Review my squeeze page

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I am about to send traffic to this page www.byyoursidemarketing.com

I wanted some opinions before I do.

And If some one could go through the process on signing up. I have some custom pages That I want to make sure are ok. You can unsubscribe when you are done.

And could I get your thoughts on my eBook?


Thanks
Justin
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  • Profile picture of the author learric
    I think it looks pretty effective overall, your opt-in is showing above the fold so that's good. There's too much going on with the globe on the left side though, it's hard to read the text at first so it doesn't stand out. Otherwise it looks good.

    Grammatical note: In the top left logo you spelled internet with an "A"
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  • Profile picture of the author benjigbird
    template has some issues and need to fix spelling mistakes mate
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  • Profile picture of the author topnichewebsites
    It's a good start but needs work.

    Under the fold - Your checkmark images need to be transparent
    Over the fold - Should actually have the eBook image
    - too much going on which is a distraction.

    If you need any further help I am a PM away
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  • Profile picture of the author whiterock
    According to me its looking pretty good I like the colors used by you and content of the site, professional work done
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  • Profile picture of the author mmrumii
    I don't think that you have done a great job, cause Your site isn't so much attractive.
    I think you should work hard more to improve it. You should use some cool and attractive colors and use some attractive images. Then it'll be looking professional and also user friendly and you'll get a good traffic. best of luck.. go ahead with your great responsibility.
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  • Profile picture of the author adsassist
    I think I finally got it. Take a look and tell me what you think.

    The video does not play. Do you think I should put a video there? If so what?

    Thanks,
    Justin.
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  • Profile picture of the author topnichewebsites
    Look at alot better. You have a few spelling errors.

    Address
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    Information Overload .. hard to read

    Video ... up to you, would have to make one or have someone create one. Suggest you remove it till have something to put in there.

    Also suggest that you double / triple check your spelling and grammer.
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  • Profile picture of the author adsassist
    Thanks for the help.

    I'm really bad at spelling and grammar. But every week that passes the better I get.

    So do you think that the page is good enough to let lose? It is my first squeeze page and want to do it right the first time.
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  • Profile picture of the author learric
    I think you need to get more benefits above the fold. At first glance there is very little reason to sign up and a glance is often all you'll get. The site itself looks a lot better, I just think you will have better conversions with as much above the fold as possible
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  • Profile picture of the author adsassist
    That's why I was thinking of a small video in the upper right corner.

    I'm not a video guy but ill suck it up and make one if it will give me more conversations.

    How would you feel if I where to put up a text to speech video? Explaining the benefits of the ebook and tell them to sign up for free.
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  • Profile picture of the author dconjar
    Could use a major copy overhaul. Doesn't grab my attention at all. Focuses way too much on the fact that you have an e-book, and way too little about what that e-book can do for me.

    I like the design. Here are just a few OCD tweaks that I would make:

    1). Fix the spacing in the header
    2). Increase the size of the form fields
    3). Reduce the spacing between your bullet points
    4). Fix the weird copyright characters/encoding in your footer
    5). Autofocus on the name field

    For the first two, you can use this CSS code:

    .head_2 { padding-top: 9px; }

    input[type=text] { height: 30px !important; width: 284px !important; margin-top: 8px !important; margin-bottom: 10px !important; }

    The third one will require that you move all the list items under one unordered list, and remove the line breaks in between them.

    You can fix the copyright simple by putting &copy; wherever the copyright symbol is supposed to go in the source code.

    Auto-focusing on the first form field is easy to do with jQuery, and it should positively affect your conversion rate.
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  • Profile picture of the author adsassist
    How this Any better
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  • Profile picture of the author ratbert
    Fewer fonts, more color and add some people images.
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    • Profile picture of the author VHSEOMike
      • Change the font of the italic lines.
      • Make it one line: All the information I have researched and you will get it right here in my FREE eBook.
      • Also don't make the points BOLD.
      • I would prefer that opt-in as a modal box in the center..
      • That "FREE" image is distracting me, it makes me think it's a button.
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  • Profile picture of the author twersk
    You also might want to put a phone number on your page. Get a free number at Google Voice and record a message as if you have an office number.
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  • Profile picture of the author adsassist
    There must be something scaring people away.

    I put some traffic to it and no sign ups.

    hhhhmmmm Any more ideas?
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