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12 years ago

quite a clean site...

not your usual affiliate review looking site...

Be interesting to see how well it performs

Danny

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NddS777

12 years ago

Originally Posted by nicolas simpson

Hey guys.
I would appreciate it if you take a look at my site i had it for about 5 months now but did not do much with it. It was just there hanging around until a few days ago when i decided to do some work on it. Below is the end result of my work. I just might sell it soon thus i would like to maximize its worth.

please tell me what you think about the physical appearance and also the content?

How about the logo, should it stay or should it go? :rolleyes:

Here is my site Twitter Marketing Tool

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Hi,

In my humble opinion, the content is a bit thin, and needs a bit of work. For instance, the very first thing that hit my eye was the typo in the 4th sentence.

The logo needs to be bigger, bolder, brighter perhaps, as should the order button.

Features and benefits should definitely stand out, and you need a CTA.

Hope that helps.

Good luck!

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Burton Lancaster

12 years ago

To me it looks like a giant affiliate fishing hook, and this thread is the bait.

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Fraser SellHealth

12 years ago

logo is kinda bad , if you want to promote a twitter software look at promoting tweetattacks. its alot better then tweet adder or offer both with a how to guide .

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OsvaldoLuis

12 years ago

Originally Posted by Fraser SellHealth

logo is kinda bad , if you want to promote a twitter software look at promoting tweetattacks. its alot better then tweet adder or offer both with a how to guide .

Originally Posted by NddS777

Hi,

In my humble opinion, the content is a bit thin, and needs a bit of work. For instance, the very first thing that hit my eye was the typo in the 4th sentence.

The logo needs to be bigger, bolder, brighter perhaps, as should the order button.

Features and benefits should definitely stand out, and you need a CTA.

Hope that helps.

Good luck!

Agree with you guys, the logo is ugly, no offence but i didnt like it at all.You should pay someone to make you a professional one, i dont know about the cost but it should be less than $20.

Ok, when i first visited the website, i must say that i got impressed because i readed a little and i wanted to learn more about the product.I must say that you did a good job convencing people because i liked it.

I recommend you to add a little, just a little more information about the features.And also to add more features.A video will come good also.

I really liked the website, the design its really nice!

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Marhelper 12 years ago

Originally Posted by Burton Lancaster

To me it looks like a giant affiliate fishing hook, and this thread is the bait.

I thought the exact same thing. I see so many of these threads and it is pretty clear that someone is looking not to spend money at Flippa!
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wymetto

12 years ago

First off - great marketing - didn't think twice about hitting the link...
now - once I hit the link I found myself looking around - you got my 7 seconds of attention span.....and left - I have no idea what you are selling.....

don't be hat'n - read above again and go check your site again - see it? You can fix this and it will be a great 'SELLING' site...

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OsvaldoLuis

12 years ago

Originally Posted by wymetto

First off - great marketing - didn't think twice about hitting the link...
now - once I hit the link I found myself looking around - you got my 7 seconds of attention span.....and left - I have no idea what you are selling.....

don't be hat'n - read above again and go check your site again - see it? You can fix this and it will be a great 'SELLING' site...

Hmm, i see that you didnt like the design.In my opinion its cool but he needs to change the logo because it looks ugly and haves a bad quality.

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Newyork204

12 years ago

Looks good to me

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rosetrees

12 years ago

I don't suppose you designed the Tweet Adder graphic beside the free trial download. But.
It looks like a multi-pack of toilet rolls to me! Sorry, but it does.

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Bigfoot1

12 years ago

The image on the right with all the features is a bit too low resolution. Doesn't look high quality enough(I"m not notpicking but customers really base their buying decisions based on how high quality something looks).

Create a new sharper image. Thats the first thing I saw in this thread.

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Randall Magwood

12 years ago

Nice site. The logo at the top could be a little better. More sales copy is definitely needed.

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tooAlive

12 years ago

The site looks good; Specially how clean it is.

Although I didn't seem attracted to the logo/images. Here's what I'd suggest:

Keep the 3 little birds; They look nice. But do change the font and maybe the jagged outline of the text. Though definitely the font, it looks out of place with the rest of the layout/template.
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The main banner looks somewhat skewed, and a bit pixelated. The order button also looks pixelated, although I do like the graphics you used for it. I'd work on getting those looking better.
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You have the address misspelled in the footer. Change Forth to Fort (I Googled it), and capitalize the W in "Fort Walton Beach." Little things like that affect the way people perceive the quality of a site. Maybe even remove it from the footer and put in on the About/Contact page. Just a thought.
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Make the Favicon background transparent.

Everything else looks good, from a design standpoint.

I'm not a potential buyer, so I really can't say much about conversions, ect.

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Batou

12 years ago

The logo looks out of place, the color font and that surrounding is off. Also the main banner image is skewed as someone said.

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nicolas simpson

12 years ago

Quote:
Originally Posted by Burton Lancaster

To me it looks like a giant affiliate fishing hook, and this thread is the bait.

I thought the exact same thing. I see so many of these threads and it is pretty clear that someone is looking not to spend money at Flippa!

You guys are talking garbage.
Don't judge my thread because i stated that i may be selling the site soon.

I got a lot of wonderful responses that i started working on already. If you revisit the site you will see that. But never mind i don't need your help, only you two guys fcuk things up with your unreasonable comments. Well then again everyone is entitled to their own opinion.

Not all of us are "professional" thus we really value the help that we can get here.

I was looking for persons to help me, not bring me down.
Ok Mr and Mrs know it all.

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Craftisy

12 years ago

The site could use some work IMo

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BlackWar

Banned 12 years ago

I think logos are not very attractive, anyway don't worry your page design almost OK.

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mikedex

12 years ago

Simple design. Could you make background color something attractive.

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talfighel

12 years ago

Nicolas,

Your site really needs more content.

For me, it takes more then 6 seconds to load which is not so good so you need to make sure that it loads a little faster.

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Azarna 12 years ago

1 - numerous typos make it look unprofessional
2 - you are not supposed to use the word 'twitter' in your domain name, it is against their usage rules
3 - you do not follow their usage rules when you use their trademarks etc throughout the site
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jacob0106

12 years ago

I like the design

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dallas2g5 12 years ago

I think the site does need some more work...especially the information hierarchy.
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