Please review my seo service site

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i have launch seo service site
Link Building Revolution
what do you think? speed, design, etc
#review #seo #service #site
  • Profile picture of the author JDBradley
    looks good to me, but I would advise slowing down your slider. I can read fast but there's no way I can read the slides even half way at that speed.
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    • Profile picture of the author NiceGuyMedia
      Originally Posted by JDBradley View Post

      looks good to me, but I would advise slowing down your slider. I can read fast but there's no way I can read the slides even half way at that speed.
      for sure, I read super fast and I couldn't read the slider, otherwise site looks great!
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      • Profile picture of the author bamstk090
        Originally Posted by NiceGuyMedia View Post

        for sure, I read super fast and I couldn't read the slider, otherwise site looks great!
        i am still looking ways to descrease the speed
        thanks for your advice
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        • Profile picture of the author Kingfish85
          Originally Posted by bamstk090 View Post

          i am still looking ways to descrease the speed
          thanks for your advice
          You need to change where I put the red arrow in your <head> tag.

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  • Profile picture of the author shantanu
    website looks really damn professional and i support JDBradley's comment u must slow down the slider a lil bit seconds so tht evryone can read and understand regarding that objects.
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    I think the only significant subject must be dealing with Google searching algorithms.
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    • Profile picture of the author bamstk090
      Originally Posted by JDBradley View Post

      looks good to me, but I would advise slowing down your slider. I can read fast but there's no way I can read the slides even half way at that speed.
      Originally Posted by shantanu View Post

      website looks really damn professional and i support JDBradley's comment u must slow down the slider a lil bit seconds so tht evryone can read and understand regarding that objects.
      thanks, i have slow down the slider

      Originally Posted by MariaFrolova View Post

      I think the only significant subject must be dealing with Google searching algorithms.
      yeah, i must think about that
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      • Profile picture of the author Silke
        I agree to the speed of the slider. I start reading the text and before I could finish reading it is gone already.
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  • Profile picture of the author Kingfish85
    This is what I got when going to your site. Tried multiple browsers.... You need to check cross browser compatibility. It's jacked up in FireFox, Chrome as well as Internet Explorer.

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  • Profile picture of the author Lucas92
    Looks like a really nice site, nice and clean graphics and good use of different text
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  • Profile picture of the author Student78
    Hi,

    You could make the content (text) easier for the readers to read & engage with.
    The text can be tailored to aid understanding of what you do more clearly.

    Here's a few tips how you can drastically improve the readibility of your site.

    Article submission page:

    1) Use meaningful headings. 'Article submission' does not tell your reader much. Make it more meaninful. e.g adding the word 'service' to it tells them whats being offered without having to find out.

    2) Use the inverted pyramid concept when writing. Information should be provided in order of importance. Very important as most surfers will skim read.

    There's some information that looks useful in deciding why to use you or your service but its tucked right at the bottom of the page. People may not even get that far on the page. Place the info/content in order of importance (have the reader in mind).

    2) Use meaningful sub-headings. You've used meaninful sub-headings at the bottom of the page but no where else.

    3. Keep each paragraph specific. It starts off clear enough but the 2nd & 3rd paragraph mention the same 2 packages. It would be better to seperate each package in its own parapgraph (with a meaningful sub-heading) e.g Silver package - article submitted to 350 directories. Platinum package - 350 submissions PLUS High PR backlinks.

    minor note. There is a typo. It says backlinks 'form' instead of 'from high pr directories'.

    4. Use the same naming convention. The package is not called silver or platinum in your table.

    Directory submission page:

    1. You've bolded 'LinkBuildingRevolution' too often. It's difficult to appreciate what your saying as the attention is drawn to that throughout. Even if they knew what it meant, it would still play distract / frustrate someone seeking info/solution.

    2. Use better bullets that >>. These are not professional nor are they easy to distinguish from the rest of your content.

    The rules above apply to the other pages too.

    Make reading your site as easy as possible for the reader.

    Oh. On the homepage, the 'order now' button should be a strong colour as it is hard to see. As you've placed it there, you would like readers to clearly know its there.

    If you need anymore adivce, I'd be more than happy to share it with you.

