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Please Review My Homepage

by C and E Vincent
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Greetings.

I have recently made changes to my home page based on feedback I received that my site was "all over the place." I was told that it was too busy and a bit outdated.

If you would review my new home page and let me know what is working and what still needs help, I would really appreciate it.

I plan to take the advice that I receive and use that advice to help me craft my other pages.

Any assistance is much appreciated! Find my site here.
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  • Profile picture of the author distrakt
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    Looks good, but why is the content not aligned? I think it would better straight down.
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    • Profile picture of the author C and E Vincent
      Thank you, distrakt and footballfreak. I have aligned the images. Thank you for the feedback!
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  • Profile picture of the author footballfreak
    I agree, all the images should line up under each other. It doesn't flow properly and makes it difficult to read.
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  • Profile picture of the author copilu0
    1) Align the images
    2) Keep the white background on your header like you have it on your homepage
    3) Add a logo and favicon
    4) Keep the same background for your pages and for your homepage.I don't lke that blue color but at least keep it the same on all the pages
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    • Profile picture of the author LWYSIWYG
      Originally Posted by copilu0 View Post

      1) Align the images
      2) Keep the white background on your header like you have it on your homepage
      3) Add a logo and favicon
      4) Keep the same background for your pages and for your homepage.
      In addition to the above -

      1. Create a proper footer. The bottom kind of just stops. A proper footer will make it look more symmetrical.
      2. Keep the same header for all your pages
      3. Make solid distinctions between sections of the site. i.e. the Home Page has quarter or half lines in between each new book genre - should be more solid and obvious there's a change.
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      • Profile picture of the author C and E Vincent
        Thank you, LWYSIWYG.

        I appreciate the feedback. I will work on the footer and the transitions between topics. Now, I am ready to modify the remaining pages. Will keep the same header. Thank you!
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    • Profile picture of the author C and E Vincent
      Thank you, copilu0 and Huy Phan. I appreciate you pointing out the issues with the background. I am going to find another color that is more soothing.

      copilu0, will also follow your other suggestions; though I will have to research favicons as I am not certain what they are. Will also develop/add a logo. Thanks!!
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  • Profile picture of the author Huy Phan
    Align the images, and change the background image to something more soothing.
    Also, maybe emphasize the menu a little bit more.
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  • Profile picture of the author Masinizator
    1) Bad background images... (eyes are tired)
    2) Where is favicon?
    3) More padding for all content from top and bottom page
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  • Profile picture of the author bhmseoservices
    1) Fix all your images
    ---some are so stretched or squished.
    ---Give images a border if they're naked around.
    ---Images need to line-up.
    2) Favicon & Header phone number on top
    3) Longer banner for the header?
    4) Background (keep it a color or gradient that'll fit the page!)
    5) Typography - the site is boring with the text that's there. Make it more engaging.

    Hope it helps!
    Good Luck!
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  • Profile picture of the author zotown
    it is ok. very dated though. look into a more professional, modern design!
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  • Profile picture of the author devaldcool
    A little bit old fashioned designed...
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  • Profile picture of the author seowonder56
    According to me your homepage is looking good, i like the way you have used the colors for your site, I really appreciate your work but you should have a better logo
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  • Profile picture of the author Venkat001
    If possible try to shift to wordpress themes so that your site gets more creative look.
    At present, it is ok but not so attractive.
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