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12 years ago

Two quick thoughts-

I was scrolling down through the page and it took me a while to locate the action you want me to take.

"Request a Quote" shouldn't just be a menu item up the top, you should have it in a more prominent position on the page too as a strong call to action.

For example, "Expert Work" grabbed my eye, maybe "Request A Quote" should be similarly prominent?

Secondly, the image slider took a long time (5-6s) to load. As it takes up so much real estate on the page I was left staring at a somewhat blank page while it loads. Two things you might consider to rectify this:

1. Make the images smaller files or lower quality
2. Move "You dream it We create it" above the images.

Hope that helps!

P.S. One last thought - it actually too me a while to figure out what you did. I saw "You dream it We create it" and "Helping you reach new heights," but the first mention of website design was the small print "We create interactive, modern, eye-catching websites." That might work better as a leading tagline?

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BreakingRetail

12 years ago

Thanks Rockt!
I absolutely agree with you. Thanks for your input it really helps figure out what we should do next with regards of the visuals on the site.

Originally Posted by Rockt

Two quick thoughts-

I was scrolling down through the page and it took me a while to locate the action you want me to take.

"Request a Quote" shouldn't just be a menu item up the top, you should have it in a more prominent position on the page too as a strong call to action.

For example, "Expert Work" grabbed my eye, maybe "Request A Quote" should be similarly prominent?

Secondly, the image slider took a long time (5-6s) to load. As it takes up so much real estate on the page I was left staring at a somewhat blank page while it loads. Two things you might consider to rectify this:

1. Make the images smaller files or lower quality
2. Move "You dream it We create it" above the images.

Hope that helps!

P.S. One last thought - it actually too me a while to figure out what you did. I saw "You dream it We create it" and "Helping you reach new heights," but the first mention of website design was the small print "We create interactive, modern, eye-catching websites." That might work better as a leading tagline?

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custompsds

12 years ago

Well, I can tell design isn't what you do. I have seen worse however.

The big sore thumb for me is your header and the main image. The content areas are OK.

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12 years ago

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Jonas Glad 12 years ago

I dislike the fonts used, makes it seem somewhat unprofessional, I would re-do the local offer thing too... but other than that it's pretty good.
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- bookworm techie 12 years ago
  
  The font of Local Offer is so big. I suggest you also put images beside the Local Offer. Overall, the site is great
  
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- mikeye 12 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by Jonas Glad
  
  I dislike the fonts used, makes it seem somewhat unprofessional, I would re-do the local offer thing too... but other than that it's pretty good.
  
  I agree. The font used in the menus is a bit hard to read, especially in the top menu "About, Blog..."
  
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JFSG

12 years ago

Nice clean design you have there. However, the portion with "Local Offer" on it is way too empty and the font doesn't look very attractive compared to the rest of the website. Keep up with the good work!

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weboasis

12 years ago

I would "bet" in a more modern logo...

And I don't like the Sitemap in the footer too: the text is too long.

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rahem

12 years ago

u need more work on font style size

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Huy Phan

12 years ago

To be honest, the design is a little weak.
I don't like the local offer image, the text on it is not very readable.
and i don't like the footer image (those green hills) as well.

Also, maybe you should consider changing the font of h2's

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fghaegele

12 years ago

Looks good, but the site loads a little slow. I'll give you some time to optimize it first!

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Sarah Harvey 12 years ago

It looks good so far, but the links on your packages...

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For example...the clickable links that state: Graphic Design or basic design. How about linking to a page to show what a basic design will look like. I know from personal experience that whenever I work with templates or people who create things, I want to see an example...so I don't get all excited and order, only to find out that basic means just one image and text etc. The more specific you are, the better.

Same with graphics. What type of graphics? Examples?

The link for Social Media Marketing. Just make a mock-up ebook cover that looks exciting. Images sell, not just text.
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shaktitanwar

12 years ago

My Reviews:
1) Color combination is poor. Links at bottom of page are hardly visible.
2.) Broken links and images
3.) Font are not appealing and a bit of an eye sore.

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OmiTaylor

12 years ago

Everything sort of looks bold.
Not a fan of that tech font. Illegible sort of.

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