging platform, wordpress.
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  • Profile picture of the author IMdude123
    thank for the comments. do you guys think the homepage is finished now and I can start adding content to the other pages? is there anything else I should have on the homepage?
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  • Profile picture of the author maclennan
    Looks really good, nice and "to the point"
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    • Profile picture of the author Azarna
      I assume you are just risking that the name will not get taken from you, but shouldn't you at least have a disclaimer on the site that you are not connected to Apple, and at least one 'iPad is a trademark of Apple Corp' or something?
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      • Profile picture of the author IMdude123
        Originally Posted by Azarna View Post

        I assume you are just risking that the name will not get taken from you, but shouldn't you at least have a disclaimer on the site that you are not connected to Apple, and at least one 'iPad is a trademark of Apple Corp' or something?
        thanks for the advice. the website is not yet complete so I will add that in.
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    • Profile picture of the author kanadaka
      I really like your text design. Colors match well really nice job and good luck to you...!




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  • Profile picture of the author MattSchoenherr
    Looks great on the homepage. A few places to improve:

    1. Font is a little too small in places. Make me lean closer to the screen because your offer is compelling.. not because I can't see what you're writing.

    2. The 'How is it possible..' section has some steps that can be converted to bullets for easier reading.

    3. Font size continues to be too small throughout the site, ESPECIALLY on the FAQs page where there is nothing but text. Add some supporting graphics here if it makes sense to do so.

    4. All in all, you've selected a strong template and the opening graphics are great. Go forth and conquer!

    Matt
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  • Profile picture of the author bryansmith1129
    Integrate your page with some more social media elements like (Linkedin, Myspace, Technorati etc).
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  • Profile picture of the author mlmguru2011
    You can make a matching facebook page and integrate it to ur site as well.
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    • Profile picture of the author engecars
      The design is very cool.
      You would increase the text size a little bit more and justify the paragraphs.
      I would change the footer background to a dark color.

      Good luck!
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  • Profile picture of the author blogfreakz
    awesome design,,, the design is clean as an apple website, you did a good job dude!
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  • Profile picture of the author Fernando Veloso
    Huh? You're investing Time and Money in a worldwide registered (and known) TradeMark? And you're worried about the site design? You guys crack me up.

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  • Profile picture of the author rockn
    Colors are good - font is a little small
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  • Profile picture of the author sandebdavid
    Not that bad, not the best either meaning there is still room for improvement, especially content wise. My main worry though is why you chose that domain. .co Its relatively new and not so much favored by so many search engines. You should have for a .com, you could have come up with another name if that was already take. But then you already have that so you must increase your efforts in having more content, and if possible include a blog which you shall update occasionally. Thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author shantanu
    wow.... awesome desig but it takes lil bit time on slow connectionn try to make website much lighter so that it will open on slow connection coz it is not necessary that everyone got high connection speed and it will also increase ur range but the design and layout of your website is awesome bro coz u used some HD images which is a wise decision. CHEERS ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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  • Profile picture of the author egrovesys
    attractive design. i could think that while asking one question that if i need to add more in that home page. I decided at the time that the process of home page is not yet completed.

    This is nice to look and you need to add keywords, title and description. Please suit keywords after complete analyzing cause its the main place to run a website.
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  • Profile picture of the author Brendanm
    Design is great, you could add more content though.
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  • Graphics and design are solid while flowing down the page well. The text really pops off the page. One thing I noticed was I only saw the big iPad images and huge text. I tuned everything else out as I scrolled down the page. Might want to test the content and how it is positioned going forward.
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  • Profile picture of the author alexcercel
    Try to make the word "free" in your last title red, make the arrow a bit stronger and try to add a dummy form right under the ipad. Personally, after only scrolling I had no clue how to register
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  • Profile picture of the author memme
    design is well done...really like it
    looks very professional !
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    • Profile picture of the author jacklarry
      Very nice website
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  • Profile picture of the author ritchierich
    Apple centric design... a good thing.
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  • Profile picture of the author cream2cream
    very clean looking site,
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  • Profile picture of the author jhonybravo222
    No your site need more html tags if you want to move in google search engine ranking
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  • Profile picture of the author cassiegetty
    one thing i notice is that you have an image redundancy, try to experiment more. but over all impact - it is very interesting site
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  • Profile picture of the author yasso008
    your text not clear improve ur design more
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  • Profile picture of the author stevetucker30
    Well design site, but need to adjust the content in a proper manner.
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  • Profile picture of the author shoeb000
    design is awesome... try to use few more type of IPad graphics. Its looking as if ... single image was used again and again...
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