Please Review my Site

MakeMoneyKid · 09-25-2012, 09:58 AM

After gaming, I've made a new blog on Blogging and Affiliate marketing. Will you please review my site especially my squeeze/landing page? Any suggestion is highly appreciated.

http://www.makemoneykid.com

dwoods · 09-25-2012, 10:22 AM

First off, looks nice -- needs some stylistic tweaks but overall looks nice man.

Have you looked at it on a computer with larger screen resolution? Here's how the page looks on my monitor: http://i.imgur.com/jQQIZ.jpg -- and l can't scroll to view the rest of the content. So l'd used fixed height/width instead of %'s of your main content div to prevent this odd adjustment of the layout.

That aside here's a few suggestions:
1.) remove the social bookmark icons. I highly doubt anyone will ever click/use them to share the page - so remove all unnecessary exit points. You want your visitor to join your list - period that is the most important action on the page. At least try a split test with and without the social bookmarking icons and see what the difference is in your opt-in rate. Same goes with the themeforest.net affiliate link.

2.) Make the "enter your email here" field bigger. The red button is huge, so to should be the "enter your email" field.

3.) The blog is nice and clean; post more content.

Good luck!

MakeMoneyKid · 09-25-2012, 10:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dwoods

First off, looks nice -- needs some stylistic tweaks but overall looks nice man.

Have you looked at it on a computer with larger screen resolution? Here's how the page looks on my monitor: http://i.imgur.com/jQQIZ.jpg -- and l can't scroll to view the rest of the content. So l'd used fixed height/width instead of %'s of your main content div to prevent this odd adjustment of the layout.

That aside here's a few suggestions:
1.) Make the "enter your email here" field bigger. The red button is huge, so to should be the "enter your email" field.

Good luck!

The Subscription box is created using GetResponse. How I can increase the email field?

run · 09-25-2012, 10:41 AM

For me it is worst than Dwoods. Here is the screenshot: http://i46.tinypic.com/mauhar.png
As recommend as Dwoods, too for the Subscription box!

MakeMoneyKid · 09-25-2012, 10:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by run

For me it is worst than Dwoods. Here is the screenshot: http://i46.tinypic.com/mauhar.png
As recommend as Dwoods, too for the Subscription box!

What makes it worst? Please specify.

MSC · 09-25-2012, 10:50 AM

Besides the cartoon character, which looks awesome, other stuff (from graphics side) looks a bit old fashioned. Try looking for design blogs for some modern graphics inspiration.

BeautifulWebsites · 09-25-2012, 11:36 AM

This is a cute idea, you will want to resize your graphics so they are not pixelated. Love your domain name.

Your button to go to the website should be more prominent.

JimDucharme · 09-25-2012, 12:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MakeMoneyKid

The Subscription box is created using GetResponse. How I can increase the email field?

HI MMK,

You can't change the individual field sizes, but you can of course change a lot of the attributes of the form itself. Try some different templates or perhaps change the text on the button to read: Enter Email for Instant Access.

Regards,
jim

logocows · 09-25-2012, 12:46 PM

Looks fine but I think the images are somewhat pixelated.

Try changing the layout and have some high quality images / graphics.

Good luck!

run · 09-25-2012, 06:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MakeMoneyKid

What makes it worst? Please specify.

As in screen grab, I could only see that part without any more scrolling. Therefore, I feel lost some words below.

MakeMoneyKid · 09-25-2012, 08:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by run

As in screen grab, I could only see that part without any more scrolling. Therefore, I feel lost some words below.

So it's the resolution issue. Thanks for the feedback.

MakeMoneyKid · 09-25-2012, 08:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by logocows

Looks fine but I think the images are somewhat pixelated.

Try changing the layout and have some high quality images / graphics.

Good luck!

Which images? The header?

RenderTheWeb · 09-25-2012, 09:04 PM

So the site looks awesome and I love the domain name.

Okay so this is what isn't right.

The arrow and the texts are pixelated. Also my display is at 1280x800 and I believe there is a few things missing on the bottom.

http://i49.tinypic.com/28ujscm.png

Hey, off topic here if you're ever interested in selling the domain let me know.

YemTv · 09-26-2012, 02:22 PM

Nice work,keep it up

zotown · 09-26-2012, 07:21 PM

hmmm I like the background image. The optin box doesnt fit and I can only read half the site as there are no scroll bars. Or is it meant to be like that? Text read "to download the ebook"... then the image is cut of and no scroll bars to scroll down?

carolwdesign24 · 09-26-2012, 08:05 PM

The theme is nice but the image is pixelated and the text at the bottom is not clearly see at the screen. However, it just need re-size to view all in the screen.