    Regards,
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    • Profile picture of the author bamstk090
      Originally Posted by Kingfish85 View Post

      This is what I got when going to your site. Tried multiple browsers.... You need to check cross browser compatibility. It's jacked up in FireFox, Chrome as well as Internet Explorer.

      Originally Posted by Wassouf View Post

      Same here with my Chrome.
      i have fix that. i think plugin W3 Total Cache cause my site look like that

      Originally Posted by Lucas92 View Post

      Looks like a really nice site, nice and clean graphics and good use of different text
      thank you

      Originally Posted by Student78 View Post

      Hi,

      You could make the content (text) easier for the readers to read & engage with.
      The text can be tailored to aid understanding of what you do more clearly.

      Here's a few tips how you can drastically improve the readibility of your site.

      Article submission page:

      1) Use meaningful headings. 'Article submission' does not tell your reader much. Make it more meaninful. e.g adding the word 'service' to it tells them whats being offered without having to find out.

      2) Use the inverted pyramid concept when writing. Information should be provided in order of importance. Very important as most surfers will skim read.

      There's some information that looks useful in deciding why to use you or your service but its tucked right at the bottom of the page. People may not even get that far on the page. Place the info/content in order of importance (having the reader in mind).

      2) Add meaningful sub-headings. You've used meaninful sub-headings at the bottom of the page but no where else.

      3. Keep each paragraph specific. It starts off clear enough but then the 2nd & 3rd paragraph mention the same 2 packages. It would be better to each package in its own parapgraph (with a meaningful sub-heading) e.g Silver package - article submitted to 350 directories. Platinum package - 350 submissions PLUS High PR backlinks.

      minor note. There is a typo. It says backlinks 'form' instead of 'from high pr directories'.

      4. Use the same naming convention. The package is not called silver or platinum in your table.

      Directory submission page:

      1. You've bolded 'LinkBuildingRevolution' too often. It's difficult to appreciate what your saying as the attention is drawn to that throughout. Even if they knew what it meant, it would still play distract / frustrate someone looking for info/solution.

      2. Use better bullets that >>. These are not professional nor are they easy to distinguish from the rest of the content.

      The rules above apply to the other pages too.

      Make reading your service as easy as possible for the reader.

      Oh. On the homepage, the 'order now' button should be a strong colour as it is hard to see. As you've placed it there, you would like readers to clearly know its there.

      If you need anymore adivce, I'd be more than happy to share it with you.

      Regards,
      thanks for your tips really helpful for me
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      • Profile picture of the author ingenious
        Nice work.. it looks alright on my browser and couldn't spot any errors.
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        • Profile picture of the author tanshi
          Nice looking site, but on your Directory Submission page you have "LinkBuildingRevolution" repeating 44 times - isn't that too much?
          Are you trying to rank for that keyword? Because it doesn't look too natural.

          Tip - for checking/adjusting page speed issues use gtmetrix.com
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  • Profile picture of the author Absolute Logo
    I think your site looks good, however I would change a few things. I would work on the upper portion of the website, such as slow down the slider and also do something with the lined background. I think the bottom half of the website looks really good though. Keep up the good work!
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    • Profile picture of the author bamstk090
      Originally Posted by tanshi View Post

      Nice looking site, but on your Directory Submission page you have "LinkBuildingRevolution" repeating 44 times - isn't that too much?
      Are you trying to rank for that keyword? Because it doesn't look too natural.

      Tip - for checking/adjusting page speed issues use gtmetrix.com
      ok, thanks for your tips

      Originally Posted by Absolute Logo View Post

      I think your site looks good, however I would change a few things. I would work on the upper portion of the website, such as slow down the slider and also do something with the lined background. I think the bottom half of the website looks really good though. Keep up the good work!
      i have slow down. but that the slowest that i can give
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  • Profile picture of the author Benjam1n
    I just took a look (internet explorer) and you can't read the text below "Directory Submission" because it's white text on a light grey/silver background.
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    • Profile picture of the author bamstk090
      Originally Posted by Benjam1n View Post

      I just took a look (internet explorer) and you can't read the text below "Directory Submission" because it's white text on a light grey/silver background.
      thanks for your input
      i will fix that
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  • Profile picture of the author K Meier
    In the footer, don't use all those "verified" and "trust" banners, when you are actually not a verified member of those sites. This will get you listed on WOT as a scam pretty quickly.
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    • Profile picture of the author bamstk090
      Originally Posted by K Meier View Post

