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I need more on my Squeeze Page. In need hardcore critique

by sketchh
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Gathering my list for this MMO. Have a freebie profession guide that i created in a pdf which came out pretty damn well.

I know i need more on this page. It was made with leadrocketpro but something just isn't flowing. Could you guys throw some input down on the necessary changes i need to make.

Maybe some Ecovers or pictures? I tried a video but it just wasn't blowing either. Maybe i should just drop this whole layout? and find another squeeze template.

NOTE: LOGO IS IN DEVELOPMENT




#critique #hardcore #page #squeeze
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      Originally Posted by JaRyCu View Post

      I like the wording in the first one combined with the coloring in the second one if you want my opinion.

      I also hate those squeeze pages that have what seems like 5 bajillion words on them -- I don't read them and I ignore all of it and look at the description and the price tag. I think what you have would be very appealing to me.

      Except I play WoW and I can make 1K gold in an hour.

      -- j
      Haha well in guild wars its different then WoW

      Server: Ehmry Bay Price 1000 G $ 2837.58
      Actually i should probably change that cause thats like way not realistic haha. Or is it an attention getter. Because thats a shit ton of gold. Maybe I should drop it down to like "hundreds of gold or 200 gold"
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