New Website Landing Page

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Hi guys i'm new on warrior forum and i wanted some feedback on my under construction/landing page any feedback would be wonderful.

supahfilms(dot)com
#landing #page #website
  • Profile picture of the author JCoffey
    Haven't seen anything like it, which I do like. Too many people use the same thing these days.

    But overall opinion, I do like it. I'm not sure I would personally use the blue/violet picture, but if you like it, that's what is most important. Don't base a website on what others want, base something on what you want, and what you like; and the visitors will come naturally.
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    • Profile picture of the author invaderzim
      Thanks JCoffey i am thinking of changing the bg image but i am still looking for a good one but i was thinking about putting in a email submit forum so i can build a list do you think that is a good idea.
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      • Profile picture of the author Richard Whyte
        If you want to be list building, you need to have a free gift to give away in exchange for them signing up to your list. Just having a form on the page will do nothing for you. The gift has to be something of value for the people that visit your website
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  • Profile picture of the author invaderzim
    @Richard White does it need to be a real sweepstakes or can you just make something fake or just something small partnering up with a website to give a product key or along that lines
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    • Profile picture of the author webati
      Its looks similar to the other landing page have not any thing new.Also I found your landing page is not showing your main website link.

      Is you have only landing page to promote your services or have business website ?
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      • Profile picture of the author ecofriend
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        Originally Posted by webati View Post

        Its looks similar to the other landing page have not any thing new.Also I found your landing page is not showing your main website link.

        Is you have only landing page to promote your services or have business website ?
        yes , even no inner page link and Content over web page . I found Website landing Page is not Good . What are the feature that a Landing Page Promises are :
        Display What Was Promised
        Display the Best
        Multiple Actions
        Simplicity
        Make You Page Well Designed and Well functional So that visitor love to stay and found What you offer .
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        • Profile picture of the author farahR
          Originally Posted by ecofriend View Post

          yes , even no inner page link and Content over web page . I found Website landing Page is not Good . What are the feature that a Landing Page Promises are :
          Display What Was Promised
          Display the Best
          Multiple Actions
          Simplicity
          Make You Page Well Designed and Well functional So that visitor love to stay and found What you offer .
          Multiple Actions? I have to disagree with that one. A landing page should always have a strong, SINGLE Call to Action.
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  • Profile picture of the author oliviacis
    Originally Posted by invaderzim View Post

    Hi guys i'm new on warrior forum and i wanted some feedback on my under construction/landing page any feedback would be wonderful.

    supahfilms(dot)com
    Where is the site? I couldn't find anything:confused:
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  • Profile picture of the author invaderzim
    sorry guys i made a mistake it's a under construction page i forgot what landing page was
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  • Profile picture of the author Bonek
    There is no call to action. No trust. There are missing some elementary things.
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  • Profile picture of the author Michael Ten
    I think that it looks really nice. Why not add an e-mail opt-in form?

    What framework do you use?
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  • Profile picture of the author invaderzim
    it's just an html under construction page when the site is done it will be a large platform comedy network/blog and i use wordpress always have
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