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Please Review Fanpagewall.com i have just finished it

by Wags
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Hi All,
plaese review my new website for facebook users to advertise their fanpage promotions and products

http://fanpagewall.com

thx wags
#fanpagewallcom #finished #review
  • Profile picture of the author TheContentAuthority
    Wags,

    I like the business concept of your site. There are many things that need improvement here but I am only going to point out a few and let others add to it if they want.

    The first thing I noticed was your text explaining what the site is about. Its great that you have an explanation on the home page however it is one wide paragraph across the whole page. People experience anxiety when they see tons of text covering lots of space and they tend not to read it but skim it. I would condense it into a rectangular shaped area on either the right or left side of the content area. I would also remove the red text.

    Next is your call to action (i.e. “List yours today”). It is also great that you have this front and center but it blends in with the other text because it is the same color and almost the same size. This is what you want people to do on the site. You want them to list their fanpage. This call to action should be a button and it should be the most obvious thing on the page. People should know that this is what the page is for, to click that button and list their fan page.

    Lastly is your global menu. I would just make it more attractive and lose the underlined links.

    Here is a useful post on building an attractive webpage,

    Attractive Website: A Creative Approach for Website Designing

    Hope that helps,

    Shawn
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    • Profile picture of the author Designlove
      the entire site wrong in every way.. hire a web designer! a good one.
      images on site are sqeezed... major no no! to much wrong to explain. Hire someone.
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      • Profile picture of the author freewebz01
        Originally Posted by Designlove View Post

        the entire site wrong in every way.. hire a web designer! a good one.
        images on site are sqeezed... major no no! to much wrong to explain. Hire someone.
        hmm i have to agree! look into the warriors for hire forum and get a pro.
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  • Profile picture of the author kaytav
    Your site seems to be incomplete to me. You should definitely consult someone to make it better. Since it is for advertising your site can attract many people, but first it has to be properly made.
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  • Profile picture of the author chrislim2888
    I don't think this looks good to me. Agreed with Kaytav that it seem to be an incomplete site.
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  • Profile picture of the author moccc
    what is this website's CMS ? is it joomla or wordpress ?
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  • Profile picture of the author bd24x7
    I think your site is not complete .there are some blank space .
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  • Profile picture of the author weboasis
    It is not bad but for example it is missing the favicon image.
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  • Profile picture of the author GBM
    Looks like milliondollarhomepage.com
    You just changed "own a piece of internet history" to "grab yourself a chunk of fanpage history".

    If you're hoping this will go big, I'm sorry to say I doubt it will.
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  • Profile picture of the author DaveGervase
    Unfortunately, I'd say you should buy a theme and start over or get a designer. At least now you know what you want and don't want. Websites often undergo multiple revisions until they are ready.

    Take your time and don't give up.
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  • Profile picture of the author kazim
    I have visited your site. Basically I like your domain.
    I don't like your menubar. I think it'll be better if you change it.
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