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Review my squeeze page (bet you haven't seen this before)

by Ttrain
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  • WEB DESIGN
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whats up guys.

After getting some initial feedback on my squeeze page, I did some revamping and changed a bunch of stuff. I've probably spent more time on this than necessary, but I think it's better now. I also did a few things that I haven't really seen before. Check it out and I'd appreciate any feedback you guys could give, thanks!

Link: launchtagg

Hint: (click the rocket)
#bet #page #review #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author Istvan Horvath
    1. Design is OK. Simple enough.
    2. What is this? - You, probably, need a review in the Copywriting forum (because non-design stuff will be deleted here)
    2a. I have no idea what would I sign up for, so I didn't.

    Reminder: you can ask feedback on design, layout, look. Not content.
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  • Profile picture of the author Ttrain
    Yeah I'm just asking about the design of the page not the content.
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    • Profile picture of the author CJWrite
      I love the simple / clean design, but I agree with Istvan - it may be better to tell visitors what they're signing up for.
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  • Profile picture of the author Ttrain
    yeah I'm getting that a lot. I thought between the About page, headline, and that clickable rocket It would be clear. But I guess I have to do something else. Thanks CJWrite.

    Edit: I probably should find A better way to let people know that rocket is clickable because It does give a bigger hint about the site.
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