MakeMoneyKid · 09-26-2012, 09:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by zotown

hmmm I like the background image. The optin box doesnt fit and I can only read half the site as there are no scroll bars. Or is it meant to be like that? Text read "to download the ebook"... then the image is cut of and no scroll bars to scroll down?

Yes it is meant to be like that, so that visitors end up with only two choices: either skip or Download *BINGO*

MakeMoneyKid · 09-26-2012, 09:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by carolwdesign24

The theme is nice but the image is pixelated and the text at the bottom is not clearly see at the screen. However, it just need re-size to view all in the screen.

Can you please mention what is your resolution screen? People here are having problem as their resolution screen is 1280x...

whland · 09-26-2012, 09:28 PM

Nice squeeze page and blog. You definitely have got a great domain name. I love it.

Chad

MakeMoneyKid · 09-26-2012, 09:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by whland

Nice squeeze page and blog. You definitely have got a great domain name. I love it.

Chad

Thanks! I'm very creative, you know

mikedex · 09-27-2012, 01:04 AM

Like your header section banner. Its very nice.

723Media · 09-27-2012, 03:05 PM

You shouldn't set the background to a single large image. That's why it's blurry. Also, if you resize the browser, your image doesn't line up with the design. For example, make your browser window smaller and your arrow pointing to the opt-in box disappears behind it.

You can change the size of the fields in your opt-in form with some pretty simple CSS. In fact, you can just up the padding on 'wf-input' to make the box appear bigger.

The styles are included when you copy and paste your form from GetResponse.

MakeMoneyKid · 09-27-2012, 08:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 723Media

You shouldn't set the background to a single large image. That's why it's blurry. Also, if you resize the browser, your image doesn't line up with the design. For example, make your browser window smaller and your arrow pointing to the opt-in box disappears behind it.

You can change the size of the fields in your opt-in form with some pretty simple CSS. In fact, you can just up the padding on 'wf-input' to make the box appear bigger.

The styles are included when you copy and paste your form from GetResponse.

Actually I don't know how do I add a subscription box over an image and so decided to make that image as the background. However, it is creating mismatch due to resolution issues. Can you tell me how do I fix that? You sound like a pro (as does your Graphicriver portfolio). Thanks in advance

Chelsie1687 · 09-28-2012, 04:53 AM

seems like it needs some polishing if you want honest opinion.

MakeMoneyKid · 09-28-2012, 08:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Chelsie1687

seems like it needs some polishing if you want honest opinion.

Yes don't hesitate to criticize. I want honest opinion

danilion55 · 09-28-2012, 11:41 AM

Nice. attractive domain name beautiful design all things are handsome

keysersoze · 09-28-2012, 01:23 PM

Looks really good Makemoneykid!
If i would have to change anything it would be the header image.
Everything els looks great

chinmoy123 · 09-28-2012, 02:22 PM

Landing page looks great, the only thing I expect some interesting text on the ribbon/banner just bellow the kid.
Another issue is, there is no relevancy between landing page and actual site, except the social media buttons. At least you can turn the green header into orange/yellow.

MakeMoneyKid · 09-28-2012, 09:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by chinmoy123

Landing page looks great, the only thing I expect some interesting text on the ribbon/banner just bellow the kid.
Another issue is, there is no relevancy between landing page and actual site, except the social media buttons. At least you can turn the green header into orange/yellow.

Is it anyway going to affect on my visitors?

etechadvice · 09-29-2012, 01:41 AM

Add an Header instead of Text. Other than that everything looks good. Esp your landing page looks great.

techmaish · 09-29-2012, 03:34 AM

The last banner "To download this ebook" is not appearing on the screen. There is scroll bar that is why i can't scroll down to see what is written on the banner.

Full Screen allow me to view the whole website but normal screen is not allowing me to view the bottom of the website.

MakeMoneyKid · 09-29-2012, 09:29 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by techmaish

The last banner "To download this ebook" is not appearing on the screen. There is scroll bar that is why i can't scroll down to see what is written on the banner.

Full Screen allow me to view the whole website but normal screen is not allowing me to view the bottom of the website.

Now, that's the most different feedback. What is your screen resolution? Are you surfing on mobile?

Dialnfix247 · 09-29-2012, 10:14 AM

you have awesome website, nice look, and design of your sites.

Edk · 09-29-2012, 11:03 AM

Opt-in boxes tend to perform better when at the top right of the page. Best is if you split test: top right vs where you have it. It's not a matter of someone's opinion, then!

kazim · 09-29-2012, 01:00 PM

Very informative and appealing. Colors are great and structure rocks.

