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Need some Honest opinions on my site

by ironwarrior
9 replies
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Hey Warriors,

Give me you honest opinions on this new site I made for my business.
Any comments on design,logo,SEO etc.. would be appreciated.

Some of the content is not finished on some inner pages(FYI)

Assembly services for furniture, treadmills, gas grills or anything that comes in a box. assembly 360 dot net
Thanks,
#honest #opinions #site
  • Profile picture of the author nonin
    seems to be messy - my eyes can't rest and doesn't see the main message
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  • Profile picture of the author tylerherman
    Do you really need the peel-back for your RSS feed? I don't think that many people are going to be dying for the latest product assembly news, but maybe I'm wrong.

    I would try to separate your navigation from the logo and content. Home sits pretty close to "Fast|Reliable|Experts".

    It isn't painfully clear what it is the business does without reading the homepage text.

    Maybe get a new tagline that specifically states "We find you an assembler in your area"

    Your form is really long. Turn first and last into one field. Lose the double email ect.

    Add additional links to the form aside from that box on the right, it looks like an ad and some people will just ignore it.

    There are a lot more but there's a few to help get started.
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  • Profile picture of the author estz
    I believe you have used U-Design template for wordpress just from looking at the homepage, I would change it up as there is many cool things you can do with U-Design. Maybe put a banner on the website that actually screams out exactly what you do as like the others say above it is rather unclear at the moment.

    Hope this helps
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  • Profile picture of the author laurencewins
    Personally I don't like the plain white background. It doesn't help you highlight the key areas of the page. You have some spelling and grammatical errors within your written content. (I am a writer and proofreader if you need someone for that.)

    I agree that you don't need the RSS feed as a peel back. It means the whole page is changed and you have to go back to where you were if you wish to continue looking at the site again.

    I can't really suggest anything else that hasn't already been mentioned.
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    • Profile picture of the author ironwarrior
      Thanks guys for all the great suggestions.

      I agree about the page peel. Definatley going to remove it.

      Also working on a diferent color scheme, tagline and more form links.

      When you ask family and friends they all say how good it looks. So I never am able to get constructive criticism.

      Thats why I love this forum you warriors tell it like it is.
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  • Profile picture of the author stoneyj
    You need to check the content for example see this page Find a Baksetball Goal Assembly Expert in your area today | Assembly360 then read the first paragraph.
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  • Profile picture of the author graphicsbird
    Your logo is good but
    I think You need a graphic header image which describes your product!!
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  • Profile picture of the author arifur
    Menus are mashed up with the header. Also its not aligned with the main content
    Info blocks looks weird. Justify the text and make them same size.

    Thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author GamezFever
    Yeah List Menu has a problem, not align properly
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