Please Review My site

by dayerz
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Hey Guys

can you please review my site and suggest improvements?

Gold Website Design

I want to know that how much you like my site.

I am waiting for your reviews.
Regards,
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  • Profile picture of the author electrickiwi
    Hey - I'd space the slider and the menu out a little bit - I'm seeing a bit of overlap (which I don't think is intentional?) but apart from that, it's a good job!
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    • Profile picture of the author dayerz
      Originally Posted by electrickiwi View Post

      Hey - I'd space the slider and the menu out a little bit - I'm seeing a bit of overlap (which I don't think is intentional?) but apart from that, it's a good job!
      Hi electrickiwi,

      Thank you so much for taking the time you view my site and to post you kind suggestions.
      I'll try to fix the slider and the menu.
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  • Profile picture of the author MrMonetize
    Its hard without sounding rude so please forgive my critique. Its best im honest.

    The logo is poor, the slider images are poor and distorted. The speed on the slider is also too fast, so as your reading the slide its already moved to the next one before I could finish reading it. The slider overlaps the menu at the top or vise-versa. Your font choices for the h1 tags and menu are poor. You havent used h2 tags on the subheading above each service and used span classes instead. Your buttons for the services look poor and are not lined up. At the bottom, you have too many moving sliders. Some go down at the same time as others go up which looks weird. Your services boxes need breaking up by using borders or a background color. I think you need to learn a lot more about CSS and Photoshop, try do some online lessons to gain that knowledge. Signup for this service to get that extra training - Video2Brain

    If your offering web design, then your own page needs to show off the very best of your talents as thats what your customers will see. If you cant demonstrate that then your visitors will just go somewhere that will. There are also a lot of spelling mistakes, you need to proof read everything as this doesn't present a professional image. Please forgive my critique, I dont want to sound mean but you wouldn't learn without getting some genuine feedback. Im a web designer too so im trying to be helpful. There is so much competition that you need to stand out from the rest just to get clients. Don't give up tho, its a learning curve. You'll get there by practising more. I hope this constructive criticism is useful rather than been rude as that isn't my intention.
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  • Profile picture of the author mmrumii
    As I don't have enough knowledge about website designing, Here's nothing problem I think. Cause your site design is pretty much attractive and amazing and enough to engage visitors I believe . To me slider is the main attractive part of your site.
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    • Profile picture of the author MrMonetize
      Originally Posted by mmrumii View Post

      As I don't have enough knowledge about website designing, Here's nothing problem I think. Cause your site design is pretty much attractive and amazing and enough to engage visitors I believe . To me slider is the main attractive part of your site.
      There are a lot of errors on his site. I'm only been honest to help him.

      You have a huge spelling mistake on your own site too, your title is -

      Internet matketing for Newbies
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  • Profile picture of the author senkuma
    first of all i appreciate your efforts in developing such a site and making a step forward. your site load time is quite high. try to reduce home page size.
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  • Profile picture of the author gregkuras
    What i would do :

    - move menu bar to the TOP LEFT
    - Fix these images on your slider - now it looks like you took it from other site , some of images there looks like they been a bit transformed.
    - make a good spacing, interlines etc.
    - Put your contact info - like phone and emai a bit more on the top , so your clients can see it right away.

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    Hope i have helped a bit !

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  • Profile picture of the author kazim
    I think the admin of chat options should give profile picture. By using it I think it will look better.
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  • Profile picture of the author dayerz
    Hi guys,
    thanks for your comments, critiques and suggestions.

    I just redesign my website with new theme, please review it again.
    See how it look like and give your suggestion.
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  • Profile picture of the author zotown
    hmmm logo and header needs serious work
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  • Profile picture of the author DanielDuffo
    Everything alright.
    But i think you should give more attention on menu bar.
    Good luck.
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  • Profile picture of the author vCr8
    It looks good and I like the layout... One thing just seems out of place is the header and top menu because everything below it are quite big graphics and your logo is barely noticeable. One more thing about your logo, it looks quite familiar I just can't quite figure out where I've seen it before.
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