Please review my new site-any improvement?

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hi all,

thanks for helping from warriors

my new site which create in dot net. please review my site and welcome suggestions.

organicseofacts.com

thanks
#improvement #review #siteany
  • Profile picture of the author Kingfish85
    At first glance I though the domain was parked. I did run my site through and it gave some relevant information. I would maybe work on the design a little so it doesn't look like a parked page.
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    • Profile picture of the author bizcheers
      really?!

      I really need more work on that. Thanks man

      Joe

      Originally Posted by Kingfish85 View Post

      At first glance I though the domain was parked. I did run my site through and it gave some relevant information. I would maybe work on the design a little so it doesn't look like a parked page.
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  • Profile picture of the author webpeon
    well the function of the site is definitely helpful...

    a few things that jump out at me are...
    1) what the poster above has mentioned, you straight away think youve hit an error page.
    2) theres nothing that tells you what the site is for, what its purpose is
    3) I was slightly reluctant to run my own sites through because of the recent history box, not really sure id like others to see what i am researching
    4) this area here Website Value_Organic Seo_Seo Facts | Awesome Screenshot doesnt really serve any purpose at all
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    • Profile picture of the author bizcheers
      Originally Posted by webpeon View Post

      well the function of the site is definitely helpful...

      a few things that jump out at me are...
      1) what the poster above has mentioned, you straight away think youve hit an error page.
      2) theres nothing that tells you what the site is for, what its purpose is
      3) I was slightly reluctant to run my own sites through because of the recent history box, not really sure id like others to see what i am researching
      4) this area here Website Value_Organic Seo_Seo Facts | Awesome Screenshot doesnt really serve any purpose at all
      Thank you man
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  • Profile picture of the author MattSchoenherr
    bizcheers,
    What is the one thing you want people to do when they land on your site? Use the search? If that's the case, I would Google-fy your site a bit more. The text links above need to be visually separated (try using pipes = | ), and I have no idea about the mess below the search field, where all the URLs are polluting your page. The search tool is nice! But it has to compete too much with the rest of the less important stuff, much of which could be collapsed under one or two drop down buttons.

    p.s.- Is Adsense helping your cause? Or cluttering your site? I understand wanting to monetize, but I think there are better ways for your particular application. Maybe just place Adsense on your search results page?
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  • Profile picture of the author Alexx
    Yeah I agree with KingFish. It nee's some more custom branding.

    You should also have a look at styling the query box to really make it stand out, because in all fairness, that should be the focal point of the page.
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