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Review my Sales Pages at Zodiac-Bracelet.com

by mwright
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Hello,

Please, take a look at the sales pages I made for the site, zodiac-bracelet.com.

Are there any elements that you would add, move around, or delete?

Which sales pages elements would you changed first so they can be split tested?

BTW - The client didn't want the pages to look too "salesy".

Thanks!
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  • Profile picture of the author Greg71
    As a user, I like the heading at the bottom. The font looks like the Apple font. I think it should be the same everywhere the Zodiband brand is mentioned so it's consistent. It should match the font on the product.

    I would also make the paragraphs a full 2 lines or just one. The one word on the second line looks bodgy. Maybe it's because I'm using an ipad atm, I don't know.

    Looks ok though, fairly clean. Just use a better font and sort the headings.
    You've got 3 different heading styles. Use the bottom one imo.

    I'm not an expert, but that's what grabs me when I look at it.

    Hope that helps.
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    • Profile picture of the author mwright
      @Greg71

      Thanks, that does help.

      If by "bottom font" you the one in the company logo, I think it's Century Gothic on PC. I can unbold the headers, and then they'll all have that same weight.

      I could combine the 3 single sentences into one paragraph. I just wanted to make it clear that the bands were 2 different sizes.

      Which word is the "bodgy" one? lol
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  • Profile picture of the author Marcdl53
    It definitely doesn't look too "salesly". Pages look good, well done.

    When I saw your display of all the bracelets I was slightly confused at first. They all seemed the same at first glance. Then I looked a little closer and noticed that each bracelet image had a different zodiac sign. I might zoom-in to the front zodiac sign on the bracelet more. There doesn't seem to be a need to be able to see the whole bracelet in those images as you can see what it looks like overall at the top center image.
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    • Profile picture of the author mwright
      @Marcdl53

      Good point! I do have the closeups already cropped. I can drop them in.
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  • Profile picture of the author Hentie
    It seems that you have already fixed some of the font issues above because it looks good to me. Maybe one suggestion is that most of the site concentrates on "features" and the only "benefits" are on the page when you click through to the specific sign in the the bullit points. Imo the benefits should be more prominent and on the home page.
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  • Profile picture of the author BrentDotCom
    You need a video with a hot chick modeling it. If hot chicks are doing it, then by definition it's cool to do.
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  • Profile picture of the author teguhyuliantos
    I have visit your site. Its look professional, but you can add some information inside your landing pages, such as how to easy transaction that can do for customer.
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  • Profile picture of the author antac
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    Awesome.
    I check your site all is fresh so thanks. Actually your site is looking professional and also informative. Overall I liked the site, it loaded quickly and it's a very helpful site.
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  • Profile picture of the author mmrumii
    Sorry Dude, I can't open your site . cause when I have tried to open it I saw a message,
    "This site is currently unavailable". May be It's under construction.
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  • Profile picture of the author magentothemecoder
    It's not working for me also.. Can not open the site.
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    • Profile picture of the author zotown
      Originally Posted by mmrumii View Post

      Sorry Dude, I can't open your site . cause when I have tried to open it I saw a message,
      "This site is currently unavailable". May be It's under construction.
      Originally Posted by magentothemecoder View Post

      It's not working for me also.. Can not open the site.
      Me too. Wish I could have reviewed it for you
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