Need feedback social marketing site

12 years ago

I'm getting a blank page. Is this right?

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ahew

12 years ago

I like it. I'm not a designer (or even close... I really suck at it), but I'd say it's pretty good. The only thing I'd change is maybe the logo in the upper left. It's not bad, but it seems upstaged by the banner in the middle.

BTW, your URL comes up as http://thevault.bz/redir.php?url=www...lmarketing.com when I click on the above link. Just had to remove thevault.bz etc and then it worked.

Best,
Adrienne

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waqasikd

12 years ago

hmmm,

site is gud but you need to do some seo work on it

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frenchsquared

12 years ago

yep.. site looks good but no seo, not even meta data.

Skip all in one seo and get Yoast SEO for wordpress.

I cant read the black text on the purple footer. Text needs to white.
a white border on the facebook section would fit better with the site.

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jeffrufino

12 years ago

Thanks everybody for the feedback, yes alot of work to be done

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carrot

12 years ago

Overall not a bad attempt.

Im not 100% on the color scheme though, and the logo is not professional im afraid.

The image carousel at the top should be hyperlinked - its the main focus of the page, so when i see a shiny "Get Connected" i would expect to click on it and, you know, get connected.

You have local in your business name, yet no real mention of your local benefits, at all.

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jeffrufino

12 years ago

Originally Posted by carrot

Overall not a bad attempt.

Im not 100% on the color scheme though, and the logo is not professional im afraid.

The image carousel at the top should be hyperlinked - its the main focus of the page, so when i see a shiny "Get Connected" i would expect to click on it and, you know, get connected.

You have local in your business name, yet no real mention of your local benefits, at all.

Thanks for the feedback we are working on the content atm. We are also working on the header.

Thanks

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blogfreakz

12 years ago

Nice site dude, site is simple and clean, also I like the slide too...

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chrisj383

12 years ago

It's not a bad attempt, here's my views as a fellow web designer.

The logo needs alot of work doing with it as the template looks very pro but the logo lets it down a bit.

You've got top marks for your placement of the video but on the right sidebar you should have an opt-in form, these things are important that the end user sees them above the fold, even if they can only see a little bit of them as they will know they are there.

There's alot of spacing there, try and reduce that even if it make it look like there's not much content.

Get some rollovers done for the top menu so the visitor knows what they are clicking on.

Try and place your testimonials more nearer the video as this will improve your conversion rate.

Chris

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jeffrufino

12 years ago

hey guys should I just strap this design and go with
WordPress - Striking Premium Corporate & Portfolio WP Theme | ThemeForest

let me know what you guys think

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jeffrufino

12 years ago

ive updated my site can I get opinion please

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Absolute Logo

12 years ago

I think you got a great looking site. I love the layout and the cool gadgets. The only thing I think you could work on is the top half of the page, everything else looks awesome! Keep up the good work!