Jonas Glad · 09-29-2012, 04:24 PM

For the squeeze page--the image is stretched, you should just make one with bigger dimensions. Also you have to manually remove "Enter your email address here" in my browser...so use some JS for that and instead of "We respect your privacy" I'd write something more appealing.

sohailblog · 09-29-2012, 05:06 PM

Its very informative blog...

MakeMoneyKid · 09-29-2012, 10:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jonas Glad

...and instead of "We respect your privacy" I'd write something more appealing.

That "we respect your privacy" is by default. I'm using GetResponse. I know how turn them ON or OFF but I don't see how to edit that text. Also what do you think I should write in that field?

09-25-2012, 09:58 AM	#1
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09-25-2012, 10:22 AM	#2
dwoods HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Sep 2012 Location: Ohio, USA Posts: 140 Thanks: 8 Thanked 35 Times in 31 Posts Contact Info	Re: Please Review my Site First off, looks nice -- needs some stylistic tweaks but overall looks nice man. Have you looked at it on a computer with larger screen resolution? Here's how the page looks on my monitor: http://i.imgur.com/jQQIZ.jpg -- and l can't scroll to view the rest of the content. So l'd used fixed height/width instead of %'s of your main content div to prevent this odd adjustment of the layout. That aside here's a few suggestions: 1.) remove the social bookmark icons. I highly doubt anyone will ever click/use them to share the page - so remove all unnecessary exit points. You want your visitor to join your list - period that is the most important action on the page. At least try a split test with and without the social bookmarking icons and see what the difference is in your opt-in rate. Same goes with the themeforest.net affiliate link. 2.) Make the "enter your email here" field bigger. The red button is huge, so to should be the "enter your email" field. 3.) The blog is nice and clean; post more content. Good luck!
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09-25-2012, 10:41 AM	#4
run Super Warrior Join Date: Jul 2012 Location: Back to Tokyo! Posts: 507 Thanks: 49 Thanked 61 Times in 59 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Please Review my Site For me it is worst than Dwoods. Here is the screenshot: http://i46.tinypic.com/mauhar.png As recommend as Dwoods, too for the Subscription box!

09-25-2012, 10:50 AM	#6
MSC Andy War Room Member Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 195 Thanks: 3 Thanked 17 Times in 16 Posts Contact Info	Re: Please Review my Site Besides the cartoon character, which looks awesome, other stuff (from graphics side) looks a bit old fashioned. Try looking for design blogs for some modern graphics inspiration.
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09-25-2012, 11:36 AM	#7
BeautifulWebsites Cherie Young Join Date: Sep 2012 Location: Carlsbad, CA Posts: 14 Thanks: 4 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Please Review my Site This is a cute idea, you will want to resize your graphics so they are not pixelated. Love your domain name. Your button to go to the website should be more prominent.

09-25-2012, 12:46 PM	#9
logocows Logo Designer War Room Member Join Date: Sep 2012 Location: Philippines Posts: 13 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Please Review my Site Looks fine but I think the images are somewhat pixelated. Try changing the layout and have some high quality images / graphics. Good luck!

09-25-2012, 09:04 PM	#13
RenderTheWeb Active Warrior Join Date: Sep 2012 Location: South Florida Posts: 66 Thanks: 24 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Please Review my Site So the site looks awesome and I love the domain name. Okay so this is what isn't right. The arrow and the texts are pixelated. Also my display is at 1280x800 and I believe there is a few things missing on the bottom. http://i49.tinypic.com/28ujscm.png Hey, off topic here if you're ever interested in selling the domain let me know.

09-26-2012, 02:22 PM	#14
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09-26-2012, 07:21 PM	#15
zotown Banned War Room Member Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 185 Thanks: 37 Thanked 19 Times in 19 Posts	Re: Please Review my Site hmmm I like the background image. The optin box doesnt fit and I can only read half the site as there are no scroll bars. Or is it meant to be like that? Text read "to download the ebook"... then the image is cut of and no scroll bars to scroll down?

09-26-2012, 08:05 PM	#16
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09-26-2012, 09:28 PM	#19
whland HyperActive Warrior Join Date: Sep 2012 Posts: 214 Thanks: 8 Thanked 32 Times in 31 Posts	Re: Please Review my Site Nice squeeze page and blog. You definitely have got a great domain name. I love it. Chad
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09-27-2012, 03:05 PM	#22
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09-28-2012, 04:53 AM	#24
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09-29-2012, 04:24 PM	#36
Jonas Glad Active Warrior Join Date: Sep 2012 Location: Norway Posts: 79 Thanks: 4 Thanked 8 Times in 8 Posts	Re: Please Review my Site For the squeeze page--the image is stretched, you should just make one with bigger dimensions. Also you have to manually remove "Enter your email address here" in my browser...so use some JS for that and instead of "We respect your privacy" I'd write something more appealing.

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