      In the footer, don't use all those "verified" and "trust" banners, when you are actually not a verified member of those sites. This will get you listed on WOT as a scam pretty quickly.
      thanks for the tips
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  • Profile picture of the author Computers
    Site very cool. I like it. But feature "Sign Up" not active
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    • Profile picture of the author bamstk090
      Originally Posted by Computers View Post

      Site very cool. I like it. But feature "Sign Up" not active
      that was because jotform is down right now
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      • Profile picture of the author Kingfish85
        Originally Posted by bamstk090 View Post

        that was because jotform is down right now
        Didn't you get the email from jotform about changing the link?
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        • Profile picture of the author bamstk090
          Originally Posted by Kingfish85 View Post

          Didn't you get the email from jotform about changing the link?
          i haven't check my email, so jotform change the link?
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          • Profile picture of the author Kingfish85
            Originally Posted by bamstk090 View Post

            i haven't check my email, so jotform change the link?
            It seems to be back now. I got an email from them yesterday as well as a few of my clients stating that their .com domain was seized by the US government & they were working something out. Not sure what the reason was, but I guess it's fixed now. I had to change my forms & clients forms to jotformpro.com
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  • Profile picture of the author chow
    looks very professional to me. Is that an eleganttheme?
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    • Profile picture of the author bamstk090
      Originally Posted by Kingfish85 View Post

      It seems to be back now. I got an email from them yesterday as well as a few of my clients stating that their .com domain was seized by the US government & they were working something out. Not sure what the reason was, but I guess it's fixed now. I had to change my forms & clients forms to jotformpro.com
      yes, i get emails that i must change to jotform.me

      Originally Posted by chow View Post

      looks very professional to me. Is that an eleganttheme?
      thanks, no it isn't

      Originally Posted by namaserajesh View Post

      Nice website, clean design.
      thank you
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  • Profile picture of the author gpb
    Looks great man. If you figure out how to boost the load speed shoot me a PM. Thanks.
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    • Profile picture of the author bamstk090
      Originally Posted by gpb View Post

      Looks great man. If you figure out how to boost the load speed shoot me a PM. Thanks.
      to make boost load speed you can use wp super cache, wp minify, etc.
      and use high quality hosting like hawkhost
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  • Profile picture of the author stevenukas
    imo it all depends how you are going to promote your service,if its true google then yes you might need all that design,if WF,then I would not even bother,all your info will be laid out in thread. Replicate what other do,I like advertising like seolinkmonster.com its catchy and you feel someone talking to you. It takes time to make this one,the question is ? Worth it ?
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  • Profile picture of the author themetribe
    your site is cool and professional. great!!!
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  • Profile picture of the author vufxteam
    the logo doesnt seem to fit in with the rest of the page
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  • Profile picture of the author bamstk090
    thanks for the advice
    i have slow down the slider
    you can take a look at http://linkbuildingrevolution.com
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  • Profile picture of the author Kom
    Nice Site , Good theme
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  • Profile picture of the author Husacul
    Looks good man, i would go with a lighter / lower contrast background for the slider.

    Good job!
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    • Profile picture of the author ronc0011
      Really nice professional looking site. One problem, the text on the left side of the page is white text aginst a gray almost white background. end result is the text disappears entirely. The only way I ould even see it was to drag the courser across the text and highlite it to make it visable.
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  • Profile picture of the author shantanu
    awesome template good website but looks a bit empty i thinku should fill that thing with some attrtactive content like your social media pages links.
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  • Profile picture of the author kldwarrior
    bamstk090,

    Are you still in business? I emailed you via your Contact Us page looking to use your service, but have not received any replies. Also, your customer testimonies reference a totally different company. Why?

    Please advise.
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  • Profile picture of the author webinpk
    nice site..
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  • Profile picture of the author christinelong
    The site looks great! On the home page, I would personally move the Better Ranks and Traffic, Professional Team & Satisfaction Guarantee to the bottom of the page, so that your main services are highlighted first. I would also remove the title links until they are active. Also, Satisfaction is misspelled.

    Have you thought about putting an order button with each individual service? Perhaps you could link it (jump) directly to the order section of each service page.

    Goodluck with your site! I'm building a Work from Home site, maybe you could review mine at one point